I have a story with the first chapter finished. The rest is written but still needs me to do work on it before I feel it near worthy of being looked at by an Editor. There are six chapters in all.
This first chapter includes straight sex with light bondage, such as a little spanking, nipple twisting, some masturbation and, in a light humorous way, a touch of reluctance toward performing with a sex doll.
There is also the mention of Anal, both straight and Gay and group masturbation.
My story is riddled with desciptive sex but the main plot is about a woman's out of control downward spiral having lost all faith in her husband.
Word count for chapter one - 5,598
I would prefer the same Editor for all chapters if that is at all possible so believe the decent thing to do is to mention that the rest of the story will involve Gay and Lesbian sex, reluctance, anal, oral, cross-dressing, alcohol and drug use/abuse, a little violence (literally one punch and two slaps) and non consensual sex with an unconcious prostitue.
I would appreciate any criticism and advice you are willing to offer.
This first chapter includes straight sex with light bondage, such as a little spanking, nipple twisting, some masturbation and, in a light humorous way, a touch of reluctance toward performing with a sex doll.
There is also the mention of Anal, both straight and Gay and group masturbation.
My story is riddled with desciptive sex but the main plot is about a woman's out of control downward spiral having lost all faith in her husband.
Word count for chapter one - 5,598
I would prefer the same Editor for all chapters if that is at all possible so believe the decent thing to do is to mention that the rest of the story will involve Gay and Lesbian sex, reluctance, anal, oral, cross-dressing, alcohol and drug use/abuse, a little violence (literally one punch and two slaps) and non consensual sex with an unconcious prostitue.
I would appreciate any criticism and advice you are willing to offer.
