Feedback on my newest Catfight series

[thebobber326]

I recently wrote a story for somebody else on the site and I am looking for as much feedback (good or bad) as I can get. This felt pretty different from what I normally write. In most of my stories, there is typically complete domination interrupted by some struggle, but here it was a lot more back and forth and any fight that was in these stories was just a small scene in a larger story as opposed to the focus. Any comments are greatly appreciated!

https://literotica.com/s/teacher-catfight
https://literotica.com/s/teacher-catfight-ch-02

 

[Anton25]

I recently wrote a story for somebody else on the site and I am looking for as much feedback (good or bad) as I can get. This felt pretty different from what I normally write. In most of my stories, there is typically complete domination interrupted by some struggle, but here it was a lot more back and forth and any fight that was in these stories was just a small scene in a larger story as opposed to the focus. Any comments are greatly appreciated!

https://literotica.com/s/teacher-catfight
https://literotica.com/s/teacher-catfight-ch-02

Ok .. u read mine and I read yours and give a comment..?

 

[Anton25]

I recently wrote a story for somebody else on the site and I am looking for as much feedback (good or bad) as I can get. This felt pretty different from what I normally write. In most of my stories, there is typically complete domination interrupted by some struggle, but here it was a lot more back and forth and any fight that was in these stories was just a small scene in a larger story as opposed to the focus. Any comments are greatly appreciated!

https://literotica.com/s/teacher-catfight
https://literotica.com/s/teacher-catfight-ch-02