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[jnibroc88]

Whats plan 4 today?

I am not sure. What should we do?

 

[Beth87]

i've recently started making notes on characters' life histories - nothing too intense, just a bit of background. i found that my characters are 'samey', and that makes them bland.

anyway, good luck with tiffany. nowt wrong with the name either.

I think its because I was writing from the 'my reactions' place. So the character of Tiffany, especially, isn't fully formed. Whereas in my novel, the characters are like little people in my head (sounding slightly insane )

Corbin.. Such an offer! I must think on it

 

[All_n_GoodFun]

Hey

Ive missed being on here

So glad you are back. Look me up sometime so we can catch up hon

 

[geronimo_appleby]

I think its because I was writing from the 'my reactions' place. So the character of Tiffany, especially, isn't fully formed. Whereas in my novel, the characters are like little people in my head (sounding slightly insane )

Corbin.. Such an offer! I must think on it

don't worry about the voices. i actually walk around in public - i.e. the supermarket - and mutter to myself about scenes in stories, magazine pieces, etc. that's insane!

 

[garetho]

i've just read some of the feedback for your novel and it seems to me the critics could also do with feedback - perhaps they want you to write a mills & boon story - "after they had retired for the evening abigail found herself with child" if so follow the feedback, turn your story into a saga and wait for the merchant ivory film. if not then crack on as you are, it's your story and i for one like it. right rant over

 

[jnibroc88]

You don't have that much time Beth. Come with me.

 

[Beth87]

So glad you are back. Look me up sometime so we can catch up hon

Ok lots to reply to

Good..yes i will do so sweetie
Appleby..would you like me to contact my shrink? Lol actually I do do that, I'm just fortunate i keep it in my head
Gareth Thanks Some of their comments I will take on board and some I won't need to.
Corbin..i love quickies. Name time and place

 

[garetho]

i think you should start your stories with
"It was a dark and stormy night"
and finish with
"and they all lived happily ever after"

 

[jnibroc88]

This isn't a quickie. This is just a quick decision. Come with me and see what I have planned, or stay and be safe with all these guys.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

This isn't a quickie. This is just a quick decision. Come with me and see what I have planned, or stay and be safe with all these guys.

now THAT made me snort!

 

[Beth87]

This isn't a quickie. This is just a quick decision. Come with me and see what I have planned, or stay and be safe with all these guys.

I havent had danger in a while...Promise to pick me up on a stupidly fast bike/car

 

[Beth87]

i think you should start your stories with
"It was a dark and stormy night"
and finish with
"and they all lived happily ever after"

Here is a girl named Mary. Mary liked Ben and Ben liked Mary.

One day Ben and Mary decided to give into their growing sexual feelings and Ben took Mary with increasing force over the bed. Mary came over Ben's hard piece and screamed with pleasure as he filled her up with his thick love potion.

Later that evening, as Mary and Ben were cuddling, Ben told Mary about his wife. Mary did not shout or scream though because Ben's wife was her mother.

That night when Mary's mum came home Ben went to bed with her and Mary went to bed alone and they all lived happily ever after! THE END

 

[jnibroc88]

I havent had danger in a while...Promise to pick me up on a stupidly fast bike/car

If we go downhill it will seem quicker! Vroom vroom! Jump on Beth.

 

[garetho]

tremendous, apart from you missed the first sentence

 

[Beth87]

tremendous, apart from you missed the first sentence

Well no because i didnt want that one I have another story for the stormy night

 

[Beth87]

If we go downhill it will seem quicker! Vroom vroom! Jump on Beth.

Corbin unless you mean we are going to be tumbling down hill..then im afraid i cant come. I dont 'do' push bikes

 

[jnibroc88]

Corbin unless you mean we are going to be tumbling down hill..then im afraid i cant come. I dont 'do' push bikes

Since this is the internet I want you to jump on my fictional bike. VRROOM!

 

[Beth87]

better..honey it doesnt have to be real all the time If i wanted reality..id fuck some lazy ex of mine. No, I want excitement and multiple orgasms

 

[jnibroc88]

better..honey it doesnt have to be real all the time If i wanted reality..id fuck some lazy ex of mine. No, I want excitement and multiple orgasms

But, I can really give you that, if you were here.

 

[Beth87]

Realities do change..good point

Ok i really have to sign off before you make me too horny and i start running late. Mr tease..ill speak to you later

 

[jnibroc88]

Realities do change..good point

Ok i really have to sign off before you make me too horny and i start running late. Mr tease..ill speak to you later

I wasn't trying to make anyone horny. Bye Beth.

 

[Beth87]

Take care everyone and ill speak to you soon my sweeties

 

[Beth87]

I wasn't trying to make anyone horny. Bye Beth.

Then it is an ode to your skill (ego), Mr Corbin, that you managed to do so with so little intent

 

[jnibroc88]

Then it is an ode to your skill (ego), Mr Corbin, that you managed to do so with so little intent

I suppose so. Have a good day.

 

[Beth87]

you and your damn pics! Okay..focus..press log out

Have good one hunni