Annonymous

[Darkniciad]

On Bitter Harvest:

Quote:
huh?
10/22/06 By: Anonymous in USA

What is the big fuss about this story? You could have written this from formula and probably did. Lame


Thank you so much for the profound wisdom. You can go back to jacking off in your mommy's basement now. Buh-bye!

Speaking of formula, I wonder how long this dipstick has been off it? Obviously not long enough to develop any taste.

 

[672]

OK, only most of them were bullshit then. None of them made any real sense to me. Seems like you have pronounced preferences in what words you like and don't like. Sounded to me like opinionated crapola, grossly overstated in intensity, and almost entirely negative and non-constructive.

So why post your comments anonymously, and now come along and claim them? Why not just put your name on your comments in the first place? If you haven't "the pair" (as you put it) to stand behind them when you post them, why should anyone else give them any credence?

And as to even she admitting the story needs work, well duh: Almost any author will almost always admit that anything they have written "needs work." We are always hoping someone will tell us otherwise, but then we wouldn't believe it anyway. The only authors who think their stuff is perfect are the delusional anonymous writers of poison pen critiques.

First of all, you're just bitching because you were proved wrong. In being proved wrong by myself, and the writer, you must exert your male stupidity all over me, an innocent, who did not deliver a negative comment. But OH NOES, you have to pretend as if you have flare, and style, and emotion, and the Anon.'s comment is Anonymous either way, and she must be beaten for it.

The words I specified, and the statements she didn't like, she agreed with me over the phone they were misplaced, and childish for an adult story about rape. Seriously. Fucking, does the word pussy and hot ass turn you on? Aftering reading the books she has read, and I have read, the only word I don't mind is cock. The rest of it, was boring. And out of place. The sentence structure was not hers, and self-admitted, because she said this was her first time writing a story like this. If pussy, and nubile get you hot, if it does, seek help. You read something like Exquisite Corpse and other good writers of erotic horror, and that just doesn't fly.

I couldn't put my name, because I was in a rush. Second, I told her over the phone it had been me. Sometimes that is just the way we work, so fuck you. A third reason? All of the other comments were fluffy, gushy, drivel.

ZOMG TEH HAWT! J00 R TEH AW3S0M3! Y0UR PR0N IZ TEH 1337 HAX!

Mindless praise. Therefore, since everyone else just gushed mindlessly, which she has mentioned upsets her due to a lack of insight, I try to give her any feedback I could possibly give her. Even if portions of it are throwaway, I sit there and try my hardest to give her something outside of her own head to work with. That is much more than any of her so called friends on here attempt.

That's what a good friend does. Fucking, I shouldn't be explaining this, but you're such a douche, things like this, a critical comment in a sea of blather and pointless praise, probably makes no sense. It's was a mediocre story. I've seen her style, I've seen her at her best, and that was a mediocre story. Compared to Screams, which could use work in my eyes, also, this story was mediocre. But you know what, with a little more honest insight, anybody can profit.

Fucking, once again, grow a pair, and stop sucking on her ass, dude.

Once again, she asks for help. Once again, I still stick to it. Why I have to suffer caustic behavior from an asshole on here, because I gave my fucking friend something she wanted, something she was actually happy with, something besides praise (which is just as bad for a writer, if not worse than negative critiques), is beyond me. I do a favor, and some sensitive cunt, who has been told his writing sucks by too many Anon.s, comes up to me and says I'm wrong for honesty?

You jump off of a cliff and die. I'm sick of you pretentious assholes. She said in her very first post about it, it pleased her. She was very, very happy. And in another thread, she said she hated blind praise. Why can't you just shut your hole and let me feel like, as her friend who is too far away to see her, and too busy to keep in steady contact with her, I have accomplished something to benefit her. I read her story. And you know what? In order to attain that opinion, I had to read it three times. Something she probably wishes more cunts would do, rather than bash her friends who do this thing for her.

That should give you a specific view of the writer in general. So shut your ass, stop trying to sit on a cloud higher than me, just because I was honest, and you know what? Told her everything in that critique, which she repeated back to me as concerns of hers over the piece.

Concerns. She was concernicus about the exact same things I said. Ha!

You know what that means, right?

That means you just insulted her.

Which makes me laugh, because you basically just said she can't critique her own work. That is very insulting of you to say to her, whoever you are.

That makes you look like a dumbfuck.

And therefore, this is the part where you fuck off.

And realize you have been very, very owned.

<3

 

[rgraham666]

Got this one in e-mail this morning. Just what I needed.

This message contains feedback for: rgraham666
About the submission: Embrace
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

This is an amazing story. I really enjoyed how rich and full the characters were and how you made the story more erotic and sexual, not just sex filled. Your writting is very much appreciated.

 

[Aurora Black]

Aurora- Obviously someone has their head in their ass. That story was too good to have come from formula. It goes right along with Stephen King's Christine, Christine Morgan's Black Roses, Wes Craven's Red Eye, Joseph Conrad's Heart of Darkness, and L Ron Hubbard's Fear for being among my favorite horror stories of all time.

*jaw drop*

I think I just had a tiny orgasm. Are you serious??? Thank you so much!

 

[Aurora Black]

Speaking of formula, I wonder how long this dipstick has been off it? Obviously not long enough to develop any taste.

*snicker*

 

[AchtungNight]

I think I just had a tiny orgasm.

I am glad to have given you what your story gave me.

 

[Aurora Black]

I am glad to have given you what your story gave me.

Smooth bastard.

 

[Guest]

 

[smy3th]

First of all, you're just bitching because you were proved wrong. In being proved wrong by myself, and the writer, you must exert your male stupidity all over me, an innocent, who did not deliver a negative comment. But OH NOES, you have to pretend as if you have flare, and style, and emotion, and the Anon.'s comment is Anonymous either way, and she must be beaten for it.

The words I specified, and the statements she didn't like, she agreed with me over the phone they were misplaced, and childish for an adult story about rape. Seriously. Fucking, does the word pussy and hot ass turn you on? Aftering reading the books she has read, and I have read, the only word I don't mind is cock. The rest of it, was boring. And out of place. The sentence structure was not hers, and self-admitted, because she said this was her first time writing a story like this. If pussy, and nubile get you hot, if it does, seek help. You read something like Exquisite Corpse and other good writers of erotic horror, and that just doesn't fly.

I couldn't put my name, because I was in a rush. Second, I told her over the phone it had been me. Sometimes that is just the way we work, so fuck you. A third reason? All of the other comments were fluffy, gushy, drivel.

ZOMG TEH HAWT! J00 R TEH AW3S0M3! Y0UR PR0N IZ TEH 1337 HAX!

Mindless praise. Therefore, since everyone else just gushed mindlessly, which she has mentioned upsets her due to a lack of insight, I try to give her any feedback I could possibly give her. Even if portions of it are throwaway, I sit there and try my hardest to give her something outside of her own head to work with. That is much more than any of her so called friends on here attempt.

That's what a good friend does. Fucking, I shouldn't be explaining this, but you're such a douche, things like this, a critical comment in a sea of blather and pointless praise, probably makes no sense. It's was a mediocre story. I've seen her style, I've seen her at her best, and that was a mediocre story. Compared to Screams, which could use work in my eyes, also, this story was mediocre. But you know what, with a little more honest insight, anybody can profit.

Fucking, once again, grow a pair, and stop sucking on her ass, dude.

Once again, she asks for help. Once again, I still stick to it. Why I have to suffer caustic behavior from an asshole on here, because I gave my fucking friend something she wanted, something she was actually happy with, something besides praise (which is just as bad for a writer, if not worse than negative critiques), is beyond me. I do a favor, and some sensitive cunt, who has been told his writing sucks by too many Anon.s, comes up to me and says I'm wrong for honesty?

You jump off of a cliff and die. I'm sick of you pretentious assholes. She said in her very first post about it, it pleased her. She was very, very happy. And in another thread, she said she hated blind praise. Why can't you just shut your hole and let me feel like, as her friend who is too far away to see her, and too busy to keep in steady contact with her, I have accomplished something to benefit her. I read her story. And you know what? In order to attain that opinion, I had to read it three times. Something she probably wishes more cunts would do, rather than bash her friends who do this thing for her.

That should give you a specific view of the writer in general. So shut your ass, stop trying to sit on a cloud higher than me, just because I was honest, and you know what? Told her everything in that critique, which she repeated back to me as concerns of hers over the piece.

Concerns. She was concernicus about the exact same things I said. Ha!

You know what that means, right?

That means you just insulted her.

Which makes me laugh, because you basically just said she can't critique her own work. That is very insulting of you to say to her, whoever you are.

That makes you look like a dumbfuck.

And therefore, this is the part where you fuck off.

And realize you have been very, very owned.

<3

Feel kinda strongly about this, do ya? Hey, if she likes your critique, who am I to complain? It does seem to me though that you have a very high opinion of your own opinions. I don't think I am ever that sure of myself, and I tend to be skeptical of those who are. Your opinions are just your opinions. Others may or may not agree. If she agrees, then great, but I feared she was being overly critical of her work based almost entirely on your blast. Personally, I find your arrogant attitude off putting, and I would tend to discount opinions that seem so self assured about your own absolute ability to judge. If your critique didn't sound like just another anonymous poison pen blaster it would have more credibility with me. And if you toned down the anger and self-righteous fury, it might actually convey your message better. But if the two of you are in this special relationship, don't let me come between you. I feel like I just stepped in between two lovers.

Actually though, based on what you say above, I would say the whole thing doesn't belong in the Anonymous thread at all. It turns out, you know each other and were just in too much of a rush intially to put your name on your comments but soon followed up with personal contact.

p.s. I followed your profile to your posting of your artwork, and found a whole other insecure overly self-critical you. I liked your art, but I didn't like you self-criticizing it. I am guessing that your highly self assured views expressed above are somewhat of a mask on your true feelings. I didn't like to see you beat yourself up about your artwork. I didn't like seeing the author beating herself up over your criticisms. I never like to see someone beat themselves up. There are more than enough people willing to beat up all of us without us having to do it ourselves. And if she was just doing a good job of accepting valid criticism, I apologize.

p.p.s. The "dumb fuck" is redundant to my signature. I attempt to head off the need for people to repeat the name calling by just getting it out of the way upfront. That may contradict my objection to beating oneself up. Just 'cause I do it, doesn't mean it's a good idea, 'cause as you well know, I am just a dumbfuck, so probably not a good role model.

 

[rachlou]

Thank you Mr Troll for being so damned predictable. It must be very annoying to you when a story temporarily peaks on the top list and you can't resist blasting it with a 1 vote! Felling better now? Good. Now get back to your hole and go find another sharp stick to poke up your arse.

Lots of love,
Rach

 

[SweetWitch]

Thank you Mr Troll for being so damned predictable. It must be very annoying to you when a story temporarily peaks on the top list and you can't resist blasting it with a 1 vote! Felling better now? Good. Now get back to your hole and go find another sharp stick to poke up your arse.

Lots of love,
Rach

This one hit me pretty hard too, Rach. Isn't he a pip?

 

[rachlou]

This one hit me pretty hard too, Rach. Isn't he a pip?

Yep, doncha just love em? No - me neither! grrrr

 

[Guest]

Dear Non-Troll

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v127/neonurotic/net/JustOneBite_Ch3.jpg

Anonymous, thank you ever so much for the fantastic feeback on Just One Bite Ch. 03 and your time. My collab writer for this story, Moonbladem and I appreciate it greatly!

 

[Aurora Black]

This message contains feedback for: Aurora Black
About the submission: Fuck Me
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

i read your poem and felt your desire expressed through your words ... then i listened toyou read it - and instanatly fell in lust with you!! I for one would love to listen to you reading your work!

Thank you.

 

[SweetWitch]

Yep, doncha just love em? No - me neither! grrrr

Hey, I know, let's hunt him down and truss him up for a good, old-fashioned hog---or is that troll--roast. I'll order 20 lbs of potatoe salad you can bring the baked beans. Anyone else wanna supply the keg?

 

[rachlou]

Hey, I know, let's hunt him down and truss him up for a good, old-fashioned hog---or is that troll--roast. I'll order 20 lbs of potatoe salad you can bring the baked beans. Anyone else wanna supply the keg?

mmmm i'd like a piece of that! Washed down with an few bottles of Merlot... yum

 

[slyc_willie]

I received an interesting, if confusing, anonymous comment on my story Revenge Cums Sweet:

"Mr. Burns I presume...
10/16/06 By: Anonymous in USA
You got to be one of the luckiest, smartest, and cunning persons I ever read about. I mean this was not only showing how to get even but reliefing the frustration from your cock! LMAO!! This story got style, I just wish you told your sister about, she tried to kill you, you knock her out cold then cum all over her face then say 'how's that for a iced mocha!'

Although...I'm jealous that this story actually happened to you in real life"

Real life? Far as I know, I never did or heard of this happening, except for a police blotto report in which a man was arrested for ejaculating into the honey mustard at a fast-food restaurant in Albuquerque.

He got eighteen months prison time. I'm not about to risk that! lol

By the way, Rach . . . I think a nice Cabernet goes better with troll.

Slyc

 

[rachlou]

Just wanted to say I really like your stories

Thanks anonomous - i'm really pleased that you like my work, you are the reason i write storys

 

[Aurora Black]

The trolls are making their final rounds.

Next...
10/28/06 By: Anonymous in USA
Not my cup of tea. Too long, could have been much shorter.

So the bottom of the page, the part where it said BH was 5 pages long, didn't clue you in? Fuck you, idiot.

ETA: And no, it couldn't have been much shorter. It was the perfect length for the story I wanted to tell. Fuck you some more.

 

[Trombonus]

The trolls are making their final rounds.



So the bottom of the page, the part where it said BH was 5 pages long, didn't clue you in? Fuck you, idiot.

ETA: And no, it couldn't have been much shorter. It was the perfect length for the story I wanted to tell. Fuck you some more.

I agree, I don't think you could have cut it any shorter than that. I thought it was fantastic. I RCV'd by the way.

BTW, I love the way you don't put up with shit from flaming dumbasses like this goober. You inspire me.

 

[Aurora Black]

I agree, I don't think you could have cut it any shorter than that. I thought it was fantastic. I RCV'd by the way.

BTW, I love the way you don't put up with shit from flaming dumbasses like this goober. You inspire me.

Thank you, sweetheart. I had to hold back a little. This is NOT the day for this shit.

 

[Trombonus]

Thank you, sweetheart. I had to hold back a little. This is NOT the day for this shit.

Anytime. Been in that situation too many times to count.

 

[Darkniciad]

The trolls are making their final rounds.

Next...
10/28/06 By: Anonymous in USA
Not my cup of tea. Too long, could have been much shorter.

So the bottom of the page, the part where it said BH was 5 pages long, didn't clue you in? Fuck you, idiot.

ETA: And no, it couldn't have been much shorter. It was the perfect length for the story I wanted to tell. Fuck you some more.

But, reading that much cut in to his time watching the entire first season of Power Rangers and spanking it to the Pink Ranger! That is absolutely unthinkable! Who would dare do that to such a degenerate little short-attention-span basement dwelling kicked out of the AV club wanktard! Really, we should be more considerate of our village idiots. Good ones are getting scarce nowadays. I remember back in my day, we had professional idiots that knew how to fall off walls and talk to themselves. Kids these days just don't understand what....

*laugh* I'll quit now

Hell with him Aurora, you know the story is excellent, and those who actually read it instead of bombing because it is the only thing they have in their pitiful meaningless existence do too.

His ignorant little poo-flinging vote will likely go bye bye in that final sweep anyhow, and then you can laugh at him again.

 

[SweetWitch]

Offended by this
10/28/06 By: Anonymous
Your portrayal of Appalachians in this story, all the way through, is trite, cliche and offensive.

Hmmm...I know that I'm only the author so please forgive me if I'm wrong here but, as I recall, only one Appalachian was really portrayed in this story and she was the smartest character. She was intelligent, caring and wise. The rest of the characters were from other parts of the country, mostly cities in the midwest and east. My people come from Appalachia and I truly resent your accusation.

In short, fuck you, fuck off, get a life and, oh, by the way, take the time to actually READ the fucking story before you blast away at it with your deathray 2's. I'm glad you consider yourself so enlightened that you feel you have the right to sit in judgement of ANY person who writes here but the truth is you have shown yourself to be just another illiterate dumbass troll. I hope you shit and fall back in it.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Hmmm...I know that I'm only the author so please forgive me if I'm wrong here but, as I recall, only one Appalachian was really portrayed in this story and she was the smartest character. She was intelligent, caring and wise. The rest of the characters were from other parts of the country, mostly cities in the midwest and east. My people come from Appalachia and I truly resent your accusation.

In short, fuck you, fuck off, get a life and, oh, by the way, take the time to actually READ the fucking story before you blast away at it with your deathray 2's. I'm glad you consider yourself so enlightened that you feel you have the right to sit in judgement of ANY person who writes here but the truth is you have shown yourself to be just another illiterate dumbass troll. I hope you shit and fall back in it.

You really have a bunch of admirers, SW