A few months ago, I submitted my first story. After looking it over a few times, I realized I could improve on it a bit more so I edited it and replaced it. Unfortunately, I haven't gotten a lot of feedback the second time around, so I don't know what I can improve on and what the strong points are. So, feedback and comments would be greatly appreciated.
https://www.literotica.com/s/her-first-time-turns-costly-ch-01
https://www.literotica.com/s/her-first-time-turns-costly-ch-02
https://www.literotica.com/s/her-first-time-turns-costly-ch-01
https://www.literotica.com/s/her-first-time-turns-costly-ch-02
