Looking for a fellow British reader for a Humour/Loving Wives story.

[TheRedChamber]

I've a shortish 3k story that crosses the Humour/Loving Wives divide (dangerous I know) and I'd like to find someone to give it a quick look over (no editing required) to see if the joke basically lands.

I'd use my usual beta readers, but this time I'd like to find a specifically British reader as I want to see if the British-style of humour lands at home before seeing if it works more internationally.

Am happy to reciprocate in kind.

 

[AlinaX]

I'm specifically British and have some time today.

 

[KentBloke]

I am also a fellow Brit (sunny Kent) and happy to lend a hand!

 

[TheRedChamber]

I'm specifically British and have some time today.

I am also a fellow Brit (sunny Kent) and happy to lend a hand!

Thanks to both of you.
I already had AlinaX's email from previous readings so I've sent it on. KentBloke, if you PM me your address, I'll also send it to you.

 

[000zing]

Writing it for a niche market, are we... people who don't pronounce man as "men"... or Literotica as "Lidderroddigga"..? That kind of ultra-restricted audience? Oh dear.

 

[AlinaX]

Hush, there, Mr zerozerozerozing.

 

[TheRedChamber]

Thanks to AlinaX and KentBloke, I've now moved it over to my usual international beta-readers.

Writing it for a niche market, are we... people who don't pronounce man as "men"... or Literotica as "Lidderroddigga"..? That kind of ultra-restricted audience? Oh dear.

Let's just say if it doesn't work for us Brits it won't work for anyone. That said, the Lidderroddigga crowd may enjoy it on a much more simple level.

 

[000zing]

Thanks to AlinaX and KentBloke, I've now moved it over to my usual international beta-readers.


Let's just say if it doesn't work for us Brits it won't work for anyone. That said, the Lidderroddigga crowd may enjoy it on a much more simple level.

Many a true word...