cinquains, anyone?

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Has anyone here written any cinquains?
They can be fun.

Kisses.
Warm, Soft
Licking, Sucking, Nibbling
My favorite greeting.
Smooches.​




What is a cinquain?


They were, believe it or not, invented by American Poet Adelaide Crapsey.

At the most basic level a cinquain is a diamond shaped five line poem or stanza.

The poem has one topic and the details describe the the topic's actions and feelings.

There are different schools of thought about what the "rules" of writing cinquains are.

Here are two variations you might try:

Method One
Line 1 - one word for the topic
Line 2 - 2 words to describes your topic
Line 3 - 3 words that describes the actions relating to your topic
Line 4 - 4 words that describes the feelings relating to your topic
Line 5 - one word that is another name for your topic


Method Two

Line 1 - two syllables
Line 2 - four syllables
Line 3 - six syllables
Line 4 - eight syllables
Line 5 - two syllables


Some other ideas:


Write about a noun. Cinquains generally fail if you try to make them about emotions, philosophies or other complex subjects. They should be about something concrete.

Don’t try to make each line complete or express a single thought. Each line should flow into the next or the poem will sound static.

Cinquains work best if you avoid adjectives and adverbs. This doesn’t mean you can’t have any, but focus on the nouns and the verbs. This almost always works best in a cinquain.

The poem should build toward a climax. The last line should serve as some sort of conclusion to the earlier thoughts. Often, the conclusion has some sort of surprise built into it.
 
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frustration.
endless waiting.
cruel half truths.
oceans weight submerges soul.
you.


(not quite i know but its a start!)
 
Thanks, lady!

sweetrendezvous said:

frustration.
endless waiting.
cruel half truths.
oceans weight submerges soul.
you.​


(not quite i know but its a start!)

Hey, I like it- it is much better than my example!

I'm not gonna take that "You" there personally, Boolie-girl.

Thanks for posting.

Sometimes it is fun to try out a new form of writing... it'd be cool if more folks here would try out a cinquain and share it. I like this form of poetry... I find it interesting.
 
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another Cinquain attempt here.

Diners.
Casual eats.
Sticky Menus. Pies.
Conversation, Relaxation.
Greasy spoons.​
 
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Your poems don't seem to obey the rules in your post.

Are the rules correct?
 
:) There seems to be many different ideas about what the "rules" of cinquains are.

I didn't express that very well in my original post-I've edited it a bit. Thanks!

I guess I'm just playing around w/ the form... perhaps badly.
In any case... having fun.

:)
 
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1girl2know said:
:) There seems to be many different ideas about what the "rules" of cinquains are.

I didn't express that well.

I guess I'm just playing around w/ the form... perhaps badly.
In any case... having fun.

:)

I remember a poem when I was a kid call Diamond Cut Diamond:


Two Cats
One up a tree
One under the tree
The cat up a tree is he
The cat under the tree is she
The tree is witch elm, just incidentally.
He takes no notice of she, she takes no notice of he.
He stares at the woolly clouds passing, she stares at the tree.
There's been a lot written about cats, by Old Possum, Yeats and Company
But not Alfred de Musset or Lord Tennyson or Poe or anybody
Wrote about one cat under, and one cat up, a tree.
God knows why this should be left for me
Except I like cats as cats be
Especially one cat up
And one cat under
A witch elm
Tree.
 
The formatting messed up -- it's meant to be diamond shaped.
 
Sub Joe said:
The formatting messed up -- it's meant to be diamond shaped.
Oh. Well, if you tilt your head to the right, it looks just like a tree.
 
Diamonds
Cold comfort.
Glistening, Sparkling, Shining.
Poor subsitute for love.
Eye Candy.​
 
1girl2know said:
Diamonds
Cold comfort.
Glistening, Sparkling, Shining.
Poor subsitute for love.
Eye Candy.​

......ooooooohhhhhhh!!!
like it!!!!!!

when i have time tonite i will try another one
 
Method One
Line 1 - one word for the topic
Line 2 - 2 words to describes your topic
Line 3 - 3 words that describes the actions relating to your topic
Line 4 - 4 words that describes the feelings relating to your topic
Line 5 - one word that is another name for your topic



tired.
no rest.
out of commission.
sinking,wearysouled,overwhelmed,over-ridden.
done.
 
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sweetrendezvous said:

tired.
no rest.
out of commission.
sinking,wearysouled,overwhelmed,over-ridden.
done.​


awww, sweetie...

it will be okay.
hang in there...

Oh, um, nice cinquain there!
 
1girl2know said:
awww, sweetie...

it will be okay.
hang in there...

Oh, um, nice cinquain there!


lol its not that bad, i was exaggerating for the sake of art... but yes sleep will be nice when i get there!!!
 
Hugging
Holding you tight
Calming, Warm, Intimate.
Cherishing with my loving arms
Embrace​
 
ooooh*, you used "CENTER" tags. I'm fixing my Diamond Cut Diamond poem now:


Two Cats
One up a tree
One under the tree
The cat up a tree is he
The cat under the tree is she
The tree is witch elm, just incidentally.
He takes no notice of she, she takes no notice of he.
He stares at the woolly clouds passing, she stares at the tree.
There's been a lot written about cats, by Old Possum, Yeats and Company
But not Alfred de Musset or Lord Tennyson or Poe or anybody
Wrote about one cat under, and one cat up, a tree.
God knows why this should be left for me
Except I like cats as cats be
Especially one cat up
And one cat under
A witch elm
Tree.

*The ooooh trademark is ® Sincerely Helene, 2005
 
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Headache.
Time Thief.
Throbbing, Aching, Thumping.
Too familiar life invader.
Pain.​
 
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