Dark Temptation... OOC Thread

Your mind intrigues me, Veroe. *lets her mind wander away into the depths of what Veroe's mind may hold*

It intrigues me too.

Don't get lost in there, Shy. More than likely you'll find an embarassing amount of Star Wars and X-men related items cluttering things up in there. And my filing system needs a total overhaul, have to think about what day it is but I can quote any of the star wars lines of dialogue verbatim.
 
......ok ..its posted *shaking a little*....took alot out of me ...not a place I vist in my mind very often..if at all.

I know what you mean, Renee is sort of like tapping into a part of me I didn't really know was there. It's a bit spooky. She's not really that bad...just rather nuts.

*hugs tightly* Don't fear, you wrote brilliantly as always.

But on a side note, does anyone else's....lady part...suddenly hurt at his brutal description of tearing Renee's? I mean...ouch Ezra...I can't sit comfy now *grumps playfully*

Now I'm a bit afraid to go look....

edit: oh Ezra...that was chilling and more than I had hoped for. And in the midst of this madness his salvation calls...fantastic!
 
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It intrigues me too.

Don't get lost in there, Shy. More than likely you'll find an embarassing amount of Star Wars and X-men related items cluttering things up in there. And my filing system needs a total overhaul, have to think about what day it is but I can quote any of the star wars lines of dialogue verbatim.

*pulls on the rope and gasps for air*

Oh my Veroe...that place is scary! *giggles*

Ok...just for the record, I am royally confused. I have been in talks with both Ezra and Wolfie as to when to post, but I still do not have a solid answer.

So, this is how I see it: Elysia wont post until after the raid. I don't want to disturb the flow, and there are a lot of details to get through so I didn't want to confuse anyone. Is this right?

And shame on you both for confusing poor little blonde me *pokes her tongue out playfully*
 
You know I do actually blush this much in real life...you people are wonderful, and you are inspiring me to do much better work than I normally do... that is, occasionally taking me to some very dark places ..even for me.
 
You know I do actually blush this much in real life...you people are wonderful, and you are inspiring me to do much better work than I normally do... that is, occasionally taking me to some very dark places ..even for me.

*attempts her best sleazy voice* And we LOVE exploring your dark places, Ezra....

*bursts into giggles*

Sorry...I just had to...:eek:
 
Ezra, Shy was making good progress until she lost it with her giggles don't you think?

And as for posts....I talked with Ezra and I think I will wait for DW to get her next one before deciding to post just a bit.....if you like you can follow me Shy, but I can't promise that I will get you where you need to be or even in one piece. *laughs* This is like the blind leading the blind here. :)
 
Ezra, Shy was making good progress until she lost it with her giggles don't you think?

And as for posts....I talked with Ezra and I think I will wait for DW to get her next one before deciding to post just a bit.....if you like you can follow me Shy, but I can't promise that I will get you where you need to be or even in one piece. *laughs* This is like the blind leading the blind here. :)

oddly enough it seems to be working
 
Yes, very courageous of you, Ezra.

I'm reading with a keen interest as I think I'll use your work as reference to Allejandro and Renee's showdown.

EDIT: Just had an idea, Luna if you want while we're waiting for Ezra and DW to finish up you can post a one shot of Lillith...say her getting a late night snack of a dock worker outside their ship that's Allejandro's headquarters right now...just to get into the character without having any of the pressure to progress the overall plot forward...like what I did in the first half of my post as Jezebel...that sort of thing. I'm just thinking the bad guys need to have another post up so nobody forgets about them.

Ooh, an idea just popped into my brain here. What if you use that part with Jezebel and Anton and mirror it to show the exact opposite opinion Lillith has in comparison to her twin sister. That's alot more involved than what I had in mind at first, so...it's up to you.

Hey Veroe...this is actually a brilliant idea. Am on my way to work soon BUT I will work on a piece for the thread and post it up at some point this evening...both ideas could be worked into a one shot...*brain starts ticking*

Oh by the way, I haven't said, but y'all write awesomely. I hope that I can keep up.:rose:

ETA~I posted as Lilith. Let me know if she works. Cuz I can't see her as completely depraved without a reason that makes sense to HER.
 
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Okay now I really have to step up to the plate.....you guys and gals are killing me here. Luna that was great writing....nice little taste into Lilith. I do look forward to working with you. :)

I think I will have to take the whole day to write mine.....got so much to live up to since you all are setting such a high standard in this thread......wow again!
 
Okay now I really have to step up to the plate.....you guys and gals are killing me here. Luna that was great writing....nice little taste into Lilith. I do look forward to working with you. :)

I think I will have to take the whole day to write mine.....got so much to live up to since you all are setting such a high standard in this thread......wow again!

*takes a bow*

Thanks Ms. Vixen. I look forward to writing with you as well...*grins* I have been enjoying this thread even before I was invited so I knew I had to write to the best of my abilities. Y'all are all scarily good.
 
wonderfull! Luna..

I can see her faith becoming fury if Alejandro ever betrays her....(hint..)

I knew you would be a great addition to our line up....

(if it wasnt my/our SRP I would be soooooooooooooo jealous)
 
wonderfull! Luna..

I can see her faith becoming fury if Alejandro ever betrays her....(hint..)

I knew you would be a great addition to our line up....

(if it wasnt my/our SRP I would be soooooooooooooo jealous)

*grins*

Thank sweet Ez, you always say the nicest things.
 
*yawns sleepily* I just read your post through hazy sleepy eyes and it was great Luna! I'm so happy to be working with you! Thank you so much for joining *pounces on Luna and hugs her gently*

And Wolfie, stop doubting yourself silly. You are as brilliant as every other writer here. So shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh *hugs Wolfie as well*
 
Here, here. Shy is right.

No more defeatist talk, Wolfie, own your work for its strengths and its shortcomings. Write from your heart, write from the organs further south of the heart, but do it to the best you can, and no matter what it lacks it'll be something to be proud of.

That's just my oppinion on writing. Everything I write I try to do the best I can, and if I fail to do that, I try to make up for it the next time.

So long rant cut short, do your best, and trust us not to tear you apart if its not any good. Cuz so far, you've been nothing but awesome.

*sighs* why does so many great writers here have to torture themselves?
 
*yawns sleepily* I just read your post through hazy sleepy eyes and it was great Luna! I'm so happy to be working with you! Thank you so much for joining *pounces on Luna and hugs her gently*

And Wolfie, stop doubting yourself silly. You are as brilliant as every other writer here. So shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh *hugs Wolfie as well*

Thanks Shy for the welcoming hug...I am so pleased by the amount of talent in this thread that I just can't wait to get started.

Here, here. Shy is right.

No more defeatist talk, Wolfie, own your work for its strengths and its shortcomings. Write from your heart, write from the organs further south of the heart, but do it to the best you can, and no matter what it lacks it'll be something to be proud of.

That's just my oppinion on writing. Everything I write I try to do the best I can, and if I fail to do that, I try to make up for it the next time.

So long rant cut short, do your best, and trust us not to tear you apart if its not any good. Cuz so far, you've been nothing but awesome.

*sighs* why does so many great writers here have to torture themselves?

*applauds loudly and whistles*
 
*sighs* why does so many great writers here have to torture themselves?

Because that is what makes writers great! Who ever heard of an un-tortured writer winning a Pulitzer prize? I haven't, but that is because the tortured soul is so alluring, and enables the writer to speak from a certain depth and PoV that other's wouldn't see. *smiles warmly* Just my little thoughts...
 
Secondly, great work Luna, I love the way she killed that guy. Kinda no brainer since a guy gets an erection by filling their penis with blood. Easy way to get alot of it without a fight is a blowjob.

And good work establishing Lillith's opposite oppinion from her sister, Jezebel. Exactly what we wanted to do there.
 
Secondly, great work Luna, I love the way she killed that guy. Kinda no brainer since a guy gets an erection by filling their penis with blood. Easy way to get alot of it without a fight is a blowjob.

And good work establishing Lillith's opposite oppinion from her sister, Jezebel. Exactly what we wanted to do there.

I was hoping like hell you would like it. She was your brain child to begin with and I didn't want to take her too far from where you placed her.

*grins* So I am very glad you liked her.
 
Ezra, Shy was making good progress until she lost it with her giggles don't you think?

And as for posts....I talked with Ezra and I think I will wait for DW to get her next one before deciding to post just a bit.....if you like you can follow me Shy, but I can't promise that I will get you where you need to be or even in one piece. *laughs* This is like the blind leading the blind here. :)


So Renee needs to make one more appearance now?
 
DW I think Ezra wanted to see what Renee would do first before I posted any. Take your time though....I rush no one!!
 
Renee is up... *shakes my head in slight bemusement* I hope her reaction is what was needed to move forward
 
Oh Day, you worry too much. All the fun in writing with a group for a SRP is writing spontaneously to react to what the previous person just posted.

Besides, it was brilliant, as always. Though, the way Renee is so hot and cold, violently mad then over-dramatically cute reminds of a joke about a vampire on her period...*drifts off to try and think of it*
 
Oh Day, you worry too much. All the fun in writing with a group for a SRP is writing spontaneously to react to what the previous person just posted.

Besides, it was brilliant, as always. Though, the way Renee is so hot and cold, violently mad then over-dramatically cute reminds of a joke about a vampire on her period...*drifts off to try and think of it*

Vampire pms....I love it!!

And thank you. My worry was mainly for what I left out. I think I was about to get a bit out there even for a crazy vampire lady:eek:
 
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