Breath Taker

Elliot:

"No!" Elliot found himself hastilly moving to intercept Torie before she climbed the stairs, barking at her more forcefully than could ever be acceptable. He knew the moment he had, he had really screwed up. How could he have completely forgotten about her...

He should have planned on this, he should have known she would come, and been ready for her... "Pardon me sir, but you MUST excuse me for a few minutes..." Elliot said to Aaron as he caught Torie by her elbow.

Collecting his thoughts as he looked into her eyes, seeing the quietly growing surprise in them, he attempted to give her an explination. "Hon, we need to talk, away from my mother, she... It is bad, very bad..." Elliot felt his emotions twisting in his gut. This just wasn't the time, damn it, not now... He thought to himself as he tried to lead Torie back out toward the front.
 
Jumping when he all but screamed at her,Torie paused on the flight of steps and blinked at Elliot as she canted her head, when he hastily left his customer to come over to her and began to lead her to the door she frowned slightly,"what the hell happened? What do you mean it is bad? Is she sick?" She is slowly being rolled along the floor by his hand on her arm and she slowly tugs it away and rolls so she is in front of him now effectively blocking his way as she moves to cross her arms up under her chest.

"Elliot you didn't call last night and you didn't even call this morning?" She moves closer to him her hands sliding along his chest and he quickly stops her from going any closer and takes a step back. The puzzled look returns to her eyes as well as the hurt of the rejection she is feeling. "I see." Is all she says as she drops her hands to her side and looks into the man's eyes before her.
 
Elliot:

"She's forbidden me from being with you." Elliot said flatly. He saw the rush of hurt fill Torie's eyes. "We need to talk about this, but not here. I don't want to lose you, do you understand?" Elliot said, the sudden potency of Torie's emotions made his mouth water. He stepped forward again, and looked into her eyes.

The hunger was creeping back again, knives in his stomach, cutting at his humanity. "Please..." He all but pleaded for her to come outside with him.
 
Tories eyes filled with unshed tears and she nodded as he led her outside slowly. Moving almost mechanically as she steps along with him his hand still on her arms. Her feelings are overwhelming her and it is getting harder to see. "but why? I ...I didn't think Ihad done anything wrong."Her voice was soft and think with emotions. "Please Elliot why does she hate any woman that gets close to you? You didn't think.... you don't think she wants you THAT way do you?" Her hands move to his as they round the corner of the building and pause int the small alley on the side. " Please Elliot let me go and talk to her, I ..I won't say anything mean." Her hands slide along his chest again as she moved against him." Please Elliot I missed you so much last night."
 
Elliot:

The passions and strong emotions Torie had always felt for him had always set him aflame, but now, after the awakening he had had last night with Melinda, it was hightened to such a level that he wanted to devour her whole. What was worse was that he knew how to do it now, and it would be... Be so easy. Her lips hovered near to him, and her breath touched his face. He was being drawn in by her soft, caring hands.

Do it, He thought, just taste her soul, just a small taste, it won't hurt her... He groaned with lust and frustration as he turned his face away. "She won't listen to me, she won't listen to you... Its her damned religion... Its yours, Its this whole fucked up world. And, Torie... I need you so bad... In my life." His own emotions were a topsy turvy thing suddenly, and he was no longer the master of the situation, Torie's emotions were possessing HIM.

Turning away, he slapped his hands against the brick alley walls, cursing visciously. "Damn her! Damn the bible, and damn her fucking god!" He barked, marking each curse with a slap of his hands. Breathing heavilly, his back to Torie, he hung his head. "What am I supposed to do... Father..." He whispered to himself.
 
Her eyes shed the tears that had been welling up in there as Elliot turned from her and pressed his hands to the wall, She assumed he was pleading with his religious father and she moved up against him, pressing her hips to his body and stroking his hair as she leaned in and slid a kiss along his lips."Just come to me when you can Elliot, I will always be here for you." Her body was warm against his back and her hands were soft as they stroked his body her breathing soft and her tears slid along her face as she laid her head onto his back.

High up above Melinda looked down on the two of them and shook her head, She hit the wondow a few times but no one looked up as she watched Torie embrace her son her head shaking as she knew what was about to come.
 
Elliot:

"You love me..." Elliot breathed in a sigh, turning to face her. "But could you if you knew what I am? My mother told me last night... Damn her fucking soul. Damn it to hell!" Elliot's hands shook as he reached out to take ahold of Torie. "She told me who my father is..."
 
Shaking her head Torie looked into Elliot's eyes,"What youa re adopted? YOur father has some sort of disease?" She took both hishands in her own and smiled softly at him,"whatever it is Elliot I love you, I will always love you." HEr eyes searched his own as she continued to hold his hands and she whipered,"She will go away and we can get back to our lives. She only came for a visit, remember?"
 
Arron:

::nodded his head as he heard the price, his arms crossing on his chest a finger bumping his lips as he thought.Arron, noticed the slaming and banging, but only thought it was the lady that slapped Eliot throwing a fit.::

"No not speachless, just wondering if I have the funds now for such a purchase...."

::Arron spun hearing the bell and seeing the girl from the resturtante enter. As she rode by, he moved and allowed her to pass, then stepped back further seeing Elliot leap at the girl. With another nod, Arron excused Elliot to deal with his business.::

-S- "Wow I hope the two girls know about one another"
 
Elliot:

"No, I was not adopted, my mother was raped... By a demon... I am not human..." Elliot said without hesitation. "Everything about me that you love, its, its inhuman..." Elliot grasped Torie's arms and pressed her against the wall. "Don't you see? Look into my eyes, the things I do to you, they're unnatural... You must know that. No man could..." Elliot felt himself slipping into Torie's mind, searching for, and bringing life to the darkest pleasures in her heart. "Do to you what I do."

OOC: Elliot is giving Torie a vision of the most erotic thing in her heart.
 
The sudden movement caught her off guard as Elliot slammed her into the wall with such force. Her feet were a bit crooked and had he let her go she would have fallen. Finally getting her feet back under here with the roller blades barely moving her eyes met his own finally. His words were beginning to filter into her brain and she looked at him oddly as if he were insane. In fact he must be. A demon there is no such things. She moved to lift a hand up and slide it along his face as she smiled and remarked, “there are no such…..Oh gawd.”

Her head pressed back against the wall and her eyes closed. She was suddenly on fire from her hips up and she licked her lips as she slowly opened here eyes returning her gaze back to Elliot. The look she held in her eyes was a look he would know well for what it was, pure unadulterated lust. Her hips writhed against the wall and the brick building dug into her skin as she moved and she whispered, “What…what are you doing to me?” Her voice was a throaty moan as she spoke and tried to fight off the sensations being projected into her mind. She was at a loss as to why she was feeling this way and she moaned again, “Please stop….”
 
Elliot:

Hesitently, Elliot drew his hands away, and lowered his head, his breathing was heavy, pants of lust. "Torie... I can feel your lust, it makes an inhuman claw at my stomach..." Elliot tried to explain. "I've never asked you to change any of your ways of thinking... But I must ask you now... Please believe, I am a danger to you... I... I want to devour you..." His strength of will was running thin, he felt his hands stretch and crack, unnaturally, into sharp claws, he could feel his skin growing hot, and his back felt as though it were being ripped open.

Kneeling down, his hands in front of him, he looked down at them, at the long black claws that were once neatly shorn nails. He lifted his head, showing his face to Torie. It was still recognizable as his face, only, his skin was more leathery, and ebon black. Then, long black, leathery wings tore free of his shirt, leaving it in shambles about his waist. "I am an Incubus, my love... I devoure women's souls..."
His voice had changed, his body had changed and though he was frightened and angry, within, he was still Elliot, Torie could see it in his eyes.
 
Torie inched away from Elliot the erotic feelings increasing until he finally released her mind and she flinched as he moved away from her. Scrambling along the wall she shook her head fear written all over her face. A scream slipped from her lips as she backed along the alley and she shook her head,"Go..no please don't hurt me Elliot... " The skates had no purchase on the ground as she tried to back away and she fell back on her ass hard. Coming up on her hands she tried to stand the skates just wouldn't cooperate. Rolling onto her knees she slowly got back to her feet but not before Elliot was at her dragging her back against her body. "No I won't hurt you Torie...I love you.." His black talons were sliding along her neck and stomach now and her breathing had increased tenfold as he held her against the heat that was his body.

Far up over their heads. Melinda stood and watched and frantically beat on the window as she tried to get someone's attention to what was happening below. You have to love a city that just doesn't seem to want to get involved. No one seemed to hear or care about the predicament Torie was in but her.

Torie tried to break free of Elliot's hold on her body and she was instead rubbing herself deliciously along his cock and her breasts were rubbing his arm as she sobbed. "please Elliot let me go."
 
Elliot:

"I... I cannot Torie... I can never let you go... Not now that you know what I truely am... I will set you free, yes, I will set you free of your humanity... I will set you above the pain that mortals feel, your existance will be for your own pleasure then. Yessss...." Elliot grasped her hair, looked up at the window where his mother looked on in utter horror, smiling darkly up at her as he drew Torie's head back, causing her to gasp. She was terrified and aroused all at once, but she could do nothing now, nothing save for let Elliot have her lips.

The kiss started as an easy melding of their lips, but Elliot deepened it quickly, and breathed in. It was a rush of energy, when it hit his lungs, not quite as sweet as mothers, but it fed him none the less. He breathed in again, and Torie grew limp in his arms. He breathed a third time, and he knew then that he had destroyed her soul, he had devoured it whole.

He had no idea what to expect after that, so, as he laid her soft, weak body down upon the alley floor, he was surprised to see she was still very much alive. He knelt at her side, his lips quivering, his hands shaking as he reached out to touch her cheek. "Torie... My love?" He asked her. Then silently, to himself. "What have I done..."
 
Arron:

::Hearing the loud voices and the cries made Arron think that now wasnt a good time to be trying to buy the book. Elliot was obviously busy with his personal life, and would probably be busy the rest of the day.

With that Arron left the store and walked back to his car. That was when he heard the noises grow louder, and after further investigation, Arron happened upon the scene. Quickly ducking behind a dumpster, Arron watched as Elliot changed and assulted the girl. From this vantagepoint he even caught a glimps of Elliot's mother in the unstairs window.::
 
The look that fell over Torie's eyes was indeed an inhuman gaze. Almost like the life of her was gone replaced by a robot. Her Body lay limply on the ground as she stared up at Elliot. THe look in her eyes was not the laughing giggling Torie that had been his lover and girlfriend, now she was replaced by a shell of her former self.

Torie's voice sounded so far away from itself and she shook some as if she were very cold,"Elliot what have you done to me? I ...I feel so strange Elliot. Help me please.." Where there might have been tears none flow and she continues to lay back on the ground looking up at the sky now.

Melinda far above the two begins to cry softly and slowly slide down the window and curl up in a ball fading from sight as she realizesthe hell she is gong to be going through.
 
Elliot:

Elliot helped Torie sit up, and rested her head against his chest. He ran his fingers through her hair to sooth her, letting her feel the warmth of his body. They sat there, the two of them for several minutes as Elliot slowly returned to his human form. He could not speak, what could he possibly say to her now, now that he had killed her very soul.
 
Arron:

::A look of horror was replaced by his watchful face as Arron began to take mental notes of what he had just witnessed. So that is what was happening to Elliots significant others, but why did they suddenly disappear? Arron though as he watched. His eyes moved from the scene with Elliot and his girlfriend to looking for Melinda whom vanished from her window.::
 
::Arron backed out of his hiding place as quietly as he could, and when he got out front of the bookstore, only then did he run to his car. Once there Arron stopped and wondered.Elliot must be the cause of the dissapperances of the other girls, but how does Melinda fit into this? Is she a part of this or is she being held against her will?

After weighing the options, Arron decided on the latter and left the car. A quick peek into the store gave him enough to know that Elliot wasnt within, so he went into the stote and headed to the back door Torie and Elliot used earlier. Again a quick peek through a partially opened door allowed Arron passage witin Elliots appartment. Once in the appartment, Arron started his search for Melinda.

One opened door after another left him clueless and it wasnt until he found a locked door that he knew he found her.::

-s- Melinda?!?
 
Sitting there in his arms, her head resting agianst his chest she shivered as if cold and wondered why she was here being held so tenderly. Not feeling right she pushed against the man that had recently assaulted her so and she looked at hin and moved to climb to her feet. Removing her skates before she did so. She stood now one hand on her hips the other dangling at her side and she felt empty and then it all hit her what he had changed into and that he had hurt her. "I am going hom eElliot and then I am going to call the cops. I don't know what game you are playing at but this is abuse and whatever else you were doing." Her voice shook, how could she have loved him so deeply and he had attacked her.

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The sounds coming from the apartment made her peek out the window, Elliot was still below. Who was in the apartment? She quickly started ripping things away from the door as she called out,"Help me please?! I am in here..pleasehelp me.." Her voice was frantic as she tugged the bed and the dresser and everything else away from the door."Please HELP me!? He is going to kill me!?"
 
-s- Shhhhh...Melinda. My name is Arron, and I am here to get you out.

::looking over the door quickly he saw that it was locked with a key.::

Melinda step away from the door I am going to break it open.

::Waiting a moment for Her to do as he said, Arron slammed himself against the door making the door jar as well as his body. After the fourth one he finally broke through.::
 
Rushing into the arms of the man rescuing her she starts to sob harder,"please please get me to a doctor..he ...he ..I am pregnant with his child." Her voice started to shake and she was clinging to the man so tightly she was more then likely choking him.

"He wants me to have another child like him, he says its a girl." Please...please you must get me to the hospital." She kept up the mantra even as she clung to Arron more then likely upsetting him as he was limping as she clung to him.

"He is a demon, he will kill you. Please you have to go..Oh gawd I tried.. I tried to raise him good but I couldn't." She was frantic and that is when the feelings came. "oh no he knows!" Her body rubbed lewdly along Arron's now as she closed her eyes and whispered,"please god forgive me."
 
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::As soon as Arron gained entry into the room he was latched ahold of by Melinda and she showered him with revelations about Elliot and why Arron was told to watch him.::

Mlinda, you need to loosen your grip on my throat...To the hospital? What has happened to you Melinda?

::Melinda started rubbing herself against him as she spoke some more. Although he found it odd his only concern from that point was taking her away and getting her to the hospital. Arron took her hand and pulled her with him as he raced down the stairs.::
 
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Elliot:

The realization of Torie's frame of mind darkened Elliots mood once more. "No, I think not. You want to stay with me, my precious flower..." Elliot whispered as he brushed his hand along her cheek, and his will through her mind. Dark lusts began to crawl through her mind, stealing away her thoughts for the moment.

Elliot looked up, hearing noises from his appartment. He grinned, the soul he had taken from Torie fueled his carnal power, and with but a thought, he had her, he had Melinda right where he wanted her. For all her purity, and religiousness, she was like clay to him now, at this moment, so easilly molded to his desires.

"Come with me..." Elliot commanded of Torie, leading her, in her socked feet, back into his store. He looked about, and then up the stairs... And waited.
 
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