Could someone finish this story?

[mengiaboy]

I read a story on here that I absolutely loved. The only problem is it was just getting good when the author (Aid1967) stopped writing and hasn't been heard from on here since 2002. I was wondering if someone with a good imagination could give the story a possible ending? or if Aid1967 would so much the better. The story is Humiliated by cheating wife. http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=64027 Thanks.

 

[Handley_Page]

Then I shot her.

[ sorry, could not resist that ]

 

[Zeb_Carter]

I'm sorry, I had to stop reading after the first paragraph.

The store as is, is in desperate need of an editor.

ETA: Why don't you take a stab at finishing the story.

 

[sr71plt]

I don't think it's considered good form to mess around with someone else's story.

Suggest you write what you want written yourself.

 

[Stella_Omega]

What about it caught your attention?

It all seems pretty run of the mill to me, dime a dozen, been there done that.

But I like the locked naked in the woodshed part of it, some things never grow old.

 

[jomar]

Forget them! I would be happy to finish the story for you! Please pm your credit card number to me including the expiration date and the security code on the back to cover my meager living costs while I finish the story. My author name will be Aid1967.5 and I will guarantee to get you off (it'll be a wankfest!) or some of your money back.

 

[mengiaboy]

What about it caught your attention?

It all seems pretty run of the mill to me, dime a dozen, been there done that.

But I like the locked naked in the woodshed part of it, some things never grow old.

Yes the locked in the woodshed part was one of the things. I think it was the way she was (it seems to me) fucking with him and acting like she didn't want to punish him etc. When I believe the direction it was going it was ALL her idea to begin with. But I like the way the poor smuck is an unwilling participant but unable to do anything to stop it. As a result he has to suffer the humilation of someone else doing his wife while he has to do things like be locked naked in the woodshed. I would like to know what other cruel things the bitch has in store for him.

 

[3113]

It all seems pretty run of the mill to me, dime a dozen, been there done that.

I would like to know what other cruel things the bitch has in store for him.

I think we can refer you to part 2 of some other story. All you need do is imagine that the names stay the same, and supply the following line to hitch the two tales together: "When I was let out of the woodshed, my wife...." If this story is as run-of-the-mill as Stella says than any part two of a dozen other LovingWives Stories will tell you exactly what the writer likely would have had the cruel bitch do.

This would let us writers continue to write our own stories rather than someone else's. So, fellow writers, can we direct this reader to part 2 of some other story that will suffice?

 

[mengiaboy]

I think we can refer you to part 2 of some other story. All you need do is imagine that the names stay the same, and supply the following line to hitch the two tales together: "When I was let out of the woodshed, my wife...." If this story is as run-of-the-mill as Stella says than any part two of a dozen other LovingWives Stories will tell you exactly what the writer likely would have had the cruel bitch do.

This would let us writers continue to write our own stories rather than someone else's. So, fellow writers, can we direct this reader to part 2 of some other story that will suffice?

Yeh well Lets have it. Where are all of these "run of the mill" stories that describe the same thing? lol I think there is a reason know one has directed me to one of them.

 

[3113]

Yeh well Lets have it. Where are all of these "run of the mill" stories that describe the same thing? lol I think there is a reason know one has directed me to one of them.

Well, I haven't because I don't read stories like that. But I'm betting someone here can direct you to a few.

 

[sadangel]

Well, I haven't because I don't read stories like that. But I'm betting someone here can direct you to a few.

Don't ya love it when they don't know how or refuse to use the search button for stories where the stories are. I've found many a story to read, some good, some bad, some excellent.

So dude...try using the search button where the stories are to find the ending or an ending or whatever. Many here are writing their own stories, and not completing someone else's or trying to find something for someone that they could find on their own with just a little effort and perseverance.

 

[Stella_Omega]

Yes the locked in the woodshed part was one of the things. I think it was the way she was (it seems to me) fucking with him and acting like she didn't want to punish him etc. When I believe the direction it was going it was ALL her idea to begin with. But I like the way the poor smuck is an unwilling participant but unable to do anything to stop it. As a result he has to suffer the humilation of someone else doing his wife while he has to do things like be locked naked in the woodshed. I would like to know what other cruel things the bitch has in store for him.

Sounds like you're ready to finish writing the story yourself! Give it a shot.

I like your insights, honestly I do. ut I think that, far from being "unable" to stop it, he's actually unwilling to stop it. He's going to end up sucking paul's dick, IMO.