Harper’s Reckoning

[EmilyMiller]

Oh and this from some repressed, cis-normative asshole:

by NoTalentHack on 47 minutes ago

Kinky as usual, and lovely as always. Thanks for dipping your toe in here, Em!

 

[EmilyMiller]

Oh, I’m sure the anon comments will be fine, but I absolutely savaged you.

You can savage… oh wait that’s not an appropriate way for a mistress to address her sugar daddy.

Em

 

[EmilyMiller]

haha! that was me!

I did wonder

Em

 

[NoTalentHack]

You can savage… oh wait that’s not an appropriate way for a mistress to address her sugar daddy.

Em

LOL I can’t even afford to keep myself in the lifestyle I’m accustomed to, much less anyone else. I’m a sugar second cousin, at best.

 

[onehitwanda]

LOL I can’t even afford to keep myself in the lifestyle I’m accustomed to, much less anyone else. I’m a sugar second cousin, at best.

red-headed second sugar-cousin?

 

[EmilyMiller]

Anonymous9 minutes ago
this and nearly every story you have is self absorbed garbage. do you need attention that bad? you know this story does not belong in this category. you must not be getting fucked well out in the real world to be so desperate for followers and comments you put a [spoiler] story into LW. its a shame because it seems like you might be a decent writer if you weren't so obsessed with licking your own asshole

wish there was a rating lower than one star

Ad hominem much? I think I’d quite like to be able to lick my own asshole though. Em

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ImNotanAnon9 minutes ago
When you get praise from NeuturedGrendelpuppy, you know you're not only in the wrong category, but you're posting here for bait.

You'll get the usual, "Wrong category", comments...but I suspect you already knew that and planned it that way.

Ah yes, my master plan. Twirls mustache. Em

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Anonymous7 minutes ago
Well done.

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Anonymous7 minutes ago
Great story with a great twist at the end. I do not know why the complaints about being in the wrong category when many of the diatribes in "Loving wives" are anything but loving wives and at the end of the day Harper is a wife.

Not sure about the title "HARPER’S RECKONING" it was [spoiler] Still an excellent story.

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Anonymous7 minutes ago
Nice twist that [spoiler]. The LW category threw that angle off.It caught me off guard. Slow beginning, but it was well worth reading to the end. *****

 

[EmilyMiller]

Anonymous18 minutes ago
Wonderful offbeat LW story! Thank you so much for sharing your creativity. 5 stars

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Anonymous18 minutes ago
I will give you credit for trying to include a twist, although you mostly failed by trying way too hard to keep from [spoiler]

Sadly, that's all the good I can really say about this. The writing style sucked. The category you chose was not the best (or even second best) for this story. Your tags were only 2/3 correct. I also took a look at your list of works and can clearly see that you have serious issues. Not everything is a series. I'm guessing you're a bit anal retentive and allow that impulse to override your intellect, which would also explain a lot about the poor writing style and category choices.

I'm not saying it's a bad story. I'm just saying that the way you presented it lowers it's value, kind of like serving a gourmet meal on a dirty plate. As presented, it struggles to earn a 2. Presented properly, it would be an easy 3 and might even garner a 4.

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muskyboy18 minutes ago
Fix the tags.

That’s how you talk to women apparently - Em

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Southdown16 minutes ago
Very well put-together tale cleverly disguised [spoiler].. Not my usual first choice story but being blind-sided somewhat made it OK. I have no prejudices only preferences and I prefer a well written story to a cookie-cutter job, well done Emily and I love your picture, very sexy.

 

[NoTalentHack]

Southdown16 minutes ago
Very well put-together tale cleverly disguised [spoiler].. Not my usual first choice story but being blind-sided somewhat made it OK. I have no prejudices only preferences and I prefer a well written story to a cookie-cutter job, well done Emily and I love your picture, very sexy.

I never get told my icon is sexy.

 

[EmilyMiller]

I never get told my icon is sexy.

Your icon makes me so wet. I want to have your icon’s babies.

Em

 

[EmilyMiller]

I was reading an Atlantic article covering polling about attitudes to racial minorities, women and LGBQT+ people and how they have deteriorated in recent years. Or more it’s now OK to say what people only thought before. Without getting too political, it seems pertinent.

I do feel bad for all those elderly cis folk embattled by militant lesbians.

Em

 

[EmilyMiller]

I was reading an Atlantic article covering polling about attitudes to racial minorities, women and LGBQT+ people and how they have deteriorated in recent years. Or more it’s now OK to say what people only thought before. Without getting too political, it seems pertinent.

I do feel bad for all those elderly cis folk embattled by militant lesbians.

Em

And the - you are here to corrupt and steal our readers - comments are very illuminating.

Lock up your womenfolk, there’s lesbians around.

Em

 

[EmilyMiller]

And very deeply held beliefs that a lesbian wife is not a wife, whatever the law and common decency might say.

Let me just check the year again. Yup, starts 20, not 18.

Em

 

[EmilyMiller]

https://imgur.com/a/rlYsJOr

I made it to three! That’s like six in normal places, right? Champagne all round.

Em

 

[lc69hunter]

Love this thread. I quite often waste time and brainspace just reading stupid inane comments on stories.

 

[Djmac1031]

LOL I can’t even afford to keep myself in the lifestyle I’m accustomed to, much less anyone else. I’m a sugar second cousin, at best.

I'm a Sugar Redheaded Stepchild.

 

[Djmac1031]

red-headed second sugar-cousin?

Dammit you beat me to that joke.

 

[EmilyMiller]

Still more vitriol to come I assume, but overall I was pleasantly surprised by the number of positive comments. Was expecting close to 100% of non-AH comments to be negative. That didn’t happen. Seems like LW is a house divided against itself.

Em

 

[EmilyMiller]

Dammit you beat me to that joke.

She’s very quick isn’t she?

Em

 

[Djmac1031]

She’s very quick isn’t she?

Em

I'm very late to this party, to be fair.

 

[onehitwanda]

She’s very quick isn’t she?

Em

I can also be very slow.

 

[MajorRewrite]

Still more vitriol to come I assume, but overall I was pleasantly surprised by the number of positive comments. Was expecting close to 100% of non-AH comments to be negative. That didn’t happen. Seems like LW is a house divided against itself.

Em

LW has never been 100% negative, and I doubt you’ll get a lot more bad comments. Probably just a few more “wrong category“ comments which are pretty bland. In my 2 LW stories the cheaters prosper and the lunatic responses are still only a small percentage of the total.

 

[EmilyMiller]

I can also be very slow.

Don’t start again. Sorry, that was meant to read, don’t stop.

Em

 

[ExploringSoul]

"If it was in fetish would give it a 5. Since it is in loving wives I give it a three."

I find it touching how much that comment reveals about the emotional state of the poster. Makes me want to hug them and tell them it's ok.

 

[TheRedChamber]

Not narcassistic enough to start my own thread, but contrarian enough to hijack someone elses...

My own LW with a twist story was published today: Goodbye, My Young Hot Wife.

In someway similar to Emilys, although clearly [redacted] was as far away from being a [redacted] as it is possible to be.

"If it was in fetish would give it a 5. Since it is in loving wives I give it a three."

I was hoping that that very first comment would be someone telling me that a story where the main character is [redacted] doesn't belong in Loving Wives. Unfortunately @Smuttyandfun got in first with a nice comment making the 'wrong category' comment second. Oh well ;-)

 

[Rob_Royale]

Just finished the story. Very entertaining.
Don't look now though, but the category nazis are after ya.