Harper’s Reckoning

[EmilyMiller]

Not narcassistic enough to start my own thread, but contrarian enough to hijack someone elses...

My own LW with a twist story was published today: Goodbye, My Young Hot Wife.

In someway similar to Emilys, although clearly [redacted] was as far away from being a [redacted] as it is possible to be.


I was hoping that that very first comment would be someone telling me that a story where the main character is [redacted] doesn't belong in Loving Wives. Unfortunately @Smuttyandfun got in first with a nice comment making the 'wrong category' comment second. Oh well ;-)

Will have to check it out - when I have time.

Em

 

[EmilyMiller]

by djrip on 14 hours ago

Great twist! No, the other one.

Everyone's so tall!

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by JimmyThePlunger on 13 hours ago

Thank you Emily, far from the usual LW offering but really beautifully written in my opinion and an interesting story, two betrayals and hopefully one big reasonably happy ending. Well done.

I've just seen your comment on mot having deleted a single comment. We've written a similare number of stories so I'm only saying this as a relative equal. Don't delete comments, if someone rrads your story let them comment no matter hwo mean they appear. I've had one Anon who would like me to be kicked to death in an alley - so what, jsut someone venting, let them, I usually laugh at most comments good or bad.

Whatever you decide for you, is fine, that's just my opinion, thanks again, excellent story.

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by JimmyThePlunger on 13 hours ago

Ooops sorry my dyslexia shining through

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by usaret on 13 hours ago

Wrong category, s/b [spoiler]

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by Djmac1031 on 12 hours ago

I appreciate the mention, but I don’t recall adding much beyond warning you of the potential blowback and encouraging you to go with it anyway .

As usual, great work.

I'd love to stick around, but I've got a bee allergy and you've kicked up quite the hornets nest.

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by SplitGeode66 on 8 hours ago

Disappointed by this story. I don't typically read [spoiler] stories. Thus, I felt used by the author's placement of the story in LW. I was kind of bored by much of the story, but I try to finish every story I start. 2 stars

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by jrgg43 on 7 hours ago

Jumping into the fray. This is a very good story, and the twists work well. I was entertained, turned on, and happily surprised by the stories change of direction. Please keep up the writing standard and thank you.

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by Rob_Royale on 2 hours ago

Fun and sexy with an interesting twist at the end. Well done.

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by OOAA on 1 hour ago

Nice and hot story! Well written!! 5 stars!

 

[panaflora]

"Oh well. Fixed venison submitted and all will bw rectified in time.

Em"

I see what you did there.

 

[EmilyMiller]

Last two that I’m going to bother with, the overall pattern is very easy to discern:

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by 26thNC on 40 minutes ago

Not nearly as cute as you thought it was.

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by Anonymous user on 33 minutes ago

Very well executed. Terrific story

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[EmilyMiller]

"Oh well. Fixed venison submitted and all will bw rectified in time.

Em"

I see what you did there.

I’m not sure I do .

Em

 

[panaflora]

I’m not sure I do .

Em

I look forward to the fixed venison