Any advice on writing “morning after” or “day after” scenes (i.e., when she’s just lost her virginity to a well-endowed stranger)?

[erotica_n_s]

Am working on a ‘first-time story’, There are other aspects to it, e.g., an ‘inter-racial’ aspect – a Caucasian dude and a woman from India, but that's a different discussion.

He’s well-endowed and they have sex in multiple positions, etc.

I want to write the “day after” scene, where we see the young woman the following day, with some aches and pains, and a little post-coital dysphoria.

How do I make the “aches and pains” accurate and believable? What “aches and pains” is a woman likely to experience after vigorous penile-vaginal and penile-anal sex? I mean how much detail to put into this?

I think this is as important as the sex scenes themselves, if not more important – it’s about how it has affected/impacted her. I think it's this 'day after' scene that's really going to give weight to the sex scenes themselves, to depict how 'impactful' the sex was, physically and emotionally.

As for the emotional impact it’s likely to have had, well, I can work on that, and of course, input is welcome. It's the details regarding the physical sensations that I could most use some help with.

 

[NuclearFairy]

How old is she, and how active is her life?

 

[erotica_n_s]

19-year-old female university student, she's 5'6". The dude is 6'3".

 

[NuclearFairy]

Okay, but how active is she? That'll play more of part in where she'll hurt and how than their size differences do.

 

[StillStunned]

Okay, but how active is she? That'll play more of part in where she'll hurt and how than their size differences do.

I interpret the OP's reference to "first time" as meaning that it's her first time. (As opposed to her first time with someone who's well-endowed.)

 

[NotWise]

Okay, but how active is she? That'll play more of part in where she'll hurt and how than their size differences do.

She might want to shower all day until she feels clean again.

 

[NuclearFairy]

I interpret the OP's reference to "first time" as meaning that it's her first time. (As opposed to her first time with someone who's well-endowed.)

Yes, but activity levels outside of sex do influence how tight each hole will be and how intact a hymen might be and therefore how much the first time will or will not hurt.

 

[Bamagan]

The amount of pain or discomfort experienced is not a universal constant. Don't overthink it and try to be overly precise. If you're describing the temperature, your believability will not increase if you say 33.1875 Celsius instead of 33, or even better, "It's hot." Trying to get very specific about how her aches affect her movement or things like that is more likely to invite readers to question your accuracy than appreciate your story, because you're drawing too much attention to the decimal places, so to speak.

 

[TheWritingGroup]

Unless the woman is talking to her doctor, or it's first-person and she's thinking about the details of her discomfort, I agree with the advice to be vague. If she just says she's feeling "sore", no normal person (who isn't her doctor) is going to press for details.

If you want to be evocative, have her walking funny and someone asks her what's wrong, and she just says she's feeling a little sore, and winces as she straightens her back and unconsciously puts her hand on her belly. If you wanted to make a joke out of it, have a (female?) friend think she's just having a bad period and her not want to argue with the friend about it.

--Annie

 

[EmilyMiller]

Am working on a ‘first-time story’, There are other aspects to it, e.g., an ‘inter-racial’ aspect – a Caucasian dude and a woman from India, but that's a different discussion.

He’s well-endowed and they have sex in multiple positions, etc.

I want to write the “day after” scene, where we see the young woman the following day, with some aches and pains, and a little post-coital dysphoria.

How do I make the “aches and pains” accurate and believable? What “aches and pains” is a woman likely to experience after vigorous penile-vaginal and penile-anal sex? I mean how much detail to put into this?

I think this is as important as the sex scenes themselves, if not more important – it’s about how it has affected/impacted her. I think it's this 'day after' scene that's really going to give weight to the sex scenes themselves, to depict how 'impactful' the sex was, physically and emotionally.

As for the emotional impact it’s likely to have had, well, I can work on that, and of course, input is welcome. It's the details regarding the physical sensations that I could most use some help with.

Can I ask why this aspect is important to your story? I know you reference it adding weight to the sex scenes and also talk about her emotional state. But I’m not clear what you are trying to achieve. To emphasize what a stallion the MMC is? Can you please clarify?

 

[lovecraft68]

My advice is to stop crediting men and acting like first time sex is some type of physically punishing experience.

Seriously, I just can't sometimes with the male ego and lack of anything resembling realism regarding women.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

I'm not sure why you would take a story in this direction.