First story posted

[Stepandfetchit]

Hi all! My first story has been posted. I’d appreciate any feedback, and suggestions, as almost nobody has ever read my stuff before. Below is the web page. Am I supposed to list that?

Thanks.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=119530

 

[damppanties]

Yep Step, you're allowed to link your story. You will have a better chance at critiques (if you want them) in the Story Feedback Forum.

I'm off to read your story... it's in one of my fave categories.

 

[whispering_surrender]

I wrote myself a note to read it when I get home from work. *grin*

Whisper

 

[Wills]

Congrats Step.

Read, Voted & F/b.

Will's

 

[whispering_surrender]

Done! Thank goodness for notes! *grin*

Whisper

 

[QuirkyK]

Read and voted!

Congrats

 

[McKenna]

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[Stepandfetchit]

Thanks!

Thanks for the responses and suggestions.

I’ve resubmitted the story. I think I’ve fixed the formatting problems. I changed a few words, here and there, and I extended the ending a bit. I also moved it to the category of ‘Erotic Couplings’.

On the submission form, what does the ‘public comments’ mean?

Again, thanks

 

[whispering_surrender]

This is the thread that goes into public comments at length, and probably better than I could. *smiles*

Public Comments Thread

Hope that helps.

Whisper

Ps. Thank you for the feedback on my work. That rarely happens that new folks reciprocate, and it is much appreciated. *hug*

 

[damppanties]

Ps. Thank you for the feedback on my work. That rarely happens that new folks reciprocate, and it is much appreciated. *hug*

Same here. You're good people.