How do I write my characters?
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Lifestyle66
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This sounds like you are looking for someone to write this story for you.
SimonDoom
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The key is to work out their motivations.
If the sister is hot, then presumably she has no problem attracting men. So why would she want her brother? What does she see in him? What is it about him or their relationship that makes him the ultimate trophy or conquest?
For instance, suppose the sister and brother are talking and she boasts that no man can resist her -- that all men are motivated by lust for women and can be conquered. But he claims he's saving himself for marriage and can resist temptation. She sees it as a challenge and decides to prove him wrong.
If the sister is hot, then presumably she has no problem attracting men. So why would she want her brother? What does she see in him? What is it about him or their relationship that makes him the ultimate trophy or conquest?
For instance, suppose the sister and brother are talking and she boasts that no man can resist her -- that all men are motivated by lust for women and can be conquered. But he claims he's saving himself for marriage and can resist temptation. She sees it as a challenge and decides to prove him wrong.
Carnevil9
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Show, don't tell. If the sister is supposed to be manipulative, show her manipulating someone, for something trivial. Show that it is second nature to her to manipulate people without barely giving it a thought. Then when it comes time in the story for the Big Manipulation, it will make perfect sense to the reader why she is doing it.
Bramblethorn
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Not seeing the parallel, beyond the "manipulative" bit. I don't think Dangerous Liaisons had an incest angle, though Cruel Intentions made the schemers step-siblings.
