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[Diamondbarrow]

Feedback requested on continuing story

Hi, all. My newest story was (finally) posted a short while ago, and I'd greatly appreciate if you could glance it over and tell me what you think.

The story is a continuation of my Erotic Couplings series, A Love Scene, starring Barrow and Sara.

A Love Scene, Ch. 3 by Diamondbarrow

Again, any feedback (even negative, as long as it's constructive) is appreciated and will be returned if requested. I'll also respond to all feedback, with the exception of comments left by 'anonymous'.

Thanks!

 

[Diamondbarrow]

So far, so good! The story is rated 4.80 at the moment, with 5 votes and 746 views! One comment reads:

"Sara goes full out to both give and receive sexual joy with her lover. If you enjoy reading a story that relies heavily on the sensuously written language - this story's for you. From paragraph one throughout it continues to get hotter.
Intensely Sexual! Good Write!" - duddle146, public comment board

Thanks a million, duddles! I'm glad you liked it