Hello. I've read the resource area guides, and am about ready to submit a story...

[rikaaim]

Before I do, can I ask a few volunteers to read it so I can get some personal feedback? It's somewhat long. Let me give a brief description. It's about a college girl who fantasizes about her wedding night at home. Anyone interested? Anytype of help would be great since this will be my first sumbmission. I know there is a volunteer edit program, but I just really need a few quick reviews. I can send it e-mail by pasting or however if you are interested.

 

[rikaaim]

If you are interested and I'm not around, PM me and I'll respond as soon as I get it.

 

[BlackShanglan]

You might actually get a better response on the story feedback thread. I would jump in myself, but I am about to get hit with a TON of work *cringe*

Shanglan

 

[rikaaim]

You might actually get a better response on the story feedback thread. I would jump in myself, but I am about to get hit with a TON of work *cringe*

Shanglan

Thank you. I didn't knew that there was a feedback thread. One of these days I'll stop showing my newness. *covers self up with a big blanket.

 

[carsonshepherd]

actually it's a feedback forum. Go to main literotica forums and look for it.

 

[minsue]

*covers self up with a big blanket.

Oh, that's definitely not allowed around here.

Welcome!

 

[rikaaim]

Oh, that's definitely not allowed around here.

Welcome!

Well, I feel like an ass for not knowing enough to just look at what the post boards say. I do thank those who guide me in the right direction, besides it's a fun blanket. You don't know who's under here with me.

 

[BlackShanglan]

actually it's a feedback forum.

*smacks head* Of course it is.

Look at it this way, rikaaim ... at least you have an excuse Besides, you also have a blanket and a sense of humor. I find I rather like you.

Shanglan

 

[carsonshepherd]

I have a blankie. It has a horsie on it and a man sleeping under it.

 

[rikaaim]

*smacks head* Of course it is.

Look at it this way, rikaaim ... at least you have an excuse Besides, you also have a blanket and a sense of humor. I find I rather like you.

Shanglan

I thank you. You have to have a sense of humor, it's what makes the world your plaything. The world can either own you, or you can own it and make it your playground. I choose to have fun.

 

[rikaaim]

I have gotten more responses here anyway. You guys in AH are pretty cool. I'm also hanging out in the GB. The thing I love most about this place is that everyone just loves to have fun, oh, and haze the new guy. *removes haze from above head

 

[BlackShanglan]

I have a blankie. It has a horsie on it and a man sleeping under it.

That sounds idyllic.

Shanglan

 

[carsonshepherd]

That sounds idyllic.

Shanglan

It would be if he'd wake up and give me some action.

 

[BlackShanglan]

It would be if he'd wake up and give me some action.

The man, or the horse?

 

[rikaaim]

Well, I'm gonna go see if someone at feedback respondes. Probably not.

 

[rikaaim]

Well, I'm gonna go see if someone at feedback respondes. Probably not.

Nope. No response. It's so sad that I have to quote myself. Eh, but if I don't who will? Right? RIGHT?!

 

[BlackShanglan]

Well, I'm gonna go see if someone at feedback respondes. Probably not.

Best of luck.

 

[TheEarl]

I thank you. You have to have a sense of humor, it's what makes the world your plaything. The world can either own you, or you can own it and make it your playground. I choose to have fun.

I like this guy already. Welcome to the AH Rikaaim.

The Earl

 

[logophile]

*smacks head* Of course it is.

Shanglan

I'm sitting trying so hard to figure out how a horse would smack it's own head. Unless maybe you smack it *into* something...

 

[rikaaim]

I like this guy already. Welcome to the AH Rikaaim.

The Earl

Thanks The Earl. May I have a piece of your lovely toast, as made tempting by your ad like avie?

 

[rikaaim]

I'm sitting trying so hard to figure out how a horse would smack it's own head. Unless maybe you smack it *into* something...

Sometimes you just have to quit thinking, and start testing. *gets horse, gets tools*
Time to go to work.

 

[BlackShanglan]

I'm sitting trying so hard to figure out how a horse would smack it's own head. Unless maybe you smack it *into* something...

Very carefully ... these metal shoes are a real sod sometimes ...

 

[rikaaim]

I'm off for the night. Yasumi nasai. Ki o tsukete kudasai.