Comments/Suggestions on the New Story Review Thread

[fieryjen]

Thank you so much for the mention, Red

I got this one bad comment about the chapter, and I let it get to me. But any other comment has been nothing but positive - and yours really brightened my day. I appreciate the effort, and I hope you'll find the time to read the rest of the story at some point. Thanks so much.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Thank you so much for the mention, Red

I got this one bad comment about the chapter, and I let it get to me. But any other comment has been nothing but positive - and yours really brightened my day. I appreciate the effort, and I hope you'll find the time to read the rest of the story at some point. Thanks so much.

You're very welcome. I do hope to read the others. I enjoyed that one.

 

[fieryjen]

You're very welcome. I do hope to read the others. I enjoyed that one.

You do realize that you picked the only chapter I've posted that doesn't actually have any sex in it?

 

[nikki_at_night]

Thanks Red

I appreciate your review of my story Sexual Sabateur.

I am pleased that you liked the writing style, which I tried to make as fast and breathless as the encounter itself.

I did get several comments about posting in the wrong category. Most were not as polite and understanding as yours. I'm going to resubmit the story, i think, in Loving Wives.

As far as the "1 bombs" go. Oh well you can't please everyone.

Nikki

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

You do realize that you picked the only chapter I've posted that doesn't actually have any sex in it?

That's okay. . .I don't mind sexless stories.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

I appreciate your review of my story Sexual Sabateur.

I am pleased that you liked the writing style, which I tried to make as fast and breathless as the encounter itself.

I did get several comments about posting in the wrong category. Most were not as polite and understanding as yours. I'm going to resubmit the story, i think, in Loving Wives.

As far as the "1 bombs" go. Oh well you can't please everyone.

Nikki

You're welcome. Yeah, that category is confusing. I had my "Met on the Net" series put in Erotic Couplings and kept it there, though folks flamed me a few times for it not being in Loving Wives. I know what a loving wife is. . .the couple in "Met/Net" are anything but.

It is up to you if you want to move it or not, but you'll get flamed there too. There are folks that just sit on that category and wait for a cheating wife story to come up, they don't bother reading it fully, but glance then slap that one on there for shits and giggles.

Good luck with whatever you decide to do and I look forward to seeing your work further on.

~ Red.

 

[drksideofthemoon]

Thanks....

Janiexx,

Thanks for the reviews of my Prairie Dreams pieces. I appreciated your kind words...

 

[janiexx]

Janiexx,

Thanks for the reviews of my Prairie Dreams pieces. I appreciated your kind words...

You're welcome. Your two stories brightened my day.

janiexx

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

YIKES... I was a busy camper Wednesday . . . I'll do those Wednesday stories later on today (Thursday) in the morning or afternoon. Sorry.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

YIKES... I was a busy camper Wednesday . . . I'll do those Wednesday stories later on today (Thursday) in the morning or afternoon. Sorry.

No need to apologize....you've got a full plate....hugs. Just glad to hear from you again.

 

[sirhugs]

Help Wanted

I have a friend visiting from out of towm Staurday/sunday. So ifthe saturday postings are late, I might not be able to review, so any volunteers to cover are welcomed....

 

[rachlou]

Red ~ thanks for the lovely review of both parts to Awakening...

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Red ~ thanks for the lovely review of both parts to Awakening...

You're very welcome. I can't tell you how much that first chapter touched me. It was exactly how I would have liked something like that to happen to me. Some wine to relax and a nice lady who thought I was attractive.

A great tale rachlou. You're very welcome.

 

[Boxlicker101]

Thanks for the good review on "In-Laws on Display", SirHugs. It is rather short for me, 3,162 words, counting the paragraph at the end where I ask for votes and comments. With the limitations inherent in the subject, I thought that was enough. There will definitely be a sequel. I will probably tempt fate and put the sequel in LW.

 

[sirhugs]

Thanks for the good review on "In-Laws on Display", SirHugs. It is rather short for me, 3,162 words, counting the paragraph at the end where I ask for votes and comments. With the limitations inherent in the subject, I thought that was enough. There will definitely be a sequel. I will probably tempt fate and put the sequel in LW.

I think more "sex" could always be added, but loved it, obviously....

 

[sirhugs]

shhhhhh...quiet here...out wabbitt hunting, everybody?

 

[janiexx]

shhhhhh...quiet here...out wabbitt hunting, everybody?

I haven't been out wabbit hunting, but I have been very busy so apologies for not writing any story reviews over the last few weeks.

I'm not sure I can continue at the moment...so if anyone would like to take over the Monday slot, please do. I'll do whatever I can to help.

It's been great but Spring has sprung here in the UK and those wabbits aren't alone in enjoying the time of year...

Janiexx

 

[CharleyH]

Over in the poetry feedback forum, they have a "New Poem Reviews" thread... Someone goes through the new poems for the day and comments on one or two or however many they felt were stand-outs... sometimes they make constructive criticism, too... Those who want to do a review choose a day, Mon-Sun, for a time period...


has this ever been done in the AH for stories? Granted, poems are shorter and easier to read... and I'm not suggesting someone sit and read every single story listed on a given day... sometimes it's hard to make it through the first paragraph... but maybe we can comment on those that day that don't make us back-click, that we DO make it through?

Or mention those that DO make us back-click and why?


Just a thought... anyone interested in participating in a "New Story Review" thread?

I thought there was one? In reality I have reviewed on the poetry board in the past and its hard enough to be fair with people you don't know let alone ones you do. Lit stories are often duller than poetry, so no ... I cannot review Lit stories without being cruel to practically anyone.

 

[Grushenka]

My Big Puffy Nipples and Earth Day by grushenka, in exhibitionist & voyeur may not be outdoorsy enough for the contest, but contains more than enough style, deft dialogue and steamy sex for a third entry from a promising contributor. I think Grushenka writes firmly tongue in cheek, perhaps right down to his/her bio. I think in time, she should stretch out the sex scenes with more detail. If you like smutty, fun and fast paced, check this one out.

Sirhugs, thank you for the review. I did not realize contest entries had to be especially 'outdoorsy' (per the guidelines), but could be related to Earth Day observations. You question my gender and I honestly don't understand why. Obviously it's an easy enough thing to disguise one's self online, but for what it's worth my bio facts are all true. You did, however, give my husband a chuckle. Finally, my fourth entry (non-contest) is pending.

Again, thanks for the notice. - Gru

 

[sirhugs]

Sirhugs, thank you for the review. I did not realize contest entries had to be especially 'outdoorsy' (per the guidelines), but could be related to Earth Day observations. You question my gender and I honestly don't understand why. Obviously it's an easy enough thing to disguise one's self online, but for what it's worth my bio facts are all true. You did, however, give my husband a chuckle. Finally, my fourth entry (non-contest) is pending.

Again, thanks for the notice. - Gru

you write about women like a guy does...not that it's a bad thing....

 

[DG Hear]

To Red

Thank you nice red haired and friendly girl, for your help. It was much appreciated.
Just thought the story deserved a plug. It was well written and a good read.

How do I attach this link if I ever get in the mood to do another review. You know I'm not that good jumping around on these trheads.
your friend?
DG Hear

 

[rachlou]

DG... Thanks so much for that lovely review - it is very much appreciated. I've not been on the forum much lately, so I only just saw it.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Thank you nice red haired and friendly girl, for your help. It was much appreciated.
Just thought the story deserved a plug. It was well written and a good read.

How do I attach this link if I ever get in the mood to do another review. You know I'm not that good jumping around on these trheads.
your friend?
DG Hear

Just copy and paste the address into the post your writing.

 

[Selena_Kitt]

Thanks, Sirhugs, for your kind review of Lighting Doesn't Strike Twice...

 

[Mr. Unsexy]

hallo

I've found myself online a lot more often as of late and was wondering if there was a need for any more reviewers... I would like to help out if possible.