Stella_Omega
No Gentleman
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- Jul 14, 2005
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Sounds perfect to me.BTW, I settled on "femme". I hope it doesn't have some other sexual connotation I'm not aware of. I know it indicates the more feminine partner in a gay couple, but that's okay. It seems like an inherently powerful word to me. It feels powerful in the mouth and just slightly sexual and above all, it's easy to understand.
"As I left the club, there were two gorgeous femmes striding down the street, intimidating in their confidence, moving as if in their own little cone of light..."
And intriguing as hell! Is this the subtle beginning of your male character's switch?