Comments/Suggestions on the New Story Review Thread

[FallingToFly]

It would probably take some modification of the forum code ( although not knowing vbulletin's features, I can't say for sure )

If so, I seriously doubt it will happen, because it would require quite a few edits just to get one thread appearing in two forums - even with the easiest solutions.

Why not just start one over there? They'll miss out on the last couple of months of reviews, but they can have any new reviews from that poin on out.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Regrettably, I have to give up my Tuesday spot. School is a priority for me right now, soI'm cuttign back. I'm also going to end the Tuesday Night Tarot, mainly because I have been exhausted after a couple readings for the last two weeks.

Hopefully, once my school and household schedule soothes itself down, I'll be able to pop in and do lots of guest reviews at random.

Good luck with school! And I soooooo look forward to your guest reviews. I know of priorities. . .and I wish you luck with school.

 

[LadyCibelle]

Regrettably, I have to give up my Tuesday spot. School is a priority for me right now, soI'm cuttign back. I'm also going to end the Tuesday Night Tarot, mainly because I have been exhausted after a couple readings for the last two weeks.

Hopefully, once my school and household schedule soothes itself down, I'll be able to pop in and do lots of guest reviews at random.

I already knew about it but it saddens me anyway. I'll miss reading your reviews and getting to peek into your psyche.

Take care of yourself, you sweet flutterbug, and don't let school overwhelm you.

ps: how was the shower last night?

 

[FallingToFly]

ps: how was the shower last night?

Troublesome. Today, I'm sore.

Oh, I'll be in and about as I can... but only as a poster. I just don't have time to read, period. And I should be heading to bed now, but Iknow if I do, I'll be awake at 2a.m. and groggy all tomorrow.

 

[Guest]

Kink In Your Coffee- Ch. 2 by neonurotic
http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=274202

Category: Fetish

Review:

It was certainly an intense fetish tale. It was rather hot in certain respects, although I admit to not sharing all of the fetishes (particularly the bit about urethral sounds). All in all, Cher and Lila seemed more than enough to tempt me for the most part to dip my pen in the company ink. Maybe that's the sub side of my switch persona. I don't know. I also enjoyed the way he tricked her that one time, fucking her like that as soon as he was loose. I also liked that she didn't really get mad or upset over it.

I give this one a 5. Although not totally to my taste in every sense, the author has a clear command of knowledge regarding his kinks. Further more, he shows an unashamed lust for them, which helps in any story. I noted some punctuation errors, but future chapters can avoid that pitfall with proper editing. All in all, I am impressed.

Much thanks to SEVERUSMAX for the time in reading my story and for such a great review!

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Much thanks to SEVERUSMAX for the time in reading my story and for such a great review!

You're very welcum. I enjoyed reading it and am glad that I did.

 

[Aurora Black]

Take care of yourself, you sweet flutterbug, and don't let school overwhelm you.

Good luck, sweetie. School is way more important than this. Do what you have to do.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Oh Aurora. . . Thanks so much for the wonderful review. I logged on this morning to see if stories were out and I saw the little green E and was soooooooo excited. I'm still sitting here in surprised giddiness and then to see you had taken the time to review it already and mention it was added pleasure and Danielle too read and commented. . . thanks to her for that. I soooooooo appreciate your review and I'm soooooo happy. . . Who do I kiss for the lovely E?

 

[sirhugs]

welcome back Red...all rested up to review on saturday?

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

welcome back Red...all rested up to review on saturday?

Hey there and thanks. Yes, I should be all set for Sat.

 

[Selena_Kitt]

Who do I kiss for the lovely E?

Well, you can kiss me... but I didn't do anything *grin* That would be Laurel... she gives out the bouncing green E's...

congrats on yours, Red... haven't read past the first page yet, but I'm likin' it so far!

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Well, you can kiss me... but I didn't do anything *grin* That would be Laurel... she gives out the bouncing green E's...

congrats on yours, Red... haven't read past the first page yet, but I'm likin' it so far!

Thanks Selena, I hope you continue to enjoy. . . *skips off to kiss Laurel*

 

[Guest]

It was a well deserved E Red. I couldn't quit reading. Even waved off the kid this morning when she came in to say goodbye for school...

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

It was a well deserved E Red. I couldn't quit reading. Even waved off the kid this morning when she came in to say goodbye for school...

Thanks very much.

 

[Guest]

Rora sweetie, you made my day. Thanks for the review. (by the by, Jason and Jamie are one and the same guy. Jason is playing with poor Alyssa's affection as the masked rogue Jamie.)

 

[Aurora Black]

Rora sweetie, you made my day. Thanks for the review. (by the by, Jason and Jamie are one and the same guy. Jason is playing with poor Alyssa's affection as the masked rogue Jamie.)

I know that now. I read one of the PCs that someone left.

 

[Aurora Black]

I know that now. I read one of the PCs that someone left.

Le sigh. That's what I get for not reading enough. But I have to work on my own stuff sometime.

 

[Aurora Black]

Oh Aurora. . . Thanks so much for the wonderful review. I logged on this morning to see if stories were out and I saw the little green E and was soooooooo excited. I'm still sitting here in surprised giddiness and then to see you had taken the time to review it already and mention it was added pleasure and Danielle too read and commented. . . thanks to her for that. I soooooooo appreciate your review and I'm soooooo happy. . . Who do I kiss for the lovely E?

I'm happy for you.

 

[Ada Stuart]

A few more...

Abduction Ch. 11
Ada Stuart
Sci-Fi & Fantasy

I love this heroine! This episode features a stirring battle of the sexes as Teri argues with Connor about the lack of balance in this strange world. He tries to seduce her, but she manages to resist his sensuality (with great difficulty). I gave this a 5.

Aurora, thank you so much for writing this wonderful review of my story ! You really made my day !

I'm so glad you liked the heroine - she's one of my favorites as well.

Ada

 

[Guest]

Le sigh. That's what I get for not reading enough. But I have to work on my own stuff sometime.

Yes you do...I'm waiting for the third chapter of Julia.

 

[Aurora Black]

Aurora, thank you so much for writing this wonderful review of my story ! You really made my day !

I'm so glad you liked the heroine - she's one of my favorites as well.

Ada

It was my pleasure, Ada.

Dani: Julia's on the back burner at the moment in favor of something new. I'll get back to it when I'm done.

 

[BrettJ]

From BrettJ

One of the things I'd like to see more in the reviews please, is more overall comment on the structure of the story. Were there any major errors in grammar, punctuation or spelling which detract from the story? Did the dialogue flow smoothly? If you are reviewing a chapter of an ongoing series, have you read the preceding chapters and are they worth a look?

In my opinion, I'd prefer to have it reviews that are longer, with more weight to them. We may not be able to get as many in, but it will give whoever's reading this thread a chance to know more about each piece of work.

BrettJ

Writer / Sometimes Critic / Sensualist

 

[Aurora Black]

One of the things I'd like to see more in the reviews please, is more overall comment on the structure of the story. Were there any major errors in grammar, punctuation or spelling which detract from the story? Did the dialogue flow smoothly? If you are reviewing a chapter of an ongoing series, have you read the preceding chapters and are they worth a look?

I already do this.

 

[BrettJ]

More from me

I see that from time to time AURORA, but not as much as I'd like. Did the story flow naturally? Was it sexy and arousing? Did any of it feel forced or rushed.

Heck, I know we're not reviewing Shakespeare here, but mannn, did I see some bad erotica when I first joined LIT. A few stories I thought could've been smokin' were absolutely ruined by bad grammar, spelling, et al.

BrettJ

Writer / Writing at the moment, actually / Sensualist

 

[Aurora Black]

I see that from time to time AURORA, but not as much as I'd like. Did the story flow naturally? Was it sexy and arousing? Did any of it feel forced or rushed.

Heck, I know we're not reviewing Shakespeare here, but mannn, did I see some bad erotica when I first joined LIT. A few stories I thought could've been smokin' were absolutely ruined by bad grammar, spelling, et al.

BrettJ

Writer / Writing at the moment, actually / Sensualist

Okey dokey.

And for future reference, please lay off the CAPS, bold and all that. You give the impression that you're YELLING for no damn reason.

I'm off to write, which is something that I've been doing too little of since I started reviewing. Ciao.