Halloween Support Thread

my Halloween Dressup is a sprawling kinky crossdressing tale, perhaps not quite Hallloweenish enough, so likely no threat to win either the contest or the last place consolation. But then, I just enter to get exposure to new readers.
 
English Lady said:
Lucky Rumply! I'm one number down from you...if I hit the magic 69 -does that mean we'll be doing it together? :p
EL,

I should be so lucky.

You're going to love this. Within hours of my making that post about Eric pushing me back to 69 votes, I got a one-bomb. Cost me about .04 or .05 on the score and left me with 70 votes.

You gotta love our trolls, they're so predictable. :rolleyes:

Rumple Foreskin :cool:
 
Unsung Muse said:
I'd be delighted with some constructive criticism, if anyone can spare the time. I realize it's weak on the Halloween end... looking to improve, overall.

"A Fissure In The Ice"


welllllll m'dear.. I believe I left ya a lil... after 5 bombing yer story that is.
 
Unsung Muse said:
I'd be delighted with some constructive criticism, if anyone can spare the time. I realize it's weak on the Halloween end... looking to improve, overall.

"A Fissure In The Ice"

It's not weak at all! Very erotic piece of work. Much better than my first piece here.

And there doesn't have to be a supernatural element for it to be a Halloween story.

You did great, muse.
 
muse, my halloween story has some people dressed up and thats about my only nod to halloween, it seems not to be holding it back too much!

Yours is a great story, and fits in the ocntest perfectly :)
 
Feedback has been rolling in...
thank you so much!

(also just experienced my very first nasty anonymous "bombing", ouch)
 
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I absolutely love Sirhugs' Story!

Extremely erotic, even if you don't respond to the category (I often don't). Unfortunately, Sirhugs has chosen not to allow public comments, so I am commenting here. You sir, are a genius. I stand completely awed by this truly outstanding story!

Sack :nana:
 
It's got to be because of the Halloween contest.

Many of my other stories are now collecting votes and comments.

I gotta enter these things more often.
 
sack said:
Extremely erotic, even if you don't respond to the category (I often don't). Unfortunately, Sirhugs has chosen not to allow public comments, so I am commenting here. You sir, are a genius. I stand completely awed by this truly outstanding story!

Sack :nana:

thank you. thank you. I chose not to allow public comments because thetrolls would drive me nutz, but praise is always appreciated.
 
sirhugs said:
thank you. thank you. I chose not to allow public comments because thetrolls would drive me nutz, but praise is always appreciated.

I believe most trolls don't leave comments, not even anonymously. They just drop their one-bombs and slink away. :mad:
 
Boxlicker101 said:
I believe most trolls don't leave comments, not even anonymously. They just drop their one-bombs and slink away. :mad:

Hey everyone :) I think this is my first post here in this category or whatever u wanna call it. But anyhow Boxlicker I gave someone in the contest a trollish vote and I left him a nasty comment with my name attached :p I'm surprised I didn't get slammed for that one. But seeing how many anonymous people have a bad opinion to leave, I figured I would give the author that chance to lash out at me in person. After all, if you really believe in your comment that you've left than why shouldn't you leave a name?

Anyhow, hope everyone's havin a good day/night :)

Ali
 
rgraham666 said:
It's got to be because of the Halloween contest.

Many of my other stories are now collecting votes and comments.

I gotta enter these things more often.

People vote for your stuff cuz Abyss was hella good and they know the rest of your stuff is:D Seriously when I started reading Lit stories I must have been reading the lowest stuff cuz somehow I developed the opinion that most people couldn't write. Which is why my first story sucked :rolleyes: But y'all are awesome authors! I dunno how I'm sposed to keep up :D I can see I'm not gonna be winning any contests anytime soon lol
 
Aliyahlovinsex said:
Hey everyone :) I think this is my first post here in this category or whatever u wanna call it. But anyhow Boxlicker I gave someone in the contest a trollish vote and I left him a nasty comment with my name attached :p I'm surprised I didn't get slammed for that one. But seeing how many anonymous people have a bad opinion to leave, I figured I would give the author that chance to lash out at me in person. After all, if you really believe in your comment that you've left than why shouldn't you leave a name?

Anyhow, hope everyone's havin a good day/night :)

Ali
Ali

Acutally I commend you for leaving a trollish comment under your own name. If you feel that way and you admit it... then it isn't a troll vote but rather legitimate criticism. I never object to negative feedback (except those who chose to comment about personal violence they'd like to inflict on me for my story).

Trolls are not those with real comments... they are those who come in several categories 1. other writers who want YOUR boat to develope a major leak while theirs still floats. 2. Those who object to the category or this site's content who just maliciously try to blow holes in every story. 3. Those that hate YOU and are interested in doing YOUR story harm just because of who you are. 4. Just pure maliciousness.

I have no problem with anyone who is honest. If they really hated it enough to deserve a 1 bomb.. that is a legitimate vote... If they then tell you why (even if it's negative) I find that useful criticism.. NOT a troll. A troll zaps you for reasons OTHER than the content or quality of your work (like my raw typing withouth a spell checker).

Dream
 
Boxlicker101 said:
I believe most trolls don't leave comments, not even anonymously. They just drop their one-bombs and slink away. :mad:
With the exception being in Loving Wives. They sure do stir up easy in there. :D
 
dreampilot79 said:
Ali

Trolls are not those with real comments... they are those who come in several categories 1. other writers who want YOUR boat to develope a major leak while theirs still floats. 2. Those who object to the category or this site's content who just maliciously try to blow holes in every story. 3. Those that hate YOU and are interested in doing YOUR story harm just because of who you are. 4. Just pure maliciousness.

Dream
DP,

You forgot about, 5. All of the above.

Ali, this is strictly IMH) and "for what it's worth" stuff. If I'm going to lay something negative on a writer's story, I do it by PM or e-mail. Some people don't deal well with public criticism and sometimes it can lead to a others piling on. That said, most AH folks welcome any feedback.

SirHugs, I agree with everyone else, your story was first-rate. I also agree with Box that trolls seldom leave PC's, and if they do, well, it's a snap to delete those suckers.

Geronimo, you're right about Loving Wives. That category is a minefield.

EL, my heart, among other body parts, grieves over our being one shy of having a perfectly matched score on 69. Maybe after the next sweep.

Muse and Ali, I'm looking forward to reading your entries.

Rumple Foreskin :cool:
 
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dreampilot79 said:
Trolls are not those with real comments... they are those who come in several categories 1. other writers who want YOUR boat to develope a major leak while theirs still floats. 2. Those who object to the category or this site's content who just maliciously try to blow holes in every story. 3. Those that hate YOU and are interested in doing YOUR story harm just because of who you are. 4. Just pure maliciousness.

So far, all of my PC's have been positive, not just in the contest, but in my other stories as well.

Tomorrow is the last day of the contest, I'll be glad most of the nastiness will be over, but I will miss the camraderie (sp?) in this thread.
It's been a wonderful opportunity for me to have met so many of you I didn't know before, and to make some new friends. In that respect, I've already come out a winner. Thanks all!
 
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dreampilot79 said:
Ali

Acutally I commend you for leaving a trollish comment under your own name. If you feel that way and you admit it... then it isn't a troll vote but rather legitimate criticism. I never object to negative feedback (except those who chose to comment about personal violence they'd like to inflict on me for my story).

Trolls are not those with real comments... they are those who come in several categories 1. other writers who want YOUR boat to develope a major leak while theirs still floats. 2. Those who object to the category or this site's content who just maliciously try to blow holes in every story. 3. Those that hate YOU and are interested in doing YOUR story harm just because of who you are. 4. Just pure maliciousness.

I have no problem with anyone who is honest. If they really hated it enough to deserve a 1 bomb.. that is a legitimate vote... If they then tell you why (even if it's negative) I find that useful criticism.. NOT a troll. A troll zaps you for reasons OTHER than the content or quality of your work (like my raw typing withouth a spell checker).

Dream

I agree with DP's assessment except that the second group isn't that simple. A troll might read an L/W story in which the cheating wife gets away with it, and one-bomb it out of spite, leaving an anon PC castigating the characters. If, however, she gets caught and her husband dumps her, the PC will be laudatory and will be proudly signed. Other trolls might read a celeb. story and drop a one-bomb because of dislike of the celeb involved or because they like the celeb and object to the way he or she was treated. And, I believe, there are lesbians who will one-bomb a lesbian story written by a man, usually not leaving any comment at all.

There are other examples where a reader will not dislike the story category but will object to what happens because of his or her personal predjudices or opinions. There is not much to be done about them.

Edited to add: Sometimes I consider negative PC to be a compliment. In an Incest story, for instance, a man pressures his 18 year old stepdaughter into sex. Anon left a feedback blasting him for being such a rat. The man was strictly fiction but Anon took him seriously enough to castigate him like that. I considered that to be high praise. My Halloween story has some comparable PC. :D
 
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Extreme Bohunk said:
Tomorrow is the last day of the contest, I'll be glad most of the nastiness will be over, but I will miss the camraderie (sp?) in this thread.
It's been a wonderful opportunity for me to have met so many of you I didn't know before, and to make some new friends. In that respect, I've already come out a winner. Thanks all!
The pleasure's been all yours, Bohunk. :D

But seriously folks, I think a lot of us share your feelings about the camaraderie (you almost got it right - I checked) It's a big reason strange AH life-forms such as Og, Dr. Mab, and little ole moi have entered contests we're not eligible to win.

Start thinking about a story for the Winter Holidays writing contest. That'll be cranking up in a few weeks.

Rumple Foreskin :cool:
 
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so um sunday morning i broke my leg in two places and i have been in the hospital since then so i am typing one handedbecause of how i am sittin


UMMMMMM

OOOOOOOUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCHHHHHHHH

swearsssssss really loud
 
Elizabetht said:
so um sunday morning i broke my leg in two places and i have been in the hospital since then so i am typing one handedbecause of how i am sittin


UMMMMMM

OOOOOOOUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCHHHHHHHH

swearsssssss really loud

Ow!
Sorry to hear that, hope they gave you some really good painkillers.
I'm thinking we need a 'walking wounded' thread.
Been re-habbing a blown shoulder here since June.
 
geronimo_appleby said:
With the exception being in Loving Wives. They sure do stir up easy in there. :D
and that's where most of my stories end up. I also get enough anon flame mail in anal and fetish and incest. I have noticed that feedback has faded since Public Comments started
 
Elizabetht said:
so um sunday morning i broke my leg in two places and i have been in the hospital since then so i am typing one handedbecause of how i am sittin


UMMMMMM

OOOOOOOUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCHHHHHHHH

swearsssssss really loud
Dang your hide, Elizabetht. There was no call, none at all, for you doing something like that. Let's hope you're a fast healer. :)

http://www.flowerpatchonline.com/get_well_2003/TF109_01_WH.jpg

Rumple Foreskin :cool:
 
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