Gyno Exam Fans

[JustaSCOUNDREL]

For all of you gyno examination fans I just submitted a new story with that theme. If you read the story please vote, every vote is important.

The story is a bit long 5 pages

Enjoy.

http://www.literotica.com/s/not-so-routine-examination

If I have violated form rules let me know and I will remove this post.

ETA. The story has over 10,000 reads and has been up for less then 24 hours. My previous story has been up for over 6 months and has only 13K reads.

If any of you have read my story and have comments I can use to improve my writing or the content please post here or PM me.

Mike

 

[JustaSCOUNDREL]

A bump to allow the edit to be seen.

Mike

 

[LoveToLurk]

Here's some feedback. I didn't make it 'til the end....

 

[LadyVer]

I've enjoyed stores about this subject in the past, but this story I couldn't get into. I'm not a writer, but the story doesn't seem to flow well. The "Bitch Margaret" was funny. The "drippings" was kind of odd. Made me think of steak...

 

[JustaSCOUNDREL]

For LoveToLurk it was long over 17,000 words. I've never written any thing that long before and I doubt I will again. considering the smiliey face I'll take that as a compliment. (G)

LadyVer I've never run across that situation personally so perhaps I've read too many other guys fantasies.

Thank you for your comments I appreciate your thoughts.

Mike

 

[LadyVer]

Any time. Always open to reading these stories as well as some others.

 

[LoveToLurk]

For LoveToLurk it was long over 17,000 words. I've never written any thing that long before and I doubt I will again. considering the smiliey face I'll take that as a compliment. (G)

LadyVer I've never run across that situation personally so perhaps I've read too many other guys fantasies.

Thank you for your comments I appreciate your thoughts.

Mike

Yes, the smiley was a compliment. I didn't make it til the end for reasons other than the # of words/length of story....

 

[talldad1]

Here's some feedback. I didn't make it 'til the end....

I like that.

 

[LoveToLurk]

I like that.

What can I say, TD?