Need help with a title

[CherieSin]

Hello everyone,

I’ve spent the last week working on a taboo/incest story centered around a young guy named Ryan, who’s home from college and spending the summer at his aunt’s place. The story opens with him coming back after a night out, only to find his aunt waiting in the living room with his laptop. She’s discovered his secret obsession, incest porn, and more specifically, anything involving “aunts”.

Instead of confronting him in anger, she sees the perfect opportunity. She uses his shame and desire against him, manipulating and controlling him while also giving him exactly what he craves, as long as he obeys her. For her, it’s not just about feeding his fantasies. It’s about finally getting what she’s been missing, an obedient young man to toy with, to tease, to punish, and to break until he belongs entirely to her.

When it comes to the title, I’ve been struggling to find one that really fits and grabs attention. A few ideas I’ve had so far are:

"Aunt Discovers My Filthy Obsession"
"Aunt Uncovers Nephew’s Taboo Cravings"
"My Aunt Finds My Naughty Secret"
"Caught by Aunt’s Forbidden Find"

That’s about all I’ve come up with while writing. I’m definitely open to suggestions if anyone has something sharper in mind.

 

[UncleJunior]

Here's one I was going to use for one of my own incest stories:

"Atta boy"

I let the tags explain the kink and generally use a line from the story itself as the title.

 

[bobb_sledd]

Is there a line or an utterance from the story you could use as a title that exemplifies the theme of the story?

 

[Rob_Royale]

Well his obsession and the new relationship would be secrets so Naughty Secrets would be ideal.

 

[OnlyHappyEndings]

"Confessing My Aunt Obsession"
Let's the reader know what they're getting and hints at the submissive aspect of the new relationship.

 

[Carnevil9]

Aunt Domme.

 

[StillStunned]

My Secrets Aunt Secret Anymore

 

[SteelPoint]

"Shaving Ryan's Privates" (not original, I know...)

 

[TheWritingGroup]

Why does he have to be Ryan?

"Ryan Cub"?

--Annie

 

[PageWriter2]

"Family Obsessions"

 

[sirhugs]

Aunt Domme.

Auntie Domme has a nice ring to it

 

[astuffedshirt_perv]

Aunts in Ryan's Pants

 

[KindredFlame]

family secrets

 

[wwot40]

Auntie’s Ultimate Seduction

 

[TheWritingGroup]

I thought of "Ryan's (the) heir" but it doesn't quite fit.

--Annie

 

[KindredFlame]

The twelve steps of auntie

 

[Wishingbox]

Aunt of Control

A little word play like out of control but involving the aunt

 

[dirk2024]

"Aunt Discovers My Filthy Obsession"
"Aunt Uncovers Nephew’s Taboo Cravings"
"My Aunt Finds My Naughty Secret"
"Caught by Aunt’s Forbidden Find"

That’s about all I’ve come up with while writing. I’m definitely open to suggestions if anyone has something sharper in mind.

It depends on the persective of your story. Some of the titles above are obviously first person (1 and 3). So if you used them, your story (in my opinion) would need to be told by Ryan.

At this point, I like #2. It clearly states what the story is about, making it easy for readers to chose to read it. Ambiguous titles are less likely to get readers.

On this issue, have you put much thought into a tagline yet?

Something like, "An obedient young man becomes his Auntie's toy!"

 

[TheLobster]

If his duties include orally tending to her pussy, I suggest The Aunt Eater.