Annonymous

[SEVERUSMAX]

To Anon #2 (re Vicki Ch. 1)

While I regret that you have such a low opinion of my story (admittedly one of my oldest stories on Lit and I have already apologized for my one big goof-up on the STD issue), I fail to see how my story revealed my "age" (whatever you happen to think that is- here's a clue, I'm not living with my parents) or my "ignorance". Ignorance of what? Rather vague for a feedback e-mail, don't you think? It's trolls like you that make writers turn off their anon feedback. I haven't done so yet, but you're really tempting me to do so right now. No constructive critiques, just vicious personal attacks. What does that say about your maturity, pal?

P.S. You're not a friend of scouries, by any chance, are you?

 

[SweetWitch]

While I regret that you have such a low opinion of my story (admittedly one of my oldest stories on Lit and I have already apologized for my one big goof-up on the STD issue), I fail to see how my story revealed my "age" (whatever you happen to think that is- here's a clue, I'm not living with my parents) or my "ignorance". Ignorance of what? Rather vague for a feedback e-mail, don't you think? It's trolls like you that make writers turn off their anon feedback. I haven't done so yet, but you're really tempting me to do so right now. No constructive critiques, just vicious personal attacks. What does that say about your maturity, pal?

P.S. You're not a friend of scouries, by any chance, are you?

He has friends? How sweet.

 

[firstkiss]

Here's the latest in my inbox....

This message contains feedback for: firstkiss
About the submission: Not My Type Ch.3
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

your a liar. women haveing multiple orgasms is a myth.

You're such a jackass. I had three last night.

Maybe you're not doing it right.

 

[MarshAlien]

This message contains feedback for: MarshAlien
About the submission: A Stitch in Time Ch. 01
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

"A Stitch..." was a bitch. Why don't you find something interesting to
write about. Yawn...Snoozing...wake me up for your next misguided effort.

I'll be sure and do just that. How 'bout a phone number to help me out?

 

[starrkers]

On my new story that went up while I was sleeping:

Good But
06/27/07 By: Anonymous in usa
Good story but at the start they have no shower to warm her up, then later Mike takes a shower. Try to plan your story a little better.

Dear Anonymous in usa: I didn't say they didn't have a shower, just that she couldn't stand up in it (she was semi-conscious, remember?). Try to read the story a little better.

 

[SweetWitch]

On my new story that went up while I was sleeping:


Dear Anonymous in usa: I didn't say they didn't have a shower, just that she couldn't stand up in it (she was semi-conscious, remember?). Try to read the story a little better.

*Snort*

 

[rgraham666]

Won't quote the comment. It's a long one. It's the second one on my latest.

But in reply.

Thank you, I think. Still, if my story 'failed' you're not clear on why.

Also, vampires in my world are supernatural creatures, beings of magic and darkness. Biological rules don't apply to them. And the blood is what fuels them. They cannot do without it. So I don't believe your comments about the biological limits of life are useful as criticisms.

 

[rgraham666]

I just got this in my e-mail.

I just read that TxRad story "Missy" you and others commented on. You and that idiot duddle146 are stupid, stupid, stupid! You should both get a life.

To which I can only reply, "Bite me, asshole."

 

[Boxlicker101]

this is a weird email.

This email just arrived. It's interesting, and a little scary.

Ah, boxiebaby, you is really some hot stuff. You write some really weird stuff man. You probably some old geezer sitting there with your little computer. I don like some of your stories.

Being a 67 year old great-grandfather, many people would call me an old geezer, ane I'm sitting here now with my laptop, which is a little computer. I wonder what stories the writer didn't like. Probably my Nude Day entry, among others.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

This one made to my Worst/Best IM/PM thread. . .


This message contains feedback for:
This feedback was sent by: (idiot's email address removed to protect the stupid)

Comments:

MMM A hot sexy Redhead who knows what she wants and likes to talk about
it, how wonderful. If you wpould like to chat and exchange stories
with a male point take off your panties and drop me a line, I am ssure
that we can make each other cum and cum as I slide my head between you
legs and sslowly, very slowly begin to lick your sweet pussy. George,
(idiot's email address removed to protect the stupid)
MMMMM my tongue is just reaching the top of
your lovely legs and moving ever so slowly to your pussy lips, slowly
licking your hot wet pussy, licking, licking, licking

****

Please grow a pair.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

For Dennis, April, & Lorraine- Ch. 3

To bad that they don't have minus ratings
06/30/07 By: Anonymous
I might be able to find the correct grad

Coming from someone who can't spell the word "grade" correctly, I wonder what his or her beef is. No explanation as to he or she hated/trolled/one-bombed it. Evidently, spelling isn't an issue to Anon. Grrrrr.....vicious feedback without any constructive criticism. Chok fana. Very bad!

 

[Boxlicker101]

This guy is either a big fan of Jessica Simpson or dislikes her.

Comments:
You nasty person...Jessica Simpson...in your dreams / Smuthead. I don like too
much of your storyies. Write nice one sometime...


Thanks for the compliment. I often call myself names similar to "smuthead". However, since you are reading my smut and asking for more, what does that make you? Besides semi-literate, that is.

 

[Diamond_Girl]

This email just arrived. It's interesting, and a little scary.

Ah, boxiebaby, you is really some hot stuff. You write some really weird stuff man. You probably some old geezer sitting there with your little computer. I don like some of your stories.

Being a 67 year old great-grandfather, many people would call me an old geezer, ane I'm sitting here now with my laptop, which is a little computer. I wonder what stories the writer didn't like. Probably my Nude Day entry, among others.

We can see you!!!

 

[Diamond_Girl]

This message contains feedback for: Diamond_Girl
About the submission: Touring DC
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

A lame assed story from a lame assed cunt and her faggotty boyfriend. Take this
drivel and shove it up your fat, bead filled ass, along with your "black,
strappy heels, you miserable, disease infested slut!


This is apparently one from a Playgrounder who has taken the time, not just to read my story, but also to read mine and DJ's "Erotic Dream" thread.

Dear Anon,

I'm so sorry that you're completely incapable of writing erotica yourself and therefore must resort to insulting other people's efforts. Maybe you're friends with my ex, or maybe you're someone whose attentions I didn't welcome. Whichever, might I point out, as noted in our thread, that I have a very nice ass, and frankly, my man would rather have it as it is than boney - makes it more comfortable for him. And speaking of... After spending a few days with him and being with him this many months, I can quite assure you that there's not a single bit of him that's in any way faggoty or effiminate.

Clearly, only someone who persists in wasting time trolling writers and fellow Litsters is the one who's truly miserable. Maybe you'll be able to find help for that. I've heard that strong medications and electro-convulsive therapy are both useful treatment options. As for the rest... Just ignorance, which is worse than stupidity.

Thank you for taking the time to read my story and our thread. We like knowing that people are reading our erotica.

*DG*

 

[rgraham666]

Just got this in my e-mail.

You don't know the truth? Are you kidding? You'd be surprised to find out just how lettle you thinks you knows. You much nasty little guy. I don't Bite you - You Bite me wise guy. Just SHUT UP.

Hilarious!

 

[rgraham666]

I've got a fan!

What tripe! Make an intelligent comment or Shut Up! Geeez.

Oh please Wise and Magnificent One! Continue to shower the blessings of your unmatched insight and pure genius on this most unworthy of your acolytes. http://bestsmileys.com/bowing/2.gif

Is that intelligent enough, Anon?

 

[Stella_Omega]

Dear anonymous,

Thank you for your suggestions, they were good ones!
I'd be glad to let you know when I next post a story, but I don't have an email address for you...

 

[skittles_lm]

"This is a sensationalized torture session, presented for shock value and adolescent masturbatory fantasies. I hope they're only fantasies. I really do"


Man... adolescent masturbatory fantasies... that rocks. thanks!

so much for tolerance of other peoples kinks.

 

[SweetWitch]

Dire Straits

Almost 3 weeks since the last chapter??
07/02/07 By: Anonymous in So California
Witch....?? You still alive and composing?

It's in the queue, Babe.

 

[rgraham666]

Just got this in my email.

you so phony. how much you pay for red h's, I don like thems much. you silly reviewor.

Hilarious! http://bestsmileys.com/lol/1.gif

 

[SweetWitch]

Just got this in my email.



Hilarious! http://bestsmileys.com/lol/1.gif

Three guesses on who wrote that.

 

[rgraham666]

Three guesses on who wrote that.

Won't take that bet.

What's funniest is him thinking I bought my H's.

Sometimes it's difficult to feed myself. Bribery is way beyond my fiscal ability.

 

[SweetWitch]

Won't take that bet.

What's funniest is him thinking I bought my H's.

Sometimes it's difficult to feed myself. Bribery is way beyond my fiscal ability.

He/she/it doesn't, for one minute, believe that you or anyone else bought those H's. He just would like to think that he can sway public opinion and sully the reputations of others. Wasn't that malicious story he recently wrote proof enough?

The creature reminds me of those nasty little children who can't make friends, so they run around telling the parents of the other children all the bad things their kids are doing and making a few stories up.

He thinks he's in popularity contest and he needs to grow the hell up. If he wants to be the best, he should try to improve his craft, not try to eliminate the so-called competition with poison words. I kinda feel sorry for him. It must be a really lonely life for him.

M

 

[Boxlicker101]

Just got this in my email.

Quote:
you so phony. how much you pay for red h's, I don like thems much. you silly reviewor.


Hilarious! http://bestsmileys.com/lol/1.gif

I have two emails on this page that seem to be from the same person, or somebody imitating him or her.

ETA: How would anybody ever be able to buy scores anyhow? I have never actually met a single member of Lit. or anybody who reads the stuff here.

 

[SweetWitch]

I have two emails on this page that seem to be from the same person, or somebody imitating him or her.

ETA: How would anybody ever be able to buy scores anyhow? I have never actually met a single member of Lit. or anybody who reads the stuff here.

I actually met someone who is a fan of Lit last weekend. He was a comedian who heard my friend call my name in the crowd at the club we were at. It was a cool moment for me when the man recognized me, shook my hand and gave me his cd.

And that's how I ended up on stage on Laclede's Landing and how the police took notice of me. I don't think I'll be back in St. Louis any time soon. The SLPD is still looking for us, I'm sure.

But we sure had fun!

Molly