Brutal feedback!

[OhMissScarlett]

The world is full of knuckle-dragging douche-pouches who don't know the difference between fiction and non-fiction. Eventually, you'll get so bored here, you'll long to post in the Loving Wives category just to amuse yourself with the flaming wreckage.

 

[voluptuary_manque]

Live and learn.

Really! Even though my only LW story wasn't savaged as badly as some, I certainly wouldn't put anything in there again. Almost any of my stories can be placed in multiple categories and I'll bet yours can, too. From now on, if it can put into Romance, that's where it will go. Those folks are much more civilized.

 

[togitc]

For some reason I kind of want to write a LW story just to see what will happen.

 

[Darkniciad]

For some reason I kind of want to write a LW story just to see what will happen.

That's exactly why I wrote one *laugh*

It's a nice challenge to find a way to navigate those waters and come out with a decent score. I'm sitting at a 4.67 right now, but it's been as high as 4.75, on the first page of the category toplist.

 

[jomar]

LOL! Yep. The minute I saw the title of this thread I thought, "Oh, dear, she put the story in Loving Wives, didn't she?"

Ha! Me too.

As others have said, don't sweat the nasty feedback there. Wear it with pride!

 

[Lady_Guenivere]

Oh...now this guy (I know big assumption) is a real winner!


This message contains feedback for: Lady_GuenivereAbout the submission: SurrenderThis feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments: A woman with this kind of secret is a gutpile when hubby finds out and hires someone like me, I like to cut up whores.

 

[Selena_Kitt]

Oh...now this guy (I know big assumptions) is a real winner!


This message contains feedback for: Lady_GuenivereAbout the submission: SurrenderThis feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments: A woman with this kind of secret is a gutpile when hubby finds out and hires someone like me, I like to cut up whores.

See? Scary scary scary folks.

I wrote an anti-LW story. Intentionally. Tried to hit all the nerves, cover all the bases. (Except that one dude, the pregnancy obsessed one.) Man, did it create controversy.

And yeah, some really angry men out there. It's a psychologically challenged audience...

 

[Lady_Guenivere]

See? Scary scary scary folks.

I wrote an anti-LW story. Intentionally. Tried to hit all the nerves, cover all the bases. (Except that one dude, the pregnancy obsessed one.) Man, did it create controversy.

And yeah, some really angry men out there. It's a psychologically challenged audience...

Speaking of preganant...would you look at that gorgeous bump of yours! I bet you are stunning these days! How long now?

 

[Selena_Kitt]

Speaking of preganant...would you look at that gorgeous bump of yours! I bet you are stunning these days! How long now?

9 weeks... or so.

 

[Boxlicker101]

Here is one example of the email...yikes.

:caning:

This message contains feedback for: Lady_GuenivereAbout the submission: SurrenderThis feedback was sent by: Anonymous Comments: Really dont like whores that fuck around on their marriages. Wish you were strong enough to take public comments, but then we all have our own fears.

Actually, this one is pretty mild, compared to some that have been posted, including the guy who offered to cut you up. LW stories tend to attract some psychos and weirdos. However, they also attract mostly normal people.

 

[Lady_Guenivere]

Actually, this one is pretty mild, compared to some that have been posted, including the guy who offered to cut you up. LW stories tend to attract some psychos and weirdos. However, they also attract mostly normal people.

Yes, lots of normal people too. As the day has gone on I have received about 30 emails...and most of them have been very positive and supportive from some decent folks.

Hey, I don't mind negative feedback...I just find the personal attacks a little freaky.

 

[3113]

For some reason I kind of want to write a LW story just to see what will happen.

Well, ya kinda know what'll happen. Writing a story there is like throwing someone to the piranas. Story's likely to get chomped up in a feeding frenzy. Fascinating to watch but also pretty grim...if you have any feelings for the story

 

[voluptuary_manque]

Dig! The story I wrote was in response to a story that really disturbed me. I got feedback from someone who was angry that I'd dared touch the original, from people who didn't like the fact that my protagonist had outsmarted the bad guys, and a whole lot of responses from guys who were relieved that finally a good guy had won. Admittedly, from some of the responses I could tell that they hadn't followed the story too closely . . .

 

[gauchecritic]

Catches Lauren's eye from the back of the room and waves. (hopeless.ful smiley)

Just wanted to say to x; fine bit of exposition there. Very cranial and abstruse. Well worth pondering.

 

[damppanties]

Eventually, you'll get so bored here, you'll long to post in the Loving Wives category just to amuse yourself with the flaming wreckage.

Yes.

 

[Boxlicker101]

Sometimes it's fun to read the comments on LW stories. Here are ten consecutive comments, out of 22 that Part 1 of this story garnered:

disappointed?
12/10/08 By: Anonymous
she Cheats w/cliff, and he's disappointed?
for how long?how many? just invite the guy to his own bed (w/o him in it of course)



Like a dog returns to its vomit, Anonymous is back
04/08/07 By:
Yeehaw! My good buddy Anonymous is back with more of his scintillating commentary that everybody is just dying to read. Go ahead there, ace, and inspire us with more of your superb wit. Hahahahahahahahahaha!



What a pile of dogshit!
04/08/07 By: Anonymous
Yikes - are your X's relative? Or do you suck dick like XX?



for all you wimp men writers
04/08/07 By: Anonymous in usa
first i think that a man should be a man and not a sissyboy. and for you writers who like for men to be wimps, take a gun and blow what you have for a mind out of your head.just as serious as you're about writing this kind of shit, i'm just as serious about the gun to the head.



Earth to Commentors
04/07/07 By: Anonymous
Did any of you happen to notice the story was written two years ago!! ..no I thought not.

Middle of the road story--could have been done better. I thought the characters were a little bit like cardboard.


write public warning
04/07/07 By: Anonymous in USA
From seventeen comments (until now) only four liked it, don't you get it? Most of the readers don't enjoy this Whimp stories. Why won't you write at the first line wimp husband story if you have to continue?


I just love ass wipes like XX who tell
04/07/07 By: Anonymous
everyone what to read and what to skip and yet he/she/it hasn't writen a fucking thing. And if you don't like cuck stories stop reading them you fucking retared!


Doesn't inspire
04/07/07 By:
Same song, second verse. More cuckolded wimp fantasy that's frankly dull and boring. The prose is distinctly average with a few grammatical blunders tossed in for good measure. The characterizations are threadbare and uninspired and, the storyline is tired, having been trotted out dozens of times before. There's nothing significant in this tale so skip this one and don't bother reading chapter two.



Pure Crap!
04/07/07 By: Anonymous in Chicago IL
What a waste of time for someone to write and read this bullshit. I wish they would create a cuckhold catagory in the index for garbage like this.




Say How About A Little Perspective
11/23/05 By: Anonymous in USA
Say writer - I would like to barrow your car next weekend and I promise to bring it home to your fully serviced but with some swelling around the carriage and dried cum on parts of the body and grille - OK? No - Why Not?

Well then how about your wife then? OKAY wow thats great - my friends and I will try to have her home by Monday morning with a few expanded holes but filled up with cum just the way you like her eh. If you smile nice you can have copies of the gangbang videos ok.

So now that we have estabolished where your values are - you may now go to the nearest police station and register for this neat awareness program they have or - or you could get some serious mental help little sick one!!!

 

[3113]

Sometimes it's fun to read the comments on LW stories. Here are ten consecutive comments, out of 22 that Part 1 of this story garnered!

Only category that maintains abusive conversation for all involved I mean, you're right. Every other cat is dull by compare. You post in something like Romance and all you get is "Great Story!" and "Loved it! Keep writing."

So. Has anyone written a story for LW about a wife who repeatedly cheats on her husband who ignores her because he's obsessed with reading Loving Wives stories and leaving brutal feedback on them?

 

[OhMissScarlett]

So. Has anyone written a story for LW about a wife who repeatedly cheats on her husband who ignores her because he's obsessed with reading Loving Wives stories and leaving brutal feedback on them?

Not that I know of, but that would be priceless. We used to have a thread with a bunch of preposterous LW story ideas. Think we all agreed we'd have to write about an "uberwimp" hubby whose wife is wooed by a female to male tranny plumber or somesuch.

 

[TE999]

I purposely wrote a LW story I knew would bring the wasps from the nest...and it sure did! That was some of the weirdest, nastiest and twisted feedback I have ever received.

I laughed my ass off! What a bunch of fuckin' losers.

 

[3113]

I purposely wrote a LW story I knew would bring the wasps from the nest...and it sure did! That was some of the weirdest, nastiest and twisted feedback I have ever received.

What are the requirements of such a story?

 

[slyc_willie]

That's exactly why I wrote one *laugh*

It's a nice challenge to find a way to navigate those waters and come out with a decent score. I'm sitting at a 4.67 right now, but it's been as high as 4.75, on the first page of the category toplist.

Same here. My very first story was tossed in LW, before I knew what an acid-dip that category was. Surprisingly enough, it's floated just above the 4.5 mark ever since. Now and then, I'll get some righteously-inspired lengthy diatribe full of morality, usually aimed at the main character having married a stripper in the first place.

My suspicion is that the majority of hatemongering commenters in the LW cat are essentially insecure and frail men who have not quite yet grown up. But God bless 'em; they give us comedy.

 

[slyc_willie]

What are the requirements of such a story?

Cuckold husband, married to minority wife, she turns the tables, gets revenge . . . oh, and hulking, muscular ex-con lovers of various non-white races for the wife are a definite plus.

The story works especially well if the hubby is easily subdued.

I got that from a fellow writer here who submitted a story just for the express purpose of pissing off the LW readers. It's called "The Loving Wife," for obvious reasons.

The story was pretty basic, but the comments make it priceless.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Youre casting pearls before swine, people!

When you give it up for free
You become the fuckee.

 

[Darkniciad]

Same here. My very first story was tossed in LW, before I knew what an acid-dip that category was. Surprisingly enough, it's floated just above the 4.5 mark ever since. Now and then, I'll get some righteously-inspired lengthy diatribe full of morality, usually aimed at the main character having married a stripper in the first place.

My suspicion is that the majority of hatemongering commenters in the LW cat are essentially insecure and frail men who have not quite yet grown up. But God bless 'em; they give us comedy.

*sigh* Every time I see that ava, I miss my swords. Had to sell them and my Transformers to finance the boy's entrance into the world.

Every couple of months, someone will comment on mine, and there's usually someone right behind them, often in direct opposition. The LW readers must watch the Public Feedback forum like hawks.

 

[Lady_Guenivere]

So. Has anyone written a story for LW about a wife who repeatedly cheats on her husband who ignores her because he's obsessed with reading Loving Wives stories and leaving brutal feedback on them?

*snerk* Now that is funny...sounds like an evil plot. I likes it!