For 24 hours...

Here is a question.

I know I could go to the author's forum or somewhere else, but am curious to see what you folks think. Besides, I am not really a prolific author and not comfie going over there.

Besides, it has been done over and again.

I am very new to this whole writing thing. Well, I have written stuff since I was old enough to put three letters together with a crayon, but to actually finish a story ? Well....

Anyway, the male perspective...

what does it feel like for a guy when he is becoming aroused?

what does it feel like when he orgasms?

Also, I need a bit of help with describing the older male body. Those that I have seen have not been a whole lot different than men in their thirties....but other than the hair color, some wrinkles, and maybe a bit of a soft tummy, what does time do to the male body?

Thanks!
 
MissTaken said:
Here is a question.

I know I could go to the author's forum or somewhere else, but am curious to see what you folks think. Besides, I am not really a prolific author and not comfie going over there.

Besides, it has been done over and again.

I am very new to this whole writing thing. Well, I have written stuff since I was old enough to put three letters together with a crayon, but to actually finish a story ? Well....

Anyway, the male perspective...

what does it feel like for a guy when he is becoming aroused?

what does it feel like when he orgasms?

Also, I need a bit of help with describing the older male body. Those that I have seen have not been a whole lot different than men in their thirties....but other than the hair color, some wrinkles, and maybe a bit of a soft tummy, what does time do to the male body?

Thanks!

Alas, arousal comes in as many flavours as ice cream- thats what I love about it. It ranges from a slight surge on hormones when you subconsciously scent pheremones in the air to an intense tightening of muscles and senses as your cock becomes rigid. I find I am mildly aroused at least half the time- just seeing a sexual image or attractive woman gets me in that "little hairs on back of head erect" stage. If my onboard sensors determine there is no real prospect of sex, it passes. If prospects exist, then my balls tingle, my toes start curling, my fingers itch, I start unconsciously pawing at the air. My pulse quickens, my my mouth dries, then salivates. Blood flows out of my large brain to my small brain. ...

An orgasm is an intense spasm where everything becomes tight, then floods out, and my muscles loosen. I am hypersensitive at that moment, and remain so for minutes afterwards.

My body at 45 has settled from a 28 waist at 25 to a 34. my chest, once 38, is 42. My neck, once 14. is almost 16. my chin line is softer. my skin is drier, but still not too wrinkled or pouchy I have very few age spots. my hair is still there, but for some reason, prefers to grow out my ears. sigh.
 
Thank you, dear, sirhugs.

:)

You are very helpful! I like your physical description .

When I am in the initial stages of arousal, there is a tightening or tingling in my tummy. Is that true for men?

What about nipples? Do your nipples become sensitive?

Ya, let's talk about male nipples. I love em!
 
MissTaken said:
Thank you, dear, sirhugs.

:)

You are very helpful! I like your physical description .

When I am in the initial stages of arousal, there is a tightening or tingling in my tummy. Is that true for men?

What about nipples? Do your nipples become sensitive?

Ya, let's talk about male nipples. I love em!

I can't speak for all men, but yes, in a second or third level arousal, the one where the breathing alters, my abs tighten - this is usually just before the balls tighten and tumescence begins.

My nipples are quite sensitive. At times too sensitive to enjoy playtime . Other times, just the touch I need.
 
Well, damn!

I shouldn't have started this discussion!

Just the thought of an aroused, mature body....

errr, excuse me for a few moments, please?

;)
 
have you recovered yet? I noticed yesterday, I forgot to mention the bit where my penis throbs with a strong pulse, like it has its own heart. That happens in stage two.
 
Thank you, sirhugs!

I recovered, then finished a story....

Yummy.

Of course, writing the damn thing made me hotter *sigh*
 
Originally posted by MissTaken

Anyway, the male perspective...

what does it feel like for a guy when he is becoming aroused?

I feel all my muscles begin to tighen, my arms, chest, stomach, and legs. I feel stronger. My dick jerks repeatedly. I know my heart rate rises, but not that fluttery type of stuff. It pounds harder and I can hear it. My body temperature increases.

what does it feel like when he orgasms?

Almost the exact opposite. I hate cuming. I feel like all the life is being drained from my body. If I'm supporting my weight with my arms they begin to trimble under the strain....and I only weigh 165lbs. I get slightly dizzy. I can't control the jerking of my body as I shoot my cum.


Hope that helps....
 
Thanks, Black Snake.

I actually reflected on these posts with the story I was writing at the time.

I am getting frustrated with writing.

I had written reports and psychosocial histories for 13 years. It just seems like my stories come off sounding like another petition or report to court.

Oh, well.

I keep on plugging.

Do anyone else ever get frustrated?
Really frustrated?
 
frustration is part of the game, MsT. And you write nothing like a doctor or other healthcare worker. I enjoy your work.

I find if I am stuck on one story, it helps to just temporarily move to another. I find 'expresswriting' stroke stories loosens me up to go back to the harder pieces.
 
That's sweet, but I have a long way to go.

My last story was rejected because the paragraphs were too long. That sort of put me in a lousy frame of mind. Then, after editing it, I realized it was a great tip and the story is much better, now.

So, that is where the frustration post came from.

All is well!

:)
 
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None of what happened at the end really happened. It's all a mobius strip of self parody!
(You are still doing the off-topic thing in this thread, n'êtes-vous pas?)
 
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Cuckolded_BlK_Male said:
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None of what happened at the end really happened. It's all a mobius strip of self parody!
(You are still doing the off-topic thing in this thread, n'êtes-vous pas?)

Oui!

Definitely, keep it off topic!

:D
 
since this is off topic...

i can say that i feel shitty tonight.
 
it's help if you told me you still need interracial stories = )
 
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