Bizarre, Unabashed, and Shamlessly Repulsive Stroke

I try to write half-half...

Stories with sex, sex stories, stories about sex --- 50%

and

The Perfect Stroke Story -- 50%


I've failed thus far in my attempts at writing pure stroke... my instinct for plot keeps getting in the way, but I think soon, very soon... 'I have the technology; I will build it, and they will come.'

Sincerely,
ElSol
 
BlackShanglan said:
Sometimes one simply must write it. ;)

Yes/No.

Discuss.

Of course. But then those who feel crushing shame go back and surround it with 30,000 words of "literary" stuff while the rest of us are wanking. ;)
 
BlackShanglan said:
Sometimes one simply must write it. ;)

Yes/No.

Discuss.

Tried it, can't write it, can't read it. jpgs and .mpgs will always be infinitely better for that, so why bother?
 
Sub Joe said:
jpgs and .mpgs will always be infinitely better for that, so why bother?

True -- if vision is your primary sense for arousal. The blind would probably disagree. (It would be interesting to calibrate one of those DragonSpeak programs to handle erotica.)
 
apparently, the one stroke story i wrote A Day at the Beach is doing horridly in the ratings game. so, im thinking...never again should i do that.
howevah... it did spawn some off shoots...Dran and Honey wrote their versions of A Day at the Beach.
wait...
maybe i should just be an idea person and let the others do the writing. (can you see the lightbulb?)
 
vella_ms said:
apparently, the one stroke story i wrote A Day at the Beach is doing horridly in the ratings game. so, im thinking...never again should i do that.
howevah... it did spawn some off shoots...Dran and Honey wrote their versions of A Day at the Beach.
wait...
maybe i should just be an idea person and let the others do the writing. (can you see the lightbulb?)

Have you tried the loving wives category? :D I hear it's a great category for the ego. :rolleyes:
 
CharleyH said:
Have you tried the loving wives category? :D I hear it's a great category for the ego. :rolleyes:
to me, that would be akin to writing boy/boy story... i have no knowledge basis. ill stick to what i know...
or think i know

well damn, i lie.. i am writing a boy/boy story...nevermind...*sigh*
 
Even my "stroke" pieces end up 3 lit pages long. I simply can't write short stories, so much of the erotic for me is knowing the characters and understanding their feelings & motivations.
 
Same here.

I can't write them. I've tried, but I end up adding lovey-dovey stuff, making them have emotions and feelings, even in my very short Snapshots..........well duhhhhhh!!

I'll leave it to those that can.
 
Well, I can't write stroke, everything I write turns emotional and develops sub-plots, etc.; the things that get in the say of really good stroke. However, my little flouncy male alter-ego Twink_Alert86 has no problem with it. Twink's Stroke
Thank Dog for multiple personality disorder. :)
 
Can I do it?

Bizarre? Yes.
Unabashed? Yes.
Shamelessly Repulsive? Yes.
Stroke? No.

Og
 
oggbashan said:
Can I do it?

Bizarre? Yes.
Unabashed? Yes.
Shamelessly Repulsive? Yes.
Stroke? No.

Og

Interesting corollary - who gets to decide what's stroke? Reader or writer?
 
I never write anything other than over the top stroke material for the less fortunate masses. :)


It has nothing to do with the fact I'm not capable of writing anything else:devil:
 
I'm still pissed off at how Brightlyiburn got me sucked up into reading 12 chapters of her Color Blind series before the sex started :mad:

DrF
 
If I ever became capable of writing it - or anything - I suppose I would write it.
I am not capable yet and likely will never be - but it is still a commendable goal to strive towards and those who can certainly should - it is their obligation as a humanitarian gesture for the rest of us.

You could pack a lot of symbolism into a shameless stroke piece.

And I suppose a shameless stroke piece would be in the hand of the holder.
Never mind.
 
I've wrote a couple of Stroke pieces. Posted one, it did okay. (I have to rework some of the others.)
For some strange reason pure stroke just isn't as enjoyable to write for me as a longer piece. Maybe it's because I'm still learning what kind of writing I enjoy, and exploring different ways to write it. On the other hand maybe it's just because I'm terrible at Short short stories.

Cat

(She came, he came, they fucked, they both came, they left. Shirt enough for a short stroke? :D )
 
Well, my husband found some yeti porn the other day involuntarily. It was disgusting and unerotic. Is that what you're looking for? Because I think I can look it up for you if you'd like. :)
 
Kassiana said:
Well, my husband found some yeti porn the other day involuntarily. It was disgusting and unerotic. Is that what you're looking for? Because I think I can look it up for you if you'd like. :)

No thank you, I'm not a yeti fetishist. What an intriguing idea it is, though.

My own, ahem, "work of art" is naturally much more urbane, sophisticated, and clever.

:rolleyes:

Shanglan
 
BlackShanglan said:
No thank you, I'm not a yeti fetishist. What an intriguing idea it is, though.

My own, ahem, "work of art" is naturally much more urbane, sophisticated, and clever.

:rolleyes:

Shanglan


insert bon mot here. :D
 
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