Girthy story with a Halloween mistaken identity theme

[frisky-leo]

I'm hoping to find some simple editing assistance (basic word flow, continuity, etc.) with a new story, involving a costumed mistaken identity that I've been stroking for a while. My previous editor has had life get busy, and understandably must limit extra work.

Quick generalization: a couple are meeting at a costume party but arriving at different times, each thinks they found the other, but mistakes were made.
There are three separate spicy scenes, which helps explain the engorged word count... ~52k. *gasp* Should I break it apart or keep it as one?

I have a bit of my writing here already, all stand-alone stories. Check them out to see my writing style if you're curious.
If anyone is interested in helping me with this new story, comment or pm.

Thanks

 

[TheLobster]

Should I break it apart or keep it as one?

Note that if you want to submit this work to the Halloween contest, you need to keep it as a single submission. Internal chapters are fine (and at 52k, frankly necessary) but it’s gotta be one Literotica story in the end.

 

[jsmiam]

Girthy?

And then spellcheck changed what I typed to Goethe, which sounds like an intriguing combination for a story.

 

[frisky-leo]

Note that if you want to submit this work to the Halloween contest, you need to keep it as a single submission. Internal chapters are fine (and at 52k, frankly necessary) but it’s gotta be one Literotica story in the end.

I thought it would probably have to stay together for the contest. The word count surprised me when I first checked it towards the end of the story. I've not created a Lit story this long before.

It kind of naturally separates into a prelude, interaction 1, interaction 2, and interaction 3. Do you think a 4 chapter interior breakdown would be enough?

 

[frisky-leo]

Girthy?

And then spellcheck changed what I typed to Goethe, which sounds like an intriguing combination for a story.

Spellcheck played with me as well. I just try to think of it as a little drunk gnome, trying his best to be helpful.

 

[dirk2024]

I'm hoping to find some simple editing assistance (basic word flow, continuity, etc.) with a new story, involving a costumed mistaken identity that I've been stroking for a while. My previous editor has had life get busy, and understandably must limit extra work.

Quick generalization: a couple are meeting at a costume party but arriving at different times, each thinks they found the other, but mistakes were made.
There are three separate spicy scenes, which helps explain the engorged word count... ~52k. *gasp* Should I break it apart or keep it as one?

I have a bit of my writing here already, all stand-alone stories. Check them out to see my writing style if you're curious.
If anyone is interested in helping me with this new story, comment or pm.

Thanks

I read Sasquatched a few weeks ago and I did enjoy it!

However, 52k is too large a project for me to take on. Sorry.

 

[frisky-leo]

I read Sasquatched a few weeks ago and I did enjoy it!

However, 52k is too large a project for me to take on. Sorry.

I'm glad you enjoyed my story! Thanks for letting me know.

I understand this new one is a beast, I must have fed it after midnight.