BestFrenzy
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Take a look at my story “Shaving the Day with Mom” to get a sense of how I write
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Just another set of eyes would be good. Everyone needs an editorAdding links is helpful.
https://www.literotica.com/s/shaving-the-day-with-mom
One story so far, decent length, a strong opening paragraph. Good rating.
Wildly improbable, but mostly well written. Why exactly do you want an editor?
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