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[RachelPost]

My name's RachalPost and I just got my first story published.

https://literotica.com/s/paradise-the-candidate-surrenders

It's in the Lesbian section. It's a role reversal where a political candidate surrenders control to an aide in the bedroom. There's some gentle domination, several sex scenes and it's open-ended for a second part in the writing stages. As a new writer, I am open to constructive criticism as well as suggestions. Heck, I'd even accept some positive feedback too.

 

[Mastered_again]

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[RachelPost]

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Thank you.

 

[Michael682]

My name's RachalPost and I just got my first story published.

https://literotica.com/s/paradise-the-candidate-surrenders

It's in the Lesbian section. It's a role reversal where a political candidate surrenders control to an aide in the bedroom. There's some gentle domination, several sex scenes and it's open-ended for a second part in the writing stages. As a new writer, I am open to constructive criticism as well as suggestions. Heck, I'd even accept some positive feedback too.

Oh I just ran across this night on the “New” list. Much enjoyed.

 

[RachelPost]

I appreciate the comments and votes. You can never be sure how a story will be received.

 

[HotBrand]

Left a quick review on your story. Hope it helps a little.

Really hope you continue to publish stories. There are some wonderful people on Lit who would be delighted to support you, if needed!

 

[Busterhymen43]

My name's RachalPost and I just got my first story published.

https://literotica.com/s/paradise-the-candidate-surrenders

It's in the Lesbian section. It's a role reversal where a political candidate surrenders control to an aide in the bedroom. There's some gentle domination, several sex scenes and it's open-ended for a second part in the writing stages. As a new writer, I am open to constructive criticism as well as suggestions. Heck, I'd even accept some positive feedback too.

Be careful what you wish for. most who comment are rude and do so anonymously. Which in my humble opinion gives their comment no creditability, I turn comments off. I look at the ratings. They give a better view of how your story is accepted.