BDSM Writing Challenge

Dinner Invitation

The occassion is a dinner honoring me for my charity work. Black tie formal, and You have dressed me in a beautiful floor length ice blue gown. Underneath no one can tell or would ask about the lack of undergarments.

I know, and it cramps my stomach in excitement. Last minute You have inserted a remote control egg. Teasing me with it whenever I am required to speak. I fear for when it is time for my speech.

On and off you work the switch until I am perched on the edge of
pleasure and there I must remain. My speech ends, and you nod,
my torment begins.
 
Meeting your potential Dom or sub for the first time. It will be a public meeting, a small open air cafe.

Words to be avoided

tremble
nervous
shy
awkward
flutter

(Give me a break, I am new at this)


25 words for the poem

100 for the prose
 
Not daring to turn, I feel her eyes on me, and know she is within inches, right behind me. My heart skips a beat.
What if I never feel her hand on my shoulder. If she takes one look and walks away, not even giving me a chance.
But no, she is here, and sitting and it is her, and is Her. Our eyes meet and we smile, knowing we both felt the same way. Knowing this is not the start, but a continuing of the love we found so unexpectedly.
Hungry? No, I feast on the sight of her.




Entering gracelessly, I feel,
knowing she is watching, I stumble.
Catching myself as our eyes meet.
I am suddenly a dancer, and she my music.
 
1st meeting

Trepedation
Swells her breast
Stifles her lungs
Prickled skin
The pang of second thought
Trembling a hand reaches out
Meeting his touch of warmth
Subtle Bliss
 
First meeting - dedicated to my darling pet!

A tingle fills my tummy as I open the door, feeling a wave of smoky air embracing me. Are anticipation and fear a cloud around her right now as is the smoke? Will my hands caress her as do the eyes of the men at the bar? She shifts uneasily, trying to pull the short skirt she is wearing on my command down over her shapely thighs – and then she spots me, freezing in her movement. Then our eyes meet. Soon, my darling pet, so soon there will be nothing more to hide from me – be it flesh or though.


Edited to add:

Anticipation, I open the door
You, waiting, gaze to the floor
Our eyes meet and I see
That you and I were meant to be
 
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I pace.
Caged wild animal in a small place.
I look to the faces of the women passing by.
No, no, no, not the one yet.
My hands burn and my body tight.
Finally I see her walking aroung the corner.
Her eyes looking around in wonder.
I catch her eyes in mine.
A grin splits my face.
I can feel it start.
 
I am packed to leave on my short journey, when the phone rings and it is you, My Beloved Master, with my last minute instructions.

"You are to insert an egg in your pussy adjusting the power periodically as you drive down the highway... and when you can stand it no longer then you are to pull off the highway and masturbate until you cum." I do as instructed, but somehow the egg has worked its way our of my wet pussy and is perched against my throbbing clit. I adjust the pulsations of the vibrating egg against my clit. Oh yes... it feels incredible... I will have to tell the Master about this as soon as he calls.
 
First Meeting

Crowed cafe, so many could be him. What am I to do? Run, says instinct. Heart says stay.

Closing my eyes, I take several cleansing breaths, as he has taught me. I open my eyes to find one man hand outstretched smiling.

"Well done, my pet," I hear as smiling I take his hand and the chair he offers me.

Softly, I chance and answer. "Your pleasure Sir, is my reward."

It is the beginning.


Poem

One man of many
Chosen to be my guide.
The cafe crowded
reverberates in sound.
I see and hear only him.
From now until eternity.
 
Recognizing You, i rise
Greeting You, my spirit dies
to self and is reborn
to serve only You

i wait on Your desire

"Coffee. Black."
 
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By popular request, a new assignment

Topic: Humiliation

Same rules.

Show me how humiliation feels for you or describe an act of humiliation, even if it is something you know you would never do.

Can you make the reader hot?
Can you make them feel what you feel?


Go for it! :)
 
Re: By popular request, a new assignment

MissTaken said:
Topic: Humiliation

Same rules.

Show me how humiliation feels for you or describe an act of humiliation, even if it is something you know you would never do.

Can you make the reader hot?
Can you make them feel what you feel?


Go for it! :)
No forbidden words? Kewl. :D



sweat runs
bowels cramp
body ignites
worse than i'd imagined

Your voice excites

i cum
my body releases
all that i am
at Your command
 
Precisely 100 Words

Chloe pressed her face into the pillow. She slowly raised the hem of her skirt, as if unveiling an offering on the altar of a pagan church, preparing to consecrate a rite of sacrifice and sacrament. The sudden coolness of the air and the vivid image of what was to come raised goosebumps on her skin. The paddle landed hard across her flesh. Again, it whooshed through the air and marked Chloe’s skin. Each time, her smooth, round globes bounced and recoiled under the blow. But Chloe did not flinch or pull away. Not yet. This was only the beginning.


This is an slightly edited exerpt from my recent story, Chloe's Obsession.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=76015


Singularity
 
The parking lot is semi-dark and almost empty. I stretch out almost naked on top of the jeep's hood waiting your command. It is hot, I am hotter,knowing I am watched.

You smile with an evil grin. "Mastrubate now and come when your ready."

I hesitate until I hear the sound of your belt being loosened. My hand reaches for breast and and cunt.

Soon I am lost to your command and with a soft touch on my leg, I rise to pleasure your desire. I am completely yours in my humbling to your will.


They watch as I strip.
Knowing it is the beginning of my pain.
Zippers open, a line forms
servicing all, my humiliation your gain.
 
New Topic

Topic: Orgasm control

Being told "no" repeatedly and wanting to orgasm is one of the most sensual parts of my play....

I hope some of you enjoy it as well.

New rules:

No limit on words.

No rhyming words!

Enjoy!
 
Orgasm Control

Control

a puppet on a string,
you command, my orgasms I bring.
Reaping rewards from your control,
with a nod, they flow.

I am yours within the pleasure and pain,
I find I have everything to gain.

Control

Tied down, I await the touch of you. Today we will practice control until you say it is permissable I must not give in to my pleasure.

It will be hard you tell me but worth it. Trigger fast, your touch usually sends me skyward. I have been known to climax at your breath blowing over my nipples.

First you tease at my nipples and soon they are rock hard and engorged with blood. You clamp them and add weights, the pain-pleasure unhoods my clit and swells it. You stop and suddenly I feel ice and you walk away.

Next you insert my favorite vibrators one each, and smile as you show me the remotes. For the next hour you take me to the pinnacle and stop. Each time my need becomes stronger.

Finally you unclamp my nipples, pull free the vibrators and push your waiting cock deep inside me. As your mouth soothes my raved nipples you command in a soft whisper,"Come now pet."

I soar into the sky, reaching pinnacles of pleasure I have never know, you ride the waves with me and kissing me say "It is just the start of your training my love."

If this is the start, I anxiously place my body in your hands for I want to reach the end.
:p
 
MissTaken said:
Scene: Binding of hands.

Rules: 25 words for poetry
100 words for prose
How the hands are bound are up to the writer.

Taboo words:

Rope
Cuffs
Scarf
Tie
Knot
Tight
Loose
Hand
Wrist
Arm

Have fun! :)

This is the first time i've read this forum... and i'm very impressed with everyone's writings here! Very enjoyable!

i know you've changed the subjuct matter Miss T, but i couldn't help myself, i really liked this one and just had to write... i hope you don't mind...

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Fingertips biting into her flesh, forcing her to accept her submission, forcing her to accept his desires. Her face crushed against the wall, his vulgar tongue roaming the base of her neck, sending shivers down her spine, down between her legs. His body pressing harder and harder against her own, giving her no way out, no escape from his hold. Her fingertips clenched together and forced high above her, trapped in his steel grasp... and she knows... she is his. Her hips slowly push outward against his body, pleading... begging for more.
 
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Re: New Topic

MissTaken said:
Topic: Orgasm control

Being told "no" repeatedly and wanting to orgasm is one of the most sensual parts of my play....

I hope some of you enjoy it as well.

New rules:

No limit on words.

No rhyming words!

Enjoy!


Kept promising I'd write for this. I really only write stories, tried to do a short one, didn't work, but at least I now almost have another entire story done on orgasm control. :D ... it'll be to long to post here.
I did write this short little blurt. Not to good at this, but here ya go.

His touch and I shiver,
Waiting, wanting, a small moan,
Muscles tensing, almost there,
It stops and he pulls away,
Small cry of an almost pain,
Spanks of immediate discipline,
Only working me up more,
Squirming, shuddering,
More touches,
Moaning,
So close,
Begging,
Oh God please,
Not yet,
Another small cry,
Impossible to suppress,
Teasing,
Seems to be endless,
Feeling like I’ll break,
What do you want,
Please,
Tell me,
Oh please, let me,
Starting gentle,
Then rough,
Fucking,
Thrusting,
Screaming,
Explosions,
Intense pleasure,
Seems like it’ll never stop,
Peaks of orgasm, over and over,
Release of all the tension,
Contentment.
 
Hello bondagegurl!

Umm very nicely done.
Welcome aboard.


Indy_dark,

I particularly enjoyed how you used the words and caps to add to the intensity of the poem in #1. :)

Zaudika,

Hon, very hot stuff.
Now, who mght be able to do just that to you ;)

Hugs and thanks for posting. Feel free to look at the first couple of pages and jump in.

I always find that writing, even some of my bad writing was an incredible help to get me through the long nights and work through some of the emotional conflict that came when I tired to resolve my nilla thinking with BDSM.

:)

I

:heart: orgasm control.

Keep writing all!
 
MissTaken said:


Zaudika,

Hon, very hot stuff.
Now, who mght be able to do just that to you ;)


Thank you hon. :)

...and to your question.. ;) gee.. let me think.. hmmmmmmmm.. hmm hmm hmm.... :D
 
"Touch yourself", He says
and my hand traces
it's familiar path.
He watches silently.

My fingers
circling
flicking
rubbing
pinching
darting lower
probing
sliding
thrusting.


Now ...
slick juices coating
nipples hardening
fingers slipping
breath gasping
head tossing
sweat beading
mouth dry
moans escaping

until He speaks,
controlling my universe
Him as the center
me in His orbit
His heat determing my existance

"No more."
 
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