Domestic Horror Fantasy

[MrsZyzzx]

Hello Deary. I have a horror/fantasy set primary to a family while camping. While there is no death, I will not toil over categorization at present.

This is my largest single piece I produced. The project is in four parts. With about 20 pages per part. I don’t mind if there is teams. Or a single dedicated editor. There’s too much for me to comb through. I require fresh eyes. Please help me, anyone and everyone. I really want this piece to come out well.

 

[StillStunned]

With about 20 pages per part.

It might help to clarify whether you mean Word pages (350-500 words) or Lit pages (3700-3900 words).

 

[MrsZyzzx]

Yes.
Though it’s highly formatted for jumping perspective, yet I get what you mean. It’s also incest horror(ish) fantasy. But the incest and the length of the narrative is main concern. Make sure I’m not dropping the ball with inconsistencies and comfortable with incest scenes. Thank You for Your Time.