Dark Temptation... OOC Thread

[EzraPound]

Perfect! DW were thinking the same thing about how Renee operates.

I am thinking Johns next post will tie every thing back together..

Renee
Trinity,with Elysia
The start of the raid..

There all going to be in my next Post aren't they?

Vixen's post is next I think ..' before I post for John but I will also need to now what is going on with the raid..

You want to get the party started ,Vreo?

 

[Wolf Vixen]

I am hoping to get the post in tonight....no hope, I will since I won't be back until Sunday. Don't wish to make everyone wait on me.

Edit: BTW does anyone else have to scroll sideways now reading the thread?

Edit again: Trinity is up....hope it is okay to work with!

 

[ShyMystica]

Would you guys like a post from Elysia now? Or should I wait until Ezra posts so that things are tied together?

I know its a dumb question, but my brain has seemingly shut off today...blarg!

 

[Wolf Vixen]

It must be in the water since I feel like I was running on major low battery posting Trinity.

I am happy either way hun....I personally would like to see Elysia, but that is just me

 

[Veroe]

I think the scrolling sideways thing was from the picture Shy embedded into her post a while ago. Not really that annoying to me though. These things happen from time to time on the web. Hopefully it'll be back to normal once we graduate to the next page.

Go ahead and make a post Shy, and do me a favor (if its possible) could you mention the passage of time to the next day as a means to set up the my next post?

EDIT: Yeah this should be real easy for you, Shy. Just have her wake up in the morning, surprised to find Trinity still there, maybe start laying the foundation for the strong rapport we'll need between her and Trinity. Sisters, lovers, good friends, or mentor/student any of the above relationships is good as long as there's the beginnings of some sort of connection between the two.

Also I'm really liking the interconnectivity between our varied story threads...that's excellent teamwork guys.

 

[ShyMystica]

Ok...I shall see what I can come up with.

And don't say it will be easy, I mean, at the moment even easy writing seems difficult lol. Stupid brain...kick start already!

Hopefully will have something up soon.

EDIT: Sorry guys, I won't have my post up until my tomorrow. I have it planned out and half written, but my mind just isn't cooperating at the moment. I also plan to add something to Elysia that may help the story. If you don't like it I can always remove it. Sorry for the trouble this causes.

 

[Luna_Wolf72]

Reading up...Have to make sure I haven't missed anything...

 

[Veroe]

Ok...I shall see what I can come up with.

And don't say it will be easy, I mean, at the moment even easy writing seems difficult lol. Stupid brain...kick start already!

Hopefully will have something up soon.

EDIT: Sorry guys, I won't have my post up until my tomorrow. I have it planned out and half written, but my mind just isn't cooperating at the moment. I also plan to add something to Elysia that may help the story. If you don't like it I can always remove it. Sorry for the trouble this causes.

No problems, Shy, get some shut eye and get your brain recharged. We can wait till tomorrow.

I await what you've come up with for Elysia with rapt attention.

 

[EzraPound]

I realized if I wrapped up Renee's and Johns scene we would be able to move on better in the story line,''

Sorry Vero if my post forces you to change some blocking and add some lines. but I wanted to try and tie the events together..

but now your free to get on with the raid .I can't wait!

also I am not sure right now when I will get time to write, so I thought it would be better to get my post in when I can.

 

[Veroe]

That's okay, Ezra, we'll adjust our plans to fit.

I'll begin writing the attack.

 

[Veroe]

So post is up and the attack is on, guys.

Luna there's been a little change of plans. To keep Ezra's post I assigned Lillith to toy with Renee (You can take the phrase 'toy with' in whichever way you wish)-I figured with as many times you've pounced on DW in the lounge you wouldn't mind being given the oppurtunity to do it in character this time, heheh.

Jezebel will attend to the shopping list from the vaultroom of the mansion and as planned Allejandro will take the kiddo.

 

[Luna_Wolf72]

I read through it and am plotting my initial attack, even as we speak...*cracks up*
Am at work so it may take me a while...

 

[ShyMystica]

Eeeep! I go to sleep in hopes of starting my writing when I wake and posting promptly, and two more posts of popped up! Gosh, I didn't realise I was so slow

Am I still to post or shall I just leave it now?

EDIT: I posted anyway. I tried really hard to try and connect things but also, towards the end (even though it is brief) I tried to establish/start a deeper connection between Trinity and Elysia. But, the little 'gift' I am slowly introducing to Elysia, I added because I felt the good side needed a little more help. If you hate it, tell me and I'll re-work it.

PS: The nurse is simply a 'caretaker' for the vampires. Her job is to find any victims of vampire activities who were lucky enough to survive and to make sure that their memories have been erased. I figured I left it open enough for Ezra or Trinity to work with (a fight of some kind).

PPS...I really am nervous about this one. I know it isn't to my usual standards and I'm sorry. My brain just isn't working right at the moment. So please forgive me...like I said, I can change it, re-write it, remove it completely. I don't mind either way and I won't take offense to it.

 

[Veroe]

Don't be silly Shy, that was a good post. I'd say of all of us your portrayal of falling under a Vampire's compulsion is the best yet, bravo there.

I don't hate the gift...it seemed a little schizophrenic what with the dream sequences, but she was under the influence of compulsion and then morphine so...it should be a little disjointed and dream-like.

As for the caretaker nurse I think its logical that they'd have one to play clean up when something like that happens to someone...so no problems there either.

 

[ShyMystica]

Don't be silly Shy, that was a good post. I'd say of all of us your portrayal of falling under a Vampire's compulsion is the best yet, bravo there.

I don't hate the gift...it seemed a little schizophrenic what with the dream sequences, but she was under the influence of compulsion and then morphine so...it should be a little disjointed and dream-like.

As for the caretaker nurse I think its logical that they'd have one to play clean up when something like that happens to someone...so no problems there either.

Oh, damn, I'm sorry it came out schizophrenic...dammit that wasn't my intention. I can re-write it. Sorry guys...

 

[Luna_Wolf72]

I am going to be posting Lilith today...most of the work is done...and she will be up within the hour...*grins* Veroe you are quite correct in thinking I wouldn't have any problems toying with DW, she is FUN to play with.

 

[Veroe]

I'm sorry I was not online yesterday guys. It was brutal at work yesterday, and I was so exhausted after my shift I just grabbed a whopper for supper and went straight to bed afterword.

I think its DW's and wolfie's turn next.

 

[Daydream_weaver]

Ohhh, Miss Luna...I like that...perfect way to approach Renee. I'm not sure which is stronger, her arrogance or her insanity...she's not going to like being addressed that way *laughs*

I'd better get thinking...

I do have a question. Is Renee going to see Allenjandro before she escapes or will just knowing he is behind the attack going to be enough? Perhaps she could escape Lilith and slip down to try and grab the child and run?

 

[Luna_Wolf72]

Weaver, sweet, sweet Weaver...what is the point of playing with fire if you can't get an occasional burn *grins* I will be awaiting your reply with bated breath.

 

[Veroe]

I dunno DW, Ezra lit a fire under my ass in his last post and made me adjust my plans. Right now me and Luna both are going by the seat of our pants. So if you want a face to face with Allejandro then we can try to arrange it before things go boom.

I had wanted to attack during the middle of the day while making certain to note that it was a bright sunny day so no one inside would be able to escape the attack on the mansion. That's something I don't think alot of vampire fiction uses alot the vulnerability of them. I mean half the day is certain death for them (unless you want Twilight's sparkle-shield nonsense ). So they're pretty muched trapped inside like a bubble boy for twelve hours every day.

 

[Daydream_weaver]

Indeed, my Luna...sometimes the whole point of tempting the fire is the burn... *grins wickedly*

Veroe, I pretty much write that way anyway, so I'm easily adaptable...and please, no...no sparkly ass vampires. That's just sacrilege as far as I'm concerned. So I guess we'll see how things work between Renee and Lilith...

 

[Veroe]

Yeah, I was intending to wait until after Shy's last post to begin the attack, but like I said Ezra lit a fire under my ass with his last one.

Hey Vixen an idea occurs to me, how about Trinity runs into that vampire nurse from Shy's post at the hospital. She victimized Elyssia, and maybe I'm feeling a little protective over the character, but that sort of thing shouldn't just be allowed to happen without some dire consequences happening to the victimizer.

 

[ShyMystica]

Hey Vixen an idea occurs to me, how about Trinity runs into that vampire nurse from Shy's post at the hospital. She victimized Elyssia, and maybe I'm feeling a little protective over the character, but that sort of thing shouldn't just be allowed to happen without some dire consequences happening to the victimizer.

Awwww Veroe...is Elysia making you feel protective? Awww..I'm blushing.

In any case, the role of 'the nurse' was always open for air. I figured perhaps she recognises John. Perhaps John could show up at the hospital (as seen in Elysia's premonition) and things escalate from there perhaps? If she is on Allejandro's side then she recognises him as an enemy, or if she is on Renee's side then she recognises John as a kindred spirit.

I just figured Trinity would be a little too 'off her game' to recognise a vampire at the moment, and Elysia is a little too shaken to speak up as she doesn't really know what is going on besides the fact that the nurse is a complete nut case.

Just some ideas to float around.

Shy

 

[Veroe]

I was thinking she'd be one of Renee's. Allejandro was trying to keep a low profile so Renee wouldn't learn of his arrival too soon, telling all of his people to stay on the ship. Bowie was the one that ruined that, and made him accelerate his plans and attack the society's mansion earlier than he had planned at first.

 

[EzraPound]

The way Trinity works she would become aware of the nurse quickly ,even if she is out of sorts,pluse she is protective of Elysia so the nurse needs to die..hehe..pluse since Shy created her ...she should do a post for the nurse...heheheheh

I hope I am not speaking for you Vixen...but I think you'll agree with me about this.

Sorry Vero..but you know what they say ..no battle plan survives contact with the enemy.