Annonymous

[Jenny_Jackson]

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Comments:

Hey Jenny,

Girl - What the fuck do you have against us older people. Some of us
vote on your stupid stories out of kindness. You then turn around and
say bad things about us. Sadie_Lady you have a big mouth. Screw you and
your stories in the future. Just keep shooting your big mouth off when
you should be writing.

X-fan

Who the hell is Sadie_Ladie??

Now I'm am just going to have to write a really obnoxious story about old, demented bastards.

EDIT: OMG. What a brain storm. I'll put one in my Earth Day Story. Screw you too, AssHole

 

[SweetWitch]

Who the hell is Sadie_Ladie??

Now I'm am just going to have to write a really obnoxious story about old, demented bastards.

EDIT: OMG. What a brain storm. I'll put one in my Earth Day Story. Screw you too, AssHole

*snicker*

 

[Foxee Browne]

This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

keep up the the good work

Thanks Anon, I'll try my very best

 

[Pegasus_Flying]

Just Plain Fun......

Being kinda new I am having a good time learning about all these threads...I often crack up at the annonymous comments in the feedback portal and finding this thread is just plain fun....

 

[Pegasus_Flying]

This is a month old but....

Ha... just had another one... "Story was Ok but too British for the mass market, I had a job understanding a lot of the dialogue... You should become more mid Atlantic with your language if you want to be appreciated world wide"

Dear Annon... I am fucking British, and the story is set in England

it absolutely cracks me up...great response pop_54...laughing too hard....

 

[SweetWitch]

why keep prolonging this story
02/24/07 By: Anonymous in usa
they stop doing stories and movies like this years ago.cliffhangers are just like cockteasers,cruel and abusive.

Thank you for taking valuable time away from watching the Cartoon Channel to read my story and post your insightful comment. Though I'm certain you are quite accustomed to people abusing you, I can assure you, cruelty is not my intention.

Oh, and just because a woman tells you no (something I'm sure you've heard often throughout the course of your life) it doesn't mean she's a cocktease. It simply indicates her good taste.

Thanks again,

SweetWitch

 

[fieryjen]

This message contains feedback for: fieryjen
About the submission: Letters to S Ch. 01
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

If the girlfriend that was , is and shall be is all that hot on gays why is she interestyed in him?

The fact that I support gay rights doesn't make me gay. Fucktard.

 

[Vermilion]

Hmm. Quite the nastiest comment I've ever had and completely unfounded. Allow me to quote...

Poseur
02/23/07 By: Anonymous
If you want to plagiarize one of the finest novels in the world and paste your pathetic, inadequate prose - feel free.

If you want to post a story here, make sure it is your own work - totally.

Unfounded because I have no idea what novel he's talking about. I actually wrote this for a friend of mine based on certain elements which he wanted included. Unfortunately I can't ask Anonymous what book it is that I've plagiarised so will have to wonder for the rest of my life. As if it matters.
Bloody anonymous.
Post your name if you're going to criticise.

x
V

 

[tanyachrs]

I expect he was referring to the title.

 

[Vermilion]

I expect he was referring to the title.

Just the title? <shakes head> Never read it, just used it because I needed to call the story something.

How did you know which story I was talking about?
x
V

 

[SweetWitch]

Dire Straits chapter 9

its' to slow and a lot of talking about nothing
02/27/07 By: Anonymous in usa
let move on and get to the meat of the story.in what was wrote in this chapter only one thing came out that we didn't know was that coffeecake is a fag.

Do you have something against the gay community?

 

[CeriseNoire]

About the submission: Fight
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

Hurrah

A very nice slice of human elements which are not seen here often enough.

Next please

Thank you. I know I disappointed some people looking for more stroke material, but I am glad a few people enjoyed the focus on the characters (especially since it was in 'romance' and all).

 

[MarshAlien]

This is great! I had no idea there was a place that we unload on this guy. Ok, here goes:

I got this public comment about my story "The Accidental Gigolo, from Anonymous "in the USA" (so that narrows it down a bit): "That's much better. You're showing your talent again - now go back and rewrite "Show Moms" with at least this degree of eroticism or a bit better."

I'm so sorry. I must have gotten your order wrong on that other story. Please, read the next story I post on the house. Free of charge. My treat. Oh, wait a minute . . .

Thanks. That felt good. How'd I do?

Marsh

 

[Foxee Browne]

03/02/07 By: Anonymous in usa
I give you kudos, you turned me on, and made me read a story!! haha! I hate reading, but my face is red now from leaning on my hand while I read that whole story! LOVED IT!!

Dear Anon,

I am glad you enjoyed Heart & Flowers and all that sappy shit ....
Thank you for the praise given, it is very nice to hear it. Hope you keep reading.

Scarlett

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

This message contains feedback for: RedHairedandFriendly
About the submission: A Writer's Secret
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

This reeked of frustration and male humiliation of her better half. Is
this you?

***

Anon, I assume you want an answer. Which I could give had you left me an address.

I am confused by "male humiliation" though... she didn't humiliate him, she played alone, in her bed, with her toys while he wasn't around. How did this humiliate him?

Frustration... Ooh yes, she was definitely frustrated, that was the reason behind her playing with her toy and running fantasies through her head.

~ Red

 

[Vermilion]

Directed at Looking Back

Huh
03/05/07 By: Anonymous
Stop the whining, forget about nostalgia and regrets! You're in your early 20's, get off your ass and go do the things you want to do, woman.

Easier said than done JACKASS.
Did you ever think that perhaps there was a reason I feel sad? That perhaps there was a reason I described years as being 'taken' from me?
You cope with a debilitating seven year illness that shows no sign of ever ever relenting then tell me to 'get off my ass.' If I could do the things I wanted to do I'd be out there fucking DOING them instead of writing about it.
How could you read that all the way through and not realise that?
TWAT.

 

[rachlou]

Directed at Looking Back



Easier said than done JACKASS.
Did you ever think that perhaps there was a reason I feel sad? That perhaps there was a reason I described years as being 'taken' from me?
You cope with a debilitating seven year illness that shows no sign of ever ever relenting then tell me to 'get off my ass.' If I could do the things I wanted to do I'd be out there fucking DOING them instead of writing about it.
How could you read that all the way through and not realise that?
TWAT.

 

[impressive]

I love your ass.

Just sayin'

 

[rachlou]

I love your ass.

Just sayin'

Thanks that's the nicest thing anyone has said to me for...ages!

 

[SweetWitch]

Directed at Looking Back



Easier said than done JACKASS.
Did you ever think that perhaps there was a reason I feel sad? That perhaps there was a reason I described years as being 'taken' from me?
You cope with a debilitating seven year illness that shows no sign of ever ever relenting then tell me to 'get off my ass.' If I could do the things I wanted to do I'd be out there fucking DOING them instead of writing about it.
How could you read that all the way through and not realise that?
TWAT.

Don't let 'em get to you, Vermilion. It's not worth the upset. It's just another pathetic, mindless troll that I missed on my last hunt. Looks like I need to oil up the ol' shotgun again.

We love your work, Babe.

SW

 

[rgraham666]

I love your ass.

Just sayin'

That makes two of us.

 

[Vermilion]

Don't let 'em get to you, Vermilion. It's not worth the upset. It's just another pathetic, mindless troll that I missed on my last hunt. Looks like I need to oil up the ol' shotgun again.

We love your work, Babe.

SW

Thanks babe - wound 'em a coupla times before the fatal shot, yeah?
x
V

 

[rachlou]

That makes two of us.

 

[SweetWitch]

On Dire Straits, chapter 11

Draging
03/05/07 By: Anonymous in USA
Story started out great but is not taking too long, draging

Um... Get bent and learn to spell.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Thanks that's the nicest thing anyone has said to me for...ages!

Well, you do have a nice one...