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TxRad
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On my new story... Fuck buddies...
Pleeezzzee!
02/02/07 By: Anonymous in USA
You need someone to fix your story as well as the spelling
I wanted to tell him I took it to one of the best mechanics I know but he's anymouse so it's hard to do..... and wanted him to point out these obvious prolific spelling errors so I could correct them.....
*sigh*
Pleeezzzee!
02/02/07 By: Anonymous in USA
You need someone to fix your story as well as the spelling
I wanted to tell him I took it to one of the best mechanics I know but he's anymouse so it's hard to do..... and wanted him to point out these obvious prolific spelling errors so I could correct them.....
*sigh*
Vermilion
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I've had a comment (not anonymous) that the sex in an incest/taboo story was too 'vanila'.
I didn't see the need to do hideously kinky sex in a story made kinky by the social taboo of the situation. Also - the girl involved was a virgin and very inexperienced... she was meant to be a passive participant and there was an element of coercion. Tbh it wasn't all that vanilla and it was only the first of what may develop into a series.
I would have said all this to him in person, but I'm feeling lazy, so I hope he sees it here.
If I want to write kinky sex then I will, but I didn't feel it was appropriate to this particular story.
x
V
I didn't see the need to do hideously kinky sex in a story made kinky by the social taboo of the situation. Also - the girl involved was a virgin and very inexperienced... she was meant to be a passive participant and there was an element of coercion. Tbh it wasn't all that vanilla and it was only the first of what may develop into a series.
I would have said all this to him in person, but I'm feeling lazy, so I hope he sees it here.
If I want to write kinky sex then I will, but I didn't feel it was appropriate to this particular story.
x
V
floweringquince
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Dear Anonymi Group 1,
Thank you for your lovely praise. I am very glad that you enjoyed my story.
Dear Anonymi Group B,
Thank you for your lovely praise, and kind offers to help with "my needs."
Before you come rushing on over with your duffel bags full of Crisco and cucumbers, you may wish to consider that the main character in my story is fictional. While I am not fictional, I also differ from that character in any number of other ways.
Dear Anonymous Individual,
Thank you for your lovely praise, and kind offer to help with "my needs."
As you "have a very large tongue and it is only good for one thing," it must be very sad for you now that most postage stamps are sold with a pre-applied self-adhesive backing.
Sincerely,
- F. Quince
Thank you for your lovely praise. I am very glad that you enjoyed my story.
Dear Anonymi Group B,
Thank you for your lovely praise, and kind offers to help with "my needs."
Before you come rushing on over with your duffel bags full of Crisco and cucumbers, you may wish to consider that the main character in my story is fictional. While I am not fictional, I also differ from that character in any number of other ways.
Dear Anonymous Individual,
Thank you for your lovely praise, and kind offer to help with "my needs."
As you "have a very large tongue and it is only good for one thing," it must be very sad for you now that most postage stamps are sold with a pre-applied self-adhesive backing.
Sincerely,
- F. Quince
Foxee Browne
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The touch of a Velvet Glove
Dear Anon
I agree with you when you say The Touch of a Velvet Glove is "A very sick story" for it is not very nice. Perhaps that is why it is in the non-consent category?
Let me give you a piece of advice Anon, if you are looking for a nice story, non-consent is not the place to be reading. Perhaps a different category would suit you better. Thank you for reading.
Dear Anon
I agree with you when you say The Touch of a Velvet Glove is "A very sick story" for it is not very nice. Perhaps that is why it is in the non-consent category?
Let me give you a piece of advice Anon, if you are looking for a nice story, non-consent is not the place to be reading. Perhaps a different category would suit you better. Thank you for reading.
scriptordelecto
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More personal than fiction?
02/05/07 By: Anonymous in USA
The story was excellent and very well written. Your characterazations were strong and well within the plot parameters.
The questions that you prompted from me were more about you personally that about the story. Have you lost a someone like Rick from your life or a family member close enough to you to ellicit that sort of awareness about grief and its processes? Are you a counseling professional? Nosy questions, and I do not mean to invade your personal life, so respond or not, as you wish.
Had this from Anon. I really don't mind the questions at all and would love to respond, but as it was Anon, alas I cannot. If you happen to see this, PM or contact me through my Author's page.
Script
02/05/07 By: Anonymous in USA
The story was excellent and very well written. Your characterazations were strong and well within the plot parameters.
The questions that you prompted from me were more about you personally that about the story. Have you lost a someone like Rick from your life or a family member close enough to you to ellicit that sort of awareness about grief and its processes? Are you a counseling professional? Nosy questions, and I do not mean to invade your personal life, so respond or not, as you wish.
Had this from Anon. I really don't mind the questions at all and would love to respond, but as it was Anon, alas I cannot. If you happen to see this, PM or contact me through my Author's page.
Script
only_more_so
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I will probably write the next chapter in the Reluctant Psychic series this weekend, so maybe by the end of next week.
Darkniciad
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starrkers said:
Bwahaha!
Reattachment? I wasn't aware the anons had any to begin with
scriptordelecto
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Darkniciad said:Bwahaha!
Reattachment? I wasn't aware the anons had any to begin with
LOL! What she meant was...prosthetic attachment surgery
CrimsonMaiden
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Bwahaha!
Comment I got on my valentine story "Valentine Virgin".
Prostitute:
02/09/07 by Anonymous in India
I wanna fuck ur sister like an elephant
My first reaction was HUH? My second was ROFL.
Comment I got on my valentine story "Valentine Virgin".
Prostitute:
02/09/07 by Anonymous in India
I wanna fuck ur sister like an elephant
My first reaction was HUH? My second was ROFL.
Selena_Kitt
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CrimsonMaiden said:
ROFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh that's priceless!
CrimsonMaiden
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SelenaKittyn said:ROFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh that's priceless!
Once I saw it, I just had to post it. I knew someone would get a kick out of it.
Boxlicker101
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CrimsonMaiden said:
I wonder, would that be with a truck or with a tusk. Or does he mean he wants to fuck ur sistr the way he would fuck an elephant? Mind-boggling!
lipsofanangel
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CrimsonMaiden said:
I'm just....boggling. Seriously.
That has to be the funniest thing ever.
Nirvanadragones
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Melodrama Award goes to...
02/15/07 By: Anonymous
Thanks for submitting BUT...
Okay, if you're going to completely ignore the erotic part of erotica, you'd better at least make up for it in the plot department. So far, we're missing both elements. But you do rate number one for melodrama, so congrats.
*very controlled*
I'd like to point out the catagory this is posted in - "Non-erotic" . . .
Melodrama. Good one!
02/15/07 By: Anonymous
Thanks for submitting BUT...
Okay, if you're going to completely ignore the erotic part of erotica, you'd better at least make up for it in the plot department. So far, we're missing both elements. But you do rate number one for melodrama, so congrats.
*very controlled*
I'd like to point out the catagory this is posted in - "Non-erotic" . . .
Melodrama. Good one!
MagicaPractica
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The comment I got wasn't anonymous so I won't quote it but... damn man, make some sense.
Boxlicker101
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MagicaPractica said:The comment I got wasn't anonymous so I won't quote it but... damn man, make some sense.
You know, you can quote it but delete the name.
RedHairedandFriendly
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Boxlicker... I really like that AV. 
*end of thread jack*
*end of thread jack*
SweetWitch
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On Dire Straits, chpt 5
And yet, you managed to get through all the chapters posted and still gave me a top vote, so i ain't gonna say nothin' bad about you either.
SW
And yet, you managed to get through all the chapters posted and still gave me a top vote, so i ain't gonna say nothin' bad about you either.
SW
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