Comments That Make Your Day

"There's nothing sexy about magnons and quantitative time crystals, dipshit!"

This was a PM, and I very nearly peed myself laughing when I read it. I mean, they're not wrong, but THAT'S what they took away from Mike & Karen ch.25?

Gawd, I love my readers... 🤣🤣🤣🤣
 
I've received 10(!) whole comments for my Nude Day story https://literotica.com/s/the-champion-and-her-prize. That's pretty good for me, but a couple of comments went on about how it was inappropriate for Jane's coach to have sex with her. Never mind that a) Andy isn't really her coach, and b) Jane is over 18 and asked Andy to puncture her hymen.

Then I received this from sensible Anon, which restored my faith in my readers.

"Wow. The fact that he's an older, experienced man is bs. I don't know many guy's - regardless of those factors - that would have acted any differently in that situation IRL. And yeah, it's about a coach and an athlete, so what? Why is that even an issue? Nitpick much? It's fiction.... it's erotica.... it's fantasy.... it doesn't have to be politically correct. Can't help but wonder if the same type of comments are left for daddy/daughter, brother/sister stories. Get over it. It's a story like any other - a good one - and well written. I hope there's a part two."
 
I guess we're into the summer doldrums. Comments, favs and followers have slowed drastically.

But today brings one on Homeless: :)

This is my second reading
I love the happy ending 5+ Stars
 
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Okay, that scene when they say their vows during sex, that. Was. So. HOT.
Nice to see the House Boat still entertaining people.
 
I smile at a lot of the comments on my story, both the good and the occasional not, but this one on Hammered: Big City, Dark Nights, my noir-type ode to Mickey Spillane, really made my day:

It was like listening to the radio back at about 1954 or 1955. Those great old cop dramas we used our imaginations to make far more real and exciting than the television would a couple of years later. Great story and a five only because they do not allow a ten.
 
Here are two comments from Becki's Story

Anonymous26 days ago
I’m sure that all of us guys of a certain age hope that, should anything happen to our “Barb”, a “Becki” will come along. Great story; 5 stars. Chapter 2?
Anonymous25 days ago
Wow, what a beautiful read. The loving and the build up was so touching. I loved the pace and progression from colleague to friend to lover. They both needed it but happened because they wanted it, was never about settling. Because of our losses, we are able to appreciate our new gains better...! I can appreciate a well written piece but what I appreciate most is when that piece can move me in a very touching way. Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to reading all your stories...!
I had spent a lot of time crafting the story with a lot of input from some female friends. It was rewarding to have that recognized.
 
Absolutely lovely comment on Spotlight:

So…wow. Her eyes. What an amazing device to tell even more of the story. I started reading this early morning today and I knew it was the wrong time of my day and I knew I needed time to read it straight through, uninterrupted. The pace is reflective of their relationship: fast and furious. A brilliant piece of lit and erotica. So…wow.
 
A recent comment on 'Pure Temptation.'

I told myself that I would not read any more of these kinds of stories but I did. Now my face is all wet with tears and snot. This was wonderful.
 
Most comments that I see on stories are so mean that it is probably the biggest reason that I'll never try to write any of my fantasies and desires! My favourites, any comment that show's appreciation!
 
Most comments that I see on stories are so mean that it is probably the biggest reason that I'll never try to write any of my fantasies and desires! My favourites, any comment that show's appreciation!
Just write! Comments are just words. Ignore the haters and enjoy the ones that nice, otherwise you'll never have the pleasure of sharing your fantasies.
 
Most comments that I see on stories are so mean that it is probably the biggest reason that I'll never try to write any of my fantasies and desires! My favourites, any comment that show's appreciation!

Seconding what Smuttyandfun said -- don't stress about the haters. It says a lot about them that they have nothing better to do than leave shitty comments on stories they get to read for free.

It's worth noting though that Lit does give writers the option to turn off comments, if you really don't want to deal with them. People can still send private feedback that comes through to your email address but they don't get published on the story.
 
Just write! Comments are just words. Ignore the haters and enjoy the ones that nice, otherwise you'll never have the pleasure of sharing your fantasies.

Seconding what Smuttyandfun said -- don't stress about the haters. It says a lot about them that they have nothing better to do than leave shitty comments on stories they get to read for free.

It's worth noting though that Lit does give writers the option to turn off comments, if you really don't want to deal with them. People can still send private feedback that comes through to your email address but they don't get published on the story.
You two are very kind, but I'm also a terrible writer! lol
 
Two nice comments this morning: :) The second is kind of back-handed but still good.

April Fool - Best Friend (Loving Wives Category)
Cute. And cute is always a pleasant surprise in this category

And this on Hidden Boss ;)

Was it realistic....well, maybe almost sorta. It did get a little over the top, especially at the end.

Did it grab my attention and hold it through the whole story? Yes, yes it did. I came right up to the edge of 'crashing out of the story in disbelief", but never went over the line.

And that, and only that, is what makes a good piece of fiction. Nice job!
 
A couple i received on my latest story:

"You made Sam too big an asshole."

I guess, you can't please all of the people all of the time, and some of the people none of the time. :D


"This dude fucks other men's wives. He should die in a grease fire."

This guy must be an escapee from LW!


Comshaw
 
LOL, this guy likes his BTB stories. ;)

April Fool - No longer

6******, Hooyah, Salutes so very original and profound. Ya did real good with on this one; and you got her to willfully confess over her social media - outstanding!!!
 
Love this comment that came in this morning on Wheelchair Girl: ;)

Excellent writing--skill, clarity, and plot. Best writing I've seen on this site in a few years
 
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Two years ago a reader left the comment below for the third part of my novel. Today the same reader went back and marked part two as a favorite also. :)


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Brilliant descriptive writing in a fantastic story

by ****** on 09/15/2020
I really appreciate your attention to detail during the action scenes in your story - I don’t know much about surfing but I can visualize all of the runs, same with the choreography for the squad. It also enhances the sex scenes - really well done. Looking forward to the conclusion of this story and perhaps more with the same characters!

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Most comments that I see on stories are so mean that it is probably the biggest reason that I'll never try to write any of my fantasies and desires! My favourites, any comment that show's appreciation!
Around here, them as can do. Them as can’t write nasty comments. I’ve yet to see any nasties from somebody whose work I admire.

I’ll accept - and try to learn from - negative comments if they’re signed. Anonymous negativity is like misspelled scrawlings on bridge abutments, no more than reflections on the shallowness and crimped souls of those who wrote them, something to be ignored and, eventually, painted over.

Keep us posted. Please.
 
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Another nice comment this afternoon on the Gunfighter: :)

Great story! You have a knack for writing about the old west and would love to see a few more from you!
 
I smiled at one comment I received, seriously me warning of the dangers of STIs and pregnancy, with my story characters having had bareback sex. It wasn’t like contraception or condoms were stressed or even mentioned in the story, but this well-intentioned reader (sincerely trying to be helpful, I think) took the time to make me aware. Well, bless them for the thought.
 
The same reader commenting on Following Laura's Footsteps yesterday came back and gave me an additional 5* this morning.
I like their way of thinking. :D

 
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