Chimney Sweep
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- Sep 26, 2003
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It's odd how some of my stories go in directions I don't expect. Anybody else have that problem? Anyway, the story started as one of my "How To Ruin A Perfectly Good <blank>" ideas, this one being "Wedding Dress." The idea is a newlywed couple with dreams of adding more people to their bedroom decide to have 2 guys tear the wedding dress off her whilst doing all the naughty things. But, of course, the real wedding dress costs a boatload, so they get a second dress, a cheap slutty thing.
So now the Title is "The Second Wedding Dress" and that's fine, it's no longer as "Perfectly Good" story, but as I write it I get invested with the characters and I want to keep going, so I'm sketching out he further adventures of Noah and Wendy - honeymoon cruise, back home and adding to their play partners, do they hookup with swingers, does she get a bull, does he get a pet, yadda yadda yadda.
I want to name each chapter after a dress. The First Wedding dress is prologue and character development, The Second Wedding Dress is the one that gets shredded and is the hotty hot stuff. The Sun Dress is on the honeymoon cruise, so is The Little Black Dress (maybe - might save that for a party somewhere down the road.) Then Pencil Skirt (something at her office), Mini Skirt (friends get-together, the girls wearing those butt plugs with furry tails, etc,) Bridesmaids Dress, The Apron, The Babydoll, The Party Dress, etc.
I've got enough story ideas to keep me going for years (since I am deadly slow) but I don't have an over-arching series name. The best I have is "Well Dressed." Maybe 'Well Undressed." But that doesn't thrill me.
So I wrote that short novel to ask you fine folks - got any good ideas for me? I know the chapter titles, but what do I call the book?
Thanks,
CS
So now the Title is "The Second Wedding Dress" and that's fine, it's no longer as "Perfectly Good" story, but as I write it I get invested with the characters and I want to keep going, so I'm sketching out he further adventures of Noah and Wendy - honeymoon cruise, back home and adding to their play partners, do they hookup with swingers, does she get a bull, does he get a pet, yadda yadda yadda.
I want to name each chapter after a dress. The First Wedding dress is prologue and character development, The Second Wedding Dress is the one that gets shredded and is the hotty hot stuff. The Sun Dress is on the honeymoon cruise, so is The Little Black Dress (maybe - might save that for a party somewhere down the road.) Then Pencil Skirt (something at her office), Mini Skirt (friends get-together, the girls wearing those butt plugs with furry tails, etc,) Bridesmaids Dress, The Apron, The Babydoll, The Party Dress, etc.
I've got enough story ideas to keep me going for years (since I am deadly slow) but I don't have an over-arching series name. The best I have is "Well Dressed." Maybe 'Well Undressed." But that doesn't thrill me.
So I wrote that short novel to ask you fine folks - got any good ideas for me? I know the chapter titles, but what do I call the book?
Thanks,
CS