shakna
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Made me sniffle, you jerk. Awesome story.
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Made me sniffle, you jerk. Awesome story.
I hadn’t written anything for years when I came across the following comment on a story I had written ten years earlier. It single-handedly motivated me to get writing again. There is nothing like getting a positive kick up the arse. Thankyou Oldromantic, wherever you are.I got this one this morning on "Homeless." It's my new favourite.
"Anonymous about 4 hours ago
I will not read anymore of your stories. I spend too much time with tears in my eyes. Time for me to register with Literotica so you can be in my first five favorites!"
It just made my day!
Post your comments when a fan makes your day.![]()
Of all the things that are disturbing about UK culture, dogging has to be one of the worst. It would be bad enough if that shit happened one time and people found out about it. The fact that's it's a thing that recurs often? No wonder your empire folded. You managed to get all your men killed in war and all you have left is confused betas in denial and skanks desperate for anyone that can still get it up.
My latest contains the tag-line 'Dogging and Witchcraft on the wild windy moors'. This is my first anonymous comment.
It would really make my day if, ideally before I get any more comments, someone here posted another comment blaming witchcraft for the break-up of the British Empire. I'd do it myself, but I wouldn't get quite the same satisfaction from reading it.
I’m actually jealous. I hope that I write something that provokes a response like this some day.
Judging by the activity on this forum in the last few days, what you need is:
A true account of a family that goes dogging together but doesn't invite their bisexual son, written in the second person.
Maybe the best 750 word project I've ever read. Blunt and in your face, just as it should be. Strike fast and cut deep. End her without the B.S of "we can work it out ". You can't. Move along, nothing is left.
Just the sort of story my daughter needs. To remind her of what a HAPPY relationship should look like.
That's hilarious. I've written some parallel universe stories so that has extra zing.I just got two comments today, for my story "Shaving My Mom."
OK. Think about it. Think about the title. If there's any story the title of which provides truth in advertising, this is the one.
I got these two comments from Anonymous:
"He SHAVED his mother's pussy. A shaved pussy is a turn off. So is a "landing strip. What is going to land on it? Mosquitoes? Flies?
WHAT HE HELL IS THIS DOING IN THE HAIRY PUSSY CATAGORY??????"
zing
And . . .
"I quit reading when they decided he would shave her."
My reactions:
1. I wasn't aware there was such a thing as a "Hairy Pussy" category. Let alone a "catagory." I wonder if Anonymous is accessing my story from a parallel universe. You know, where Spock has a beard, and Uhura looks hot in that crop top.
2. If a shaved pussy is a turn-off for you, why would you even open a story called "Shaving My Mom"? I'm puzzled.
Wasn't quite sure how this one was going to go down with Lit's audience. Should have realised that I wouldn't be the only one getting a cathartic kick out of this one.Thank you for this story. The description of the cult is frighteningly spot on. And I appreciate the attention to detail in the aftermath of escaping.
Amazing
I can honestly say I've never furiously masterbated and cried while reading incest erotica before. Truly exceptional.
Multiple times without touching, or toys. You need to bottle whatever it is and sell it!This was a comment on Fantasy Fulfilled Ch 4. Nice to see a reader enjoying what I write, especially for a whole week at a time!
"I appreciate these detailed love stories.
Believe it or not...its these sort of good feeling stories that get me so turned on that i cum multiple times, no toys or touch needed. Writer, you've made me cum every night the past two weeks. I needed the release really bad. Thank you! ❤"
...You give hope that loving partners can transcend vanilla and really enjoy sex.
I was very impressed by this very special fairy tale.
Like all fairy tales, it favors clear characters and somewhat exaggerated events.
But that's good, it's just a story and one that went very much to my heart.
And as I used to do as a child, reading my fairy tales, I want to believe that something like this could happen in the reality of our time.
I have learned something through this story of yours. Cryptophasia, how fascinating.
With grateful greetings from Germany.
I must confess after the first chapter of Hostile Takeover, I was a bit 'meh' not bad but not great. But after chapter 2, I'm solidly on board. This is a prime example of why we readers need to be patient and let a writer develop their story.
Sometimes even after waiting, a story turns out to be a dud, or even worse. Other times, such as you've done here, it turns out to be a well written extremely hot piece of erotica. Irina's dominance of Peyton was an incredibly hot factor. Well done. I very much look forward to many more chapters.
Only took three chaptersI must be stoned, this far in and now I see this is durty Pokymon.![]()