Cramming In the Fetishes

[Wifetheif]

Many of us wonder if we are cramming too many fetishes into our stories. I doubt any of us lay them on as thick as Alex Raymond. How about Three Fetishes (or more) in one Sunday strip? In panel one, Flash lives out the nurse fantasy while the insanely hot, and any anything but frigid, Queen Fria tends to his leg injury. Note her eyeline captures his, no doubt, well imagined junk. In panel two, Dale Arden flashes a lot of leg and has a passel of potential perils hanging over her. The chief does NOT seem inclined to take no for an answer. Will he resort to violence? Some nasty non-consent action? He's not only an ugly giant, but he's also brown. Depending on the tastes of the housewives or young adult females reading this over their morning coffee, it is either a nightmare or a dark sexual fantasy. Finally, poor Prince Ronal, who rescued Dale and with whom he seemed to share a mutual infatuation is subjected to bondage! Just routine Sunday morning breakfast conversation in depression-era America!

Seriously, the stuff Alex Raymond got away with week after week is staggering. Imagine how staid journalism of the era would have reported on the events in these three panels? Squeaky clean and incomplete.
The point is that, usually, fetishes take a gentle hand. Laying too many on at once can overwhelm the reader. Pulling this many off at once takes rare skill. How many have you placed in a story. How many is too many?

 

[SimonDoom]

Generally, I try not to put too many fetishes in one story. I like the concept of "erotic focus." My stories usually focus on one central erotic concept. Sometimes "fetishes" can be compatible, in which case I blend them. For instance, I enjoy exhibitionism as a story theme, and it's pretty easy to weave it into a wide variety of stories, including incest, loving wives, anal, etc. But I wouldn't casually put nonconsent themes into a story that's soundly rooted in another category, because the fetishes would clash.

 

[AlinaX]

My Vale series started out as a tongue-in-cheek story incorporating lots of tropes:

This series started from a prompt in the Forum by ScrappyPaperDoodler: "As Many Tropes as Possible (A Tribute to Literotica and Smut in General):... a guy... who's hung like a horse and inherits a billion dollars from a father he never knew he had. He falls in love with his sister... after somehow winning... a game of poker... here's the twist: the sister is an alien-vampire and all the friends are cyborgs (see 'fem-bots')... his high school bully ends up banging the hero's mom... we all know revenge is a dish best served anally... the use of a time-machine..."

Another is Author of Cuckoldry that is more serious but explores a lot of fetishes:

Given the length of this tale (approximately 35k), and its cross-category blend of Fetish (cuckoldry, chastity & more), Anal, Exhibitionist & Voyeur, Toys & Masturbation, Lesbian, Group Sex, BDSM, Loving Wives and Interracial, the only sensible category for it is Novels and Novellas.

 

[Bazzle]

I annoy lots of my readers with my fetishes that I enjoy writing.

The peeing fetish hate the smoking and the smoking fetish hate the peeing, whilst the drunk fetish hate the smoking and the peeing.

So I manage to enjoy myself by upset the different camps.

 

[Devinter]

I annoy lots of my readers with my fetishes that I enjoy writing.

The peeing fetish hate the smoking and the smoking fetish hate the peeing, whilst the drunk fetish hate the smoking and the peeing.

So I manage to enjoy myself by upset the different camps.

This is what makes your stories completely unique though. Combining multiple niche fetishes may alienate some readers, but for those few individuals that are really into them both, it's something they can't easily find elsewhere.

I wrote a story about a Clown, who drank a bunch of pee, whilst begging to be impregnated. Those three fetishes combined probably appealed to about eight of my total readers, but they really loved it. Got multiple private messages from that one, actually - significantly more than my more popular and mainstream pieces. Being yourself is a strength, not a weakness. Especially if one is as kind-hearted as you.

 

[Bazzle]

This is what makes your stories completely unique though. Combining multiple niche fetishes may alienate some readers, but for those few individuals that are really into them both, it's something they can't easily find elsewhere.

I wrote a story about a Clown, who drank a bunch of pee, whilst begging to be impregnated. Those three fetishes combined probably appealed to about eight of my total readers, but they really loved it. Got multiple private messages from that one, actually - significantly more than my more popular and mainstream pieces. Being yourself is a strength, not a weakness. Especially if one is as kind-hearted as you.

Thank you so much!

Who doesn't like a sexy girl who has one too many walking around half dressed with a cigarette in one hand, wine glass in the other, wearing wet panties ?...oh the majority

Onwards!

B

 

[SimonDoom]

I wrote a story about a Clown, who drank a bunch of pee, whilst begging to be impregnated. Those three fetishes combined probably appealed to about eight of my total readers, but they really loved it.

At least she wasn't a mime. Then you'd be down to 1 enthusiastic pee-drinking mime fetish follower, and the other seven, reading you describing how she was miming the desire to be impregnated, would be like, "Hope she chokes on the pee."

 

[VallesMarineris]

Legs, junk, and interracial are fetishes? Huh!

I thought they were just normal sexual urges. I need to update my profile.

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

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Many of us wonder if we are cramming too many fetishes into our stories. I doubt any of us lay them on as thick as Alex Raymond. How about Three Fetishes (or more) in one Sunday strip? In panel one, Flash lives out the nurse fantasy while the insanely hot, and any anything but frigid, Queen Fria tends to his leg injury. Note her eyeline captures his, no doubt, well imagined junk. In panel two, Dale Arden flashes a lot of leg and has a passel of potential perils hanging over her. The chief does NOT seem inclined to take no for an answer. Will he resort to violence? Some nasty non-consent action? He's not only an ugly giant, but he's also brown. Depending on the tastes of the housewives or young adult females reading this over their morning coffee, it is either a nightmare or a dark sexual fantasy. Finally, poor Prince Ronal, who rescued Dale and with whom he seemed to share a mutual infatuation is subjected to bondage! Just routine Sunday morning breakfast conversation in depression-era America!

Seriously, the stuff Alex Raymond got away with week after week is staggering. Imagine how staid journalism of the era would have reported on the events in these three panels? Squeaky clean and incomplete.
The point is that, usually, fetishes take a gentle hand. Laying too many on at once can overwhelm the reader. Pulling this many off at once takes rare skill. How many have you placed in a story. How many is too many?

For the latest 750 word challenge, I tried crammed 17 categories into one very short story. It was not very well received...A Year in the Life

 

[John_Vandermeer]

I am in the middle of publishing a novella that has nonconsent, incest, polygamy, exhibitionism and voyeurism, cuckoldry, breeding, and sapphic sex, among other practices in it. Just another week in the life of the central family that makes Roman imperial dynasties look like models of chastity, probity, and good morals. Jury is still out on how it is received in the end, but hopefully ok. All chapters are planned to go out in NC/R, which is right for a dark twisted tale, but given the breadth maybe NN would have been better.

 

[M_K_Babalon]

I don't generally add a lot of fetishes, but it depends on what you call fetishes, or consider them, I guess. Either way, I make sure I can clearly see the focus and catagory I'm aiming at. Even if the story is about a big titty, pissy, preggo, redhead futa, who doms women and is a sub to men.

 

[Wifetheif]

I've been a fan of Flash Gordon for a long time. I just published som fan fiction with a TON of fetishes, BDSM, chastity, older woman, Role play, fem dom. pregnncy, stripping, race swapping, and so much more. I had a blast writing it and it seems to be going over well.

https://literotica.com/s/divergent-paths

 

[Dearelliot]

In real life I meet with professional Femdoms and usually try to include the fetishes that we do in our sessions in my stories, such as soiled panty tea, ball weights, ladies golden wine etc. Not for everyone, I suppose a bit too much for some, so I do warn my readers to be aware.