caleb35
Really Experienced
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- Jul 23, 2009
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You mean, end with "... they did It." and go straight to "The End"Actually that story gets suuuuuuper ambiguous in an interesting way if you drop the last sentence!
Yeah, that's much better... WHY DIDN'T I THINK OF THAT [pound fist on leg repeatedly] Stupid! Stupid! Stupid! [sarcasm]
This is why you always revise before posting, people! [not sarcasm]
EDIT: actually, it could go with a different final sentence: "... they did It. And it was good. The End"
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