Annonymous

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Anonymous:

My heroines are always short and red-headed because I am short and red-headed, and if you've ever been either of those things than surely you can appreciate how hard it is to imagine being anything else --- perhaps life is easier for tall, leggy blondes, or willowy, slender raven-haired lasses, but I feel the petite redhead is vastly under-appreciated both in life and literature -- so until we get our due I'm afraid that's just the way it's going to be.

firstkiss

I'm not petite, but Hip Hip Hurray for the redheads in stories.

 

[Boxlicker101]

Anonymous:

My heroines are always short and red-headed because I am short and red-headed, and if you've ever been either of those things than surely you can appreciate how hard it is to imagine being anything else --- perhaps life is easier for tall, leggy blondes, or willowy, slender raven-haired lasses, but I feel the petite redhead is vastly under-appreciated both in life and literature -- so until we get our due I'm afraid that's just the way it's going to be.

firstkiss

Hi,k Firstkiss. You might like reading about Melissa, a sexy young, petite redhead who is a bisexual. She is one of the continuing characters in my stories.

 

[rgraham666]

Anonymous:

My heroines are always short and red-headed because I am short and red-headed, and if you've ever been either of those things than surely you can appreciate how hard it is to imagine being anything else --- perhaps life is easier for tall, leggy blondes, or willowy, slender raven-haired lasses, but I feel the petite redhead is vastly under-appreciated both in life and literature -- so until we get our due I'm afraid that's just the way it's going to be.

firstkiss

Uhm. A telephone pole has an imprint of my head due to a petite redhead walking the other direction.

Wouldn't have done that if she'd been a tall, leggy bonde.

 

[firstkiss]

Hi,k Firstkiss. You might like reading about Melissa, a sexy young, petite redhead who is a bisexual. She is one of the continuing characters in my stories.

Will do!

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

I am shacking up with a petite redhead, and it's never boring.

 

[only_more_so]

Anonymous:

My heroines are always short and red-headed because I am short and red-headed, and if you've ever been either of those things than surely you can appreciate how hard it is to imagine being anything else --- perhaps life is easier for tall, leggy blondes, or willowy, slender raven-haired lasses, but I feel the petite redhead is vastly under-appreciated both in life and literature -- so until we get our due I'm afraid that's just the way it's going to be.

firstkiss

Nothing wrong with short and redheaded. My most popular story features a diminutive redhead as the love interest. And I've never even dated a redhead!

 

[marifree]

Anonymous:

My heroines are always short and red-headed because I am short and red-headed, and if you've ever been either of those things than surely you can appreciate how hard it is to imagine being anything else --- perhaps life is easier for tall, leggy blondes, or willowy, slender raven-haired lasses, but I feel the petite redhead is vastly under-appreciated both in life and literature -- so until we get our due I'm afraid that's just the way it's going to be.

firstkiss

Short red-heads rock! Many of my heroines are also of the smaller, scarlet persuasion.

 

[firstkiss]

see silly Anonymous person....

I'm not the only one!


Thanks y'all for the petite red-head support group we've got going here!

kisses --- firstkiss

 

[firstkiss]

Ahhh? Perhaps you can explain it to me...

This was posted as feedback to my story "Writer's Block Ch.2" and to me it's so completely out of left field that my head is still spinning. I'm ridiculously confused by it all --- why the hell is this person reading Lit? If I wanted to read about this sort of stuff I'd pick up the newspaper! It's FANTASY! Besides, I'm only two chapters in, it's entirely possible I'll be covering car accidents and migrant workers later on.

Tell me what you think - because I'm totally lost!

firstkiss


<quote>I was wonderin'
06/07/07 By: Anonymous
why is it that in the world of romance, there's: <p>

(1) no car accidents, <p>
(2) no ugly fat women who are having fatal attraction pursuit with those handsome guy with curly hair, <p>
(3) no words on STD and other things, <p>
(4) no mental health issues, <p>
(5) no gangsters,<p>
(6) no migrant workers working to death in boiling and freezing temperatures,<p>
(7) no 5'8" Asian "socially inept" dudes who attend Berkeley or CalTech (it's always the 6'5" lean caucasian Davis whom the ladies are giddy over after a few moments of fake feigness of some kind...), <p>
(8) no Patty who's 5'8" and 197 pounds who smokes like George Burns but who has 2 advance degrees in astro physics and plasma, <p>
(9) no mention of the Iraq "war to get rid of all terrorists", <p>
(10)no starving kids in America or in the world at large <p>

how come it is always two or 4 cute couple gossiping about other's gossips or going shopping at "high end" brand name stores, drinking sophisticated drinks, talking sophisticated talks about sophisticated people and their sophisticated ideas about sophisticated marketing and commercials and high fashion and high fashion designers and how they are "changing the foundation of society" with their "revolutionary ideas," etc., etc., etc. ? <p>

i don't get it. wait, is it because it's all fantasies of men and women, and they have no basis in reality? <quote>
----

OH! and to put icing on the cake they only have me a 50% == I must have missed the memo about erotica also needing to have a political agenda - can I get another copy of that if you have it lying around?

And BTW Mr. Anonymous, I don't live in America and I don't approve of your war, so I'm sure as hell not going to write about it - 'nuff said.

 

[CeriseNoire]

This was posted as feedback to my story "Writer's Block Ch.2" and to me it's so completely out of left field that my head is still spinning. I'm ridiculously confused by it all --- why the hell is this person reading Lit? If I wanted to read about this sort of stuff I'd pick up the newspaper! It's FANTASY! Besides, I'm only two chapters in, it's entirely possible I'll be covering car accidents and migrant workers later on.

Tell me what you think - because I'm totally lost!

firstkiss


<quote>I was wonderin'
06/07/07 By: Anonymous
why is it that in the world of romance, there's: <p>

(1) no car accidents, <p>
(2) no ugly fat women who are having fatal attraction pursuit with those handsome guy with curly hair, <p>
(3) no words on STD and other things, <p>
(4) no mental health issues, <p>
(5) no gangsters,<p>
(6) no migrant workers working to death in boiling and freezing temperatures,<p>
(7) no 5'8" Asian "socially inept" dudes who attend Berkeley or CalTech (it's always the 6'5" lean caucasian Davis whom the ladies are giddy over after a few moments of fake feigness of some kind...), <p>
(8) no Patty who's 5'8" and 197 pounds who smokes like George Burns but who has 2 advance degrees in astro physics and plasma, <p>
(9) no mention of the Iraq "war to get rid of all terrorists", <p>
(10)no starving kids in America or in the world at large <p>

how come it is always two or 4 cute couple gossiping about other's gossips or going shopping at "high end" brand name stores, drinking sophisticated drinks, talking sophisticated talks about sophisticated people and their sophisticated ideas about sophisticated marketing and commercials and high fashion and high fashion designers and how they are "changing the foundation of society" with their "revolutionary ideas," etc., etc., etc. ? <p>

i don't get it. wait, is it because it's all fantasies of men and women, and they have no basis in reality? <quote>

OH! and to put icing on the cake they only have me a 50% == I must have missed the memo about erotica also needing to have a political agenda - can I get another copy of that if you have it lying around?

Oh, and BTW Mr. Anonymous, I don't live in America and I don't approve of your war, so I'm sure as hell not going to write about it - 'nuff said.

Don't mind the weirdos. Besides, there are plenty of stories on Lit that include most of those thing.

 

[rgraham666]

I think psychotic Puritanism never goes out of fashion.

 

[only_more_so]

OH! and to put icing on the cake they only have me a 50% == I must have missed the memo about erotica also needing to have a political agenda - can I get another copy of that if you have it lying around?

And BTW Mr. Anonymous, I don't live in America and I don't approve of your war, so I'm sure as hell not going to write about it - 'nuff said.

Wow, you really do draw the kooks. Periodically there are threads on the boards about common erotica cliches. That guy just listed a few of them.

So what? It is a fantasy, and in my fantasies the only person who is going to be the least bit out of shape is me, and not as out of shape as I am.

 

[Boxlicker101]

I think psychotic Puritanism never goes out of fashion.

This doesn't look like psychotic Puritanism to me. It looks more like psychotic bleeding heart Liberalism, with the references to migrant workers, the Iraq War, starving kids, and the overall tenor.

Psychotic Puritanism would just complain about all the people committing mortal sins, and wonder why none of them get struck by thunderbolts cast by an outraged God.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

This doesn't look like psychotic Puritanism to me. It looks more like psychotic bleeding heart Liberalism, with the references to migrant workers, the Iraq War, starving kids, and the overall tenor.

Psychotic Puritanism would just complain about all the people committing mortal sins, and wonder why none of them get struck by thunderbolts cast by an outraged God.

Damn straight. That is about it on the nod. Anonymous is just a whiner, if you ask me. He or she looks for things to whine about, one way or the other. You can't keep Anon happy at all.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

This doesn't look like psychotic Puritanism to me. It looks more like psychotic bleeding heart Liberalism, with the references to migrant workers, the Iraq War, starving kids, and the overall tenor.

Psychotic Puritanism would just complain about all the people committing mortal sins, and wonder why none of them get struck by thunderbolts cast by an outraged God.

Oh, and the Church plagiarized the lightning bolts from my religion. We pagans still await our royalties.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Dear Anon

I apologize if I offended you by having cousins marry in India. I wasn't aware of anti-incest laws in India, but I don't live there, so I wouldn't know. I stand corrected, if you're right. Even so, if there aren't that many people available, and people are already breaking the laws against the caste system, why not break the anti-incest laws if convenient?

 

[firstkiss]

This doesn't look like psychotic Puritanism to me. It looks more like psychotic bleeding heart Liberalism, with the references to migrant workers, the Iraq War, starving kids, and the overall tenor.

Psychotic Puritanism would just complain about all the people committing mortal sins, and wonder why none of them get struck by thunderbolts cast by an outraged God.

Yeah but why is it always my stories? Have I offended? Really, I thought I was sugary-sweet without the calories!

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Yeah but why is it always my stories? Have I offended? Really, I thought I was sugary-sweet without the calories!

Maybe it was a guy who doesn't like to cook. Just giving you a hard time here.

 

[SweetWitch]

On Dire Straits, chapter 26

this getting old and boring,drama queen b/s
06/10/07 By: Anonymous in usa
nothing sexy about this story on a sex site.around and around more b/s and teasing.to old for cliffhangers.people and plot getting stupid.

It's been a while since I heard from you. Where you been? Just a thought: You might want to change your M.O. Your title is the same on all my stories. Besides, the only drama queen in this family is my six-year-old daughter. And she's entitled. She's only six.

 

[SweetWitch]

This message contains feedback for: SweetWitch
About the submission: Dire Straits Ch. 26
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

How many times are you going to throw Judah out of your life. Getting kind of boring. Story was kind of good, but being carried a little too far. One tragedy after another. Get real. This is Literotica, not the NY bestseller list. Wrap it up!!!!!

Just for that, no sex in the final chapter. All the male characters will run around with raging hard-ons and the female characters will moan in frustration. See what you did?

 

[smy3th]

Just for that, no sex in the final chapter. All the male characters will run around with raging hard-ons and the female characters will moan in frustration. See what you did?

Now that sounds way too real.

 

[SweetWitch]

Now that sounds way too real.

Blame Anon!

 

[jomar]

Stop it you bastards! At least have the balls to write a PC, even an anonymous one!

MY new story came out and was doing very, very well until the last three votes bombed the hell out of it. Arggh!

 

[jomar]

About the submission: Chase Cooder - Bush Pilot! Ch. 01
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

Good beginning, continue, but don't take to long.

***

That's...better. Thanks. Every three-four days.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

To Anon Troll #1 (re Zeus & Tara- Ch. 1)

Your views on the identity of the King of Heaven are not the point. That is a sectarian issue. I am a pagan, so of course I think of things a bit differently. Don't be shocked if I respectfully disagree (because I know, like, and respect a great number of Christians in both RL and the Net) with your theology and dogma. It's in my profile, buddy. I'm a pagan priest. So, no, I don't consider myself. I consider the issue to be one of opinion. This is a story, anyway. I'm allowed to put whomever I want on the celestial throne in a story.