SEVERUSMAX
Benevolent Master
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...is it just me, or does anyone else get negative reviews from people who clearly didn't read their stories carefully and get their facts straight?
I got one such review for Chapter 3 of "Selfish Mom". The guy or gal claimed that I was making women in it "2nd class citizens". Not correct (though I might write a story like that in time, since there are plenty where MEN are even worse off). Instead, I was making "enemies of the state", regardless of gender/sex, 2nd class citizens. That tends to happen in a revolution/civil war scenario (the background for my story to a large extent). Hell, she was even being dominated by another WOMAN!
I got one such review for Chapter 3 of "Selfish Mom". The guy or gal claimed that I was making women in it "2nd class citizens". Not correct (though I might write a story like that in time, since there are plenty where MEN are even worse off). Instead, I was making "enemies of the state", regardless of gender/sex, 2nd class citizens. That tends to happen in a revolution/civil war scenario (the background for my story to a large extent). Hell, she was even being dominated by another WOMAN!