hello everyone,
I have written a story and I would really like some Feedback on my work i.e. my writing style and etc. i have already received plenty negative comments for the theme of the story, so don't be hesitant if u want to give a piece of ur mind, I have learnt to handle criticism.
All being said, here's the link: http://www.literotica.com/s/my-mother-an-introduction
N.B.- PLEASE READ THE WARNING AT THE TOP. YOU DON'T HAVE TO READ MY STORY IF IT'S NOT UR TYPE.
I have written a story and I would really like some Feedback on my work i.e. my writing style and etc. i have already received plenty negative comments for the theme of the story, so don't be hesitant if u want to give a piece of ur mind, I have learnt to handle criticism.
All being said, here's the link: http://www.literotica.com/s/my-mother-an-introduction
N.B.- PLEASE READ THE WARNING AT THE TOP. YOU DON'T HAVE TO READ MY STORY IF IT'S NOT UR TYPE.
