first story

Uh...

This is not a feedback board. You can ask whether people might be interested in editing for you, but usually it's not done on the board (typically done via email or PM). There's also a Story Discussion forum but that's basically for posted Lit stories. :D

OK. That said, if you want feedback, I'm willing. So, I'll PM you when I have some more time later.

hs
 
Now that I come back to read it

it's gone! :confused:
Did not mean to scare you away. It was just FYI.
Do you still want feedback? You can PM me or email the story to hiddenself@hotmail.com

hs
 
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