Annonymous

[Jenny_Jackson]

Someone hadn't looked at my list of stories before writing this:

...would love to read a longer story by you.

on one of my shorter works.

Og

LMAO. What's stopping him/her?

 

[firstkiss]

To My Many "Anonymous-es"

(What is the plural of anonymous anyway?? Anonymice?)

I just wanted to say a big, huge thanks to everyone who has been so kind about my story "I Thought I Hated Him" - Chapter three in particular has garnered quite a few responses - so to answer all of those anonymous questions in one fell swoop...

-- yes, there is another chapter (or two or three) coming - when? I don't know, whenever the hell it gets written (edit** posted next chapter today -- it should be up sometime next week**)

-- and yes, I know I'm a terrible tease (I didn't get that reputation in high school for nothin') but it delights me something fierce to know you're all sitting in front of your computers wiggling with suspense -- call me evil, but I like it

Hope to hear from you all again soon,

firstkiss

 

[SweetWitch]

On Dire Straits

Oh dear! Homophobia?!
04/19/07 By: Anonymous in USA
As a certified lover of men and being a man who enjoys the exploration of the back passages of love myself I seemed to have missed that little part about the characters and author being homophobic....

You foolish person, Sweet Molly didn't even manage to get the word Queer out of our wonderful little Kyles mouth. Nor was there any indication that any of the characters offended by the fact the cupcake was exploring choclate tunnels, behind the church. It was mere shock that he had a "nasty" little secret I'm sure he's terrified will get out.

What is offensive is you seem to be more caught up in the fact that "quee...." signifies a touch of homophobia on the author's part and not the fact that the pillow feasting cupcake could be fiddling with little boys ... hmmm interesting.

I now suggest you apologize for being an uptight little homo or god forbid, a straight do gooding "homosexual rights activist" and thank Sweet Witch for giving us this incredible story at absolutely no cost to us and give it the 100% it deserves!

Molly brilliant just brilliant!

Sweet Kisses & Thank you from one of your Gay Admirers xx

I don't know who you are, Doll, but I think I love you. That other person's comment really upset me. You just made it all better. Thank you.

SW, Molly

 

[Boxlicker101]

I love getting feedback like this, even if it is from anymouse.

This message contains feedback for: Boxlicker101
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous
Comments: ....i had you between my legs again last nite....watched as you tickled my clit with that needy tongue...watched as you pinched my lips apart forcing my clit into the open air, and, mmmmm watched my hips and tummy grind up and down and all around, uncontrollable at your touch...my cum looks so beautiful on your lips and face...now, will you spank that swollen pussy for me? will you toy with my tingling clit? mmmmm will you suck me to sleep, love?

 

[Boxlicker101]

Of course, I also get some like this:

Crap
04/26/07 By: Anonymous in The United States
Nothing new, nothing fresh, nothing interesting.

This is in the LW category, where this kind of response is common.

 

[Boxlicker101]

This is not actually anon., but I am posting it anyhow. This is a PC on "In-Laws Are Horny":

Shitty
04/26/07 By: don87654 in USA
A great story but the condom ruined all of it. I don't know about you, but if I am fucking my sister-in-law, it would be very erotic to knock her up, too!

First, he is wrong, because it would ruin their plans for future meetings, and my plans to write about their meetings. Second, out of curiosity, I checked his index. He has written exactly as many stories and poems as my 89 year old maiden aunt, who has never owned a computer.

 

[Darkniciad]

This is not actually anon., but I am posting it anyhow. This is a PC on "In-Laws Are Horny":

Shitty
04/26/07 By: don87654 in USA
A great story but the condom ruined all of it. I don't know about you, but if I am fucking my sister-in-law, it would be very erotic to knock her up, too!

First, he is wrong, because it would ruin their plans for future meetings, and my plans to write about their meetings. Second, out of curiosity, I checked his index. He has written exactly as many stories and poems as my 89 year old maiden aunt, who has never owned a computer.

I actually saw this comment come up in the feedback portal. Don was all over the portal, trashing pretty much everything. You just happened to be in the wrong place at the wrong time for a strafing run. I remember it because there were so many 1 votes in such a short period of time that I almost started clicking report links on the comments for sweep data.

 

[Boxlicker101]

Quote:
Originally Posted by Boxlicker101
This is not actually anon., but I am posting it anyhow. This is a PC on "In-Laws Are Horny":

Shitty
04/26/07 By: don87654 in USA
A great story but the condom ruined all of it. I don't know about you, but if I am fucking my sister-in-law, it would be very erotic to knock her up, too!

First, he is wrong, because it would ruin their plans for future meetings, and my plans to write about their meetings. Second, out of curiosity, I checked his index. He has written exactly as many stories and poems as my 89 year old maiden aunt, who has never owned a computer.

I actually saw this comment come up in the feedback portal. Don was all over the portal, trashing pretty much everything. You just happened to be in the wrong place at the wrong time for a strafing run. I remember it because there were so many 1 votes in such a short period of time that I almost started clicking report links on the comments for sweep data.

I have seen this guy's name quite a few times on PC. The best thing he has ever said about any of my smut was "Good but could have been better."

 

[Boxlicker101]

More Oral Love
03/20/07 By: Anonymous
Some Lesbians (as well as strait men and women) love to rimm and I believed that Box Licker had not given lesbian rimming any consideration in his story. A Box Licker has only to take a short spur rail off the main track as another route to sensory paradise.

Well, yeah, I am inclined to agree with you, although a lot of your fellow trolls think it is disgusting for somebody to do that. One of them thinks that only white men are so depraved as to do what you are suggesting. The thing is, the lady who was eating the pussy this particular time didn't feel like doing it just then. Maybe she will the next time we get together.

 

[only_more_so]

Anonymous wrote:

Plerase(sic) continue...

The Reluctant Psychic is nothing short of wonderful. I really want more of the adventure. It is wonderful to have characters who are actual people, not fucking automatons

Thanks for the feedback, I really do appreciate it. The next chapter has been written, but I need to give it a once over before sending it off to be edited. Soon, I promise.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Those Latinas sooooooooooo funny
05/18/07 By: Anonymous
Nothing as stereotyping the Latino to get a laugh. Because naturally if it's a Latina she has to be a whore and dumb as a rock.

Jesus Christ, guy. Get a grip. Does she talk like a latina? Does she act like a latina? Yes, she does have an Hispanic name.

Your racist bullshit is sooooo appreciated?

I suppose a story with an obviously white woman who fucks herself silly is ok in your ignorant mind?

Fuck off and die, asshole.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

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This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

you put a large cock in there and cum stupid.

Huh? I did? Where?

 

[Darkniciad]

On "It Cuts Both Ways" ( as LesLumens)

Chris the wimp
05/19/07 By: Anonymous
Only wimos have ED, which is a NorthEastern liberal disease spread by so-called conservative talk show hosts. Anyone contracting ED should eat raw meat and watch John Wayne WAR movies (not that pinko cowboy shit) and then beat up some faries. Then if he could still not get it up, he should have beaten his wife up!! Yeah!

Funny thing is, this was attached to a 100% thermometer rating ( the score appears to reflect that rating as well, remaining unchanged )

So -- uhm... thanks? *laugh* I'm not sure whether the rating is actually supposed to reflect the story, or the one the anonymous wrote in his/her head for the comment

 

[SweetWitch]

On "It Cuts Both Ways" ( as LesLumens)



Funny thing is, this was attached to a 100% thermometer rating ( the score appears to reflect that rating as well, remaining unchanged )

So -- uhm... thanks? *laugh* I'm not sure whether the rating is actually supposed to reflect the story, or the one the anonymous wrote in his/her head for the comment

Please tell me that particular Anon isn't actually breeding...

 

[Boxlicker101]

AAwwwkk!
05/23/07 By: Anonymous in USA
Can't you write about anything but eating pussy? Some of us don't get off on that messy degrading experience. Mr. Boxslicker I not too much like this silly story.

Well, if you don't like it, don't read about it. There are a few stupid, selfish men who feel like you do but, thank God, I'm not one of them, and neither are most of the readers on this site.

Most of my stories, except gay male, include eating pussy, but hardly any of them are just about that. This story wasn't.

 

[rgraham666]

Slow and laborious

05/23/07 By: Anonymous in USA

Slow and sort of tiring to read. Too long for what was to be covered. You could have written this in 25% of the kb you used. Anal isn't really all that attractive either. Writer, you've written much better stuff. Get it together, pal of mine. You are sooo good. Show us some of your good stuff.

Well if you don't like butt fucking, don't read the story.

 

[SweetWitch]

About the submission: Dire Straits Ch. 09
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

Who on Earth is calling the writer (or the goram characters) homophobic? Silly. I won't even go into the difference between "surprise" and "homophobia" for pete's sake. Personally I'd love it if the Hunter clan had a sister I could crush on, being a lesbian myself... Right on, darling Molly, and the wonderful man who posted the one before this, and I can only agree with the Brilliant, Sweet Molly, Brilliant bit!

Thank you for your kind words. You made my day!

 

[Darkniciad]

Please tell me that particular Anon isn't actually breeding...

Unfortunately, I cannot provide such reassurance.

*beep* Darwin, clean up on aisle eight.

 

[SweetWitch]

Unfortunately, I cannot provide such reassurance.

*beep* Darwin, clean up on aisle eight.

I shall spend the rest of the day in a fit of shudders.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

This message contains feedback for: RedHairedandFriendly
About the submission: Wicked Tales: Little Red's Wolf
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

That was absolutely the best story I have yet read. I hope you are a
published author. Thanks for the beautiful tale!



Thanks.

 

[Boxlicker101]

Attention to Layout
05/27/07 By: Anonymous in Scotland
The author has a superior understanding of the consequences of dividing text into paragraphs, facilitating easy reading and a natural flow.

Thanks for the compliment. I really do appreciate it when readers notice things like that. However, I appreciate it a lot more when they tell me what they think of the actual contents of the story, whether it hot them off or not.

 

[glynndah]

Anonymous: "I like the kind of stories you write."

Yes, but do you like mine, in particular? That's what I really want to know.

 

[SweetWitch]

Say it ain't so...
05/29/07 By: Anonymous in Puerto Rico
Please, please tell me there's more. I'll admit I can be dense, but this seems like a last chapter leading into another storyline. If it is please write in the title of the new story that it is a continuation of this one. If there are more chapters to come...don't take so dang-blasted long! LOL Thanks again for a wonderful story.
J

Fear not. There's more on the way, if I can just wrestle the rest of my life into submission.

 

[only_more_so]

On the latest chapter of the Reluctant Psychic.

Unusual, Good
05/26/07 By: Anonymous in USA
This is an unusual mind control story with a kind of lyrical sensitivity to it that is usually seen in the romantic genre.

I agree, more is needed. Do you know where you are going with this? Do you have a finish in mind? I hope so.

Thank you.

First off, thanks for the comment. I have thought about changing the category on some of these chapters, but the most basic theme is still Mind Control.

As for the questions: Yes, I do know where this is going, even if all the details aren't fleshed out. There are a couple of finishes I have in mind for the different subplots (some that aren't currently apparent), but the final finale is still in the mists of my mind.

 

[firstkiss]

Because I said so.

Anonymous:

My heroines are always short and red-headed because I am short and red-headed, and if you've ever been either of those things than surely you can appreciate how hard it is to imagine being anything else --- perhaps life is easier for tall, leggy blondes, or willowy, slender raven-haired lasses, but I feel the petite redhead is vastly under-appreciated both in life and literature -- so until we get our due I'm afraid that's just the way it's going to be.

firstkiss