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[HardFelt]

I require additional information regarding the way of describing a woman's breasts in the most erotic format possible. The problem that I have observed with many authors is the use of crass wordage which may be appropriate but sometimes detracts from the story because the word describing a woman's breast was usely used to be a derrogatory or humiliating description. Because the crass wordage is constantly being used it is difficult to express the needed exta punch in a crises situation depcited in the story.
Any and all comments are appreciated.

 

[TxRad]

Uh, what crass wordage are you referring to?

 

[PennLady]

Perhaps you could try not so much a physical description in terms of cup size or nipple color, but more what the observer thinks or feels in response. How does that person feel when looking at them? What do they think of?

Comparisons could be helpful -- are they large or small, and as compared to what? Is the skin as smooth as silk?

Erotic is different for every person. Some will find the crass words you mention arousing, others won't, and it depends on the type and tone of your story.

 

[bashfullyshameless]

Came here to say everything PennLady already said. Man, she's good!

...and I'm totally not talking about her breasts, which I've never seen nor oggled but respect as individuals.

 

[sun_sea_sky]

Try looking up "boobs" in the Urban Dictionary. It might give you some ideas. This definition is helpful:

boobs

A mind control device for women to use against men.


Girl: Hey can you give me the answers to this test?

Nerd boy: No thats against the rules.

Girl: Pleeeeeaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeee??? *unbuttons shirt*

Nerd boy: OK!!!! No.1 is b *Goes on and on*

Girl: Thanks, your sooooo smart *wink*

 

[sun_sea_sky]

And here:

( .Y. )

My work here is done. Nothing crass there.

 

[Bramblethorn]

I require additional information regarding the way of describing a woman's breasts in the most erotic format possible. The problem that I have observed with many authors is the use of crass wordage which may be appropriate but sometimes detracts from the story because the word describing a woman's breast was usely used to be a derrogatory or humiliating description. Because the crass wordage is constantly being used it is difficult to express the needed exta punch in a crises situation depcited in the story.
Any and all comments are appreciated.

Took me a little while to parse this, but I think you're asking for something that's a bit more classy than "tits" or "boobs"?

Me, I mostly just use "breasts". If I need to give more detail, I might combine it with a suitable adjective, but sometimes simplicity is best. In a text story, "erotic" sometimes has more to do with how they come into the story (glimpsed furtively? slowly revealed to a lover?) than with their shape.