I'm not positive this is the right thread, but it seemed close enough; so here it goes. I am currently working on a story that's a little out of my comfort zone. I just had an idea a few weeks ago and have already begun writing (and rewriting and rewriting).
I have everything set up... the characters and the general plot; but here in lies my problem. It's a coming of age story about a boy wanting his summer before going off to college to be "epic". I already know it's not going to be epic in the way he at first thinks, but I feel it will be a welcome surprise. His father set up a summer job for him, helping the widow across town fix up her house. Now, I know what you're thinking... been there done that, read 'em a million times. The widow will not be the reason his summer will be "epic", I can tell you that already.
I'm going to insert a totally new, different character that will be the source of his "epic"ness?
And here is where I ask the forum for insight. What or who should be the reason for him to remember this summer fondly? Should I incorporate a niece or granddaughter of the widow? Or maybe a sex starved neighbor? Right now, it's wide open... and I can't reach a character that I think I would enjoy writing about... any ideas?
A lot of my other submission's feedback says that I had a great opportunity to 'teach a lesson' but failed to do so. I write to tell a story, not teach a lesson. Is this bad? Should I be looking for lesson's to teach? I would like some input on that as well.
Any tips, comments and direction would be most appreciated. I look forward to whatever is thrown.
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