Birth of a Porn Myth

dr_mabeuse

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This is how erotic myths start.

I’m writing a story in which a woman gets terribly sexually aroused over the course of several pages, so I’ve really got to lay it on thick. I already had her getting warm and flushed, breathing rapidly, mouth getting dry, butterflies in the stomach, so I moved on to the next level where her breasts start to feel full and heavy, her nipples get hard and she starts to lubricate.

Now I know that the nipple business doesn’t happen to everyone, and I really don’t know whether a woman can feel herself lubricate or whether her breasts start t feel heavy, so I’m already stretching it. I had her pussy start to throb, which is another thing I’ve picked up from erotic stories. I really don’t know whether that happens or not, but it sounds good.

Then I decided to make her aware of her pussy actually starting to engorge with blood and open like a flower. This is pure surmise and imagination on my part. I don’t know if this is even possible, but it sounded good and it’s a powerful image so I left it in. In the end she’s sitting there feeling all kind of oozy and empty inside, with her labia pressed tight against her wet panties in a kind of a feamle version of a raging hard-on.

I mention this because it’s a clear case of poetic license, or playing fast and loose eith the truth, and as such it joins such other myths as the ones about a man’s balls retracting when he comes, as if they’re like rubber bulbs filled wit semen, or the copious streams of liquid that gush from a woman when she’s excited.

I’m curious as to whether the flowering pussy idea will catch on and become a part of the standard porn lexicon in the future. If so, you heard it here first.

---Zooot
 
i think there are a number of flowering pussies in the literature, but i'm sure 'yours' (as it were) will have their unique fragrance.
 
It all works for me, except -

this part here:

Then I decided to make her aware of her pussy actually starting to engorge with blood and open like a flower.

While this is indeed what happens to females biologically to cause the "juices to flow" I don't find that phrase erotic. (I imagine because of the whole menstruation business.)

It works for guys, of course - engorged cock and all of that. ;)

I do believe "opening like a flower" is quite accurate, and women do actually sit and squirm and feel all of that happening as you described (at least I do).

:)
 
Re: It all works for me, except -

sweetsubsarahh said:
this part here:

Then I decided to make her aware of her pussy actually starting to engorge with blood and open like a flower.

While this is indeed what happens to females biologically to cause the "juices to flow" I don't find that phrase erotic. (I imagine because of the whole menstruation business.)

It works for guys, of course - engorged cock and all of that. ;)

I do believe "opening like a flower" is quite accurate, and women do actually sit and squirm and feel all of that happening as you described (at least I do).

:)

I had the same reaction. If I ever see the flowering pussy motif, I'll remember this thread. :)
 
If we could not take poetic license we'd get no where. I mean the tried and true "She felt his cum spurting deep inside her" Well, talk to all women that must discover later if he really came or they must ask. Every wonder, when you cannot think straight, why she asked," Did you cum? Was it good?"


I mean I want to imagine I do feel it, therefore I fool myself yes I did feel it, but then there is the question "Did he?" and I know it was just my imagination. But, who cares I have said I felt it so often now even if I ask, I believe I felt it!


I know I flower. Now I am sure I will be engorging soon, because my imagination concerning and doing sex will say I do! (after reading this)

Imagination is sex really, and our brain is lovemaking's most powerful tool so......

Dr M~ aka Zoot, you have never read any trashy romance novels have you, they been flowering for years. ~laughs



Omni :rose:
 
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