Annonymous

[Skip1934a]

Ooh, ouch. That hurts so much from someone I don't even know.

I won the contest, and I'm proud of that fact. Putting the W in my signature is no different from what past winners have done. As for the slap in the face to other writers, you sound like you're talking from personal experience there. Were you in the contest too?



Thank you very much.



Oh, joy. Another one. Next!

Hey! You won the contest, "Rora. Don't sweat the 'people you don't know'. As a pro author, you will never be able to write to everyone. I don't read the so-called 'Romance' stories of professionals, because the target reader is female. times eight.

 

[Aurora Black]

As a pro author, you will never be able to write to everyone.

True, because everyone is different. As much as I'd like to write something that's universally liked, I realize that it's an impossible goal to reach.

Every time I surf Amazon for books, there are always a bunch of people in the reviews section who recommend it with enthusiasm and explanations about how much reading that particular book entertained them or enriched their lives in some way, and then there's the occasional dissenter. That's life.

 

[damppanties]

This message contains feedback for: damppanties
About the submission: A Beautiful Union Ch. 1
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

You write well, read a few of your stories, need to think about the hook, a
theme, a situation, something to keep the reader guessing what is coming, reads
more like a documentary. Also think about wasted words and descriptions.
Hemmingway would write long rambling prose and then distill it down to the
barest minimum. If it doesn't add to the feeling or the story line, then delete
it or shorten it ... I'm not a pro, just a voracious reader ... everything from
Thomas Mann to literotica. Good luck with your craft.

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Hmmm. I'd have liked an address to go with this. Seems worth following up on. But... documentary??!

 

[Skip1934a]

Public comment on Super Wimp -

This Is A Very Good Story!
10/20/06 By: Anonymous in USA
Although I didn't expect anything special when I started reading your story. I must say that I was both surprised and pleased at the way you developed and ended it.

I'm happy that someone was surprised. That was the intent for the ending.

Thank you Anonymous in USA.

 

[SweetWitch]

On The Spell of Appalachia

Loved it
10/29/06 By: Anonymous
Great story..I loved every page of it. I enen sent it to my online friends, most live in Europe

Aw, thank you, baby, but where the hell were you 3 days ago?

 

[Selena_Kitt]

Phenomenal!!!!!
10/28/06 By: Anonymous
You are an amazing writer and this is a fantastically original piece of work. If this doesn't win, the world is one fucked up place. It sure deserves to.
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awwww... this was nice to come home to! Pumpkin Eater didn't win, anon... and that the world is a fucked up place!? Well, isn't that kind of a given? LOL Still, it's not winning or losing that counts, but how you play the game... isn't that what they say? Thanks for the compliment, whoever you are... and congratulations to the Halloween Winners... they did good!

 

[Aurora Black]

Phenomenal!!!!!
10/28/06 By: Anonymous
You are an amazing writer and this is a fantastically original piece of work. If this doesn't win, the world is one fucked up place. It sure deserves to.
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awwww... this was nice to come home to! Pumpkin Eater didn't win, anon... and that the world is a fucked up place!? Well, isn't that kind of a given? LOL Still, it's not winning or losing that counts, but how you play the game... isn't that what they say? Thanks for the compliment, whoever you are... and congratulations to the Halloween Winners... they did good!

I was shivering the entire time I read it. And for some reason, I kept thinking about that crazy scene from Silence of the Lambs with Buffalo Bill and the chick he kept in the well.

"It puts the lotion on its skin... it puts the lotion in the basket."

 

[Selena_Kitt]

I was shivering the entire time I read it. And for some reason, I kept thinking about that crazy scene from Silence of the Lambs with Buffalo Bill and the chick he kept in the well.

"It puts the lotion on its skin... it puts the lotion in the basket."

yuh-huh... that's what I was going for... yay!

 

[S-Des]

yuh-huh... that's what I was going for... yay!

It got my vote for creepiest blow-job scene ever. Sometimes you write things that blow my mind...other times you just scare me But it was brilliant. I thought it should have been in the money.

 

[Selena_Kitt]

It got my vote for creepiest blow-job scene ever. Sometimes you write things that blow my mind...other times you just scare me But it was brilliant. I thought it should have been in the money.

it was creepy, wasn't it? I was pretty proud of that scene... isn't that sad? LOL

Thanks, S-Des

 

[Aurora Black]

Mygoosh,,
10/30/06 By: Anonymous in Singapore

I like, almost cried. You make awesome stories, continue to do so! Hey, although there were not much like. Sex scenes in it, it was AWESOME. I wouldn't mind reading it over and over again. You know, the song 'Dancing' by 'Elisa' strangely matches this story because it's slow and uhm. Yeah, slow.

TALK TOOO MEEH.

Thank you. I've never heard of that song, but I'll check it out when I can so I'll know what you mean.

 

[smy3th]

I suppose everyone but me noticed a long time ago that the word Anonymous is mis-spelled in the title of this thread, with one too many "n"s. There's a certain irony there that I can't quite put into words. Perhaps it was intentional.

 

[damppanties]

I suppose everyone but me noticed a long time ago that the word Anonymous is mis-spelled in the title of this thread, with one too many "n"s. There's a certain irony there that I can't quite put into words. Perhaps it was intentional.

Yes, well, I believe neon tried to correct it to its proper spelling of 'Annonymouse', but that didn't happen. Very unfortunate.

 

[Skip1934a]

Yes, well, I believe neon tried to correct it to its proper spelling of 'Annonymouse', but that didn't happen. Very unfortunate.

Not many use the second 'n' anymore. It's a waste of a good letter best used elsewhere.

I think the single 'n' spelling will eventually show up in dictionaries.

 

[Aurora Black]

Doesnt belong here..too good.
10/31/06 By: Anonymous in Gulf Coast, USA

You are a writer on calibur with Richard Laymon and Douglass Clegg. (if you don't know who they are, look them up...you would love them) This was a wonderful story with enough sex to *almost* qualify for literotica. truth be told, this story is WAY to good to be on an internet site. Look up the Bordrelands book series and pitch this stroy. Seriosuly.

Jesus Christ! Thank you for that. I am familiar with Douglas Clegg, so I am deeply flattered by the comparison. Thanks again.

 

[Aurora Black]

Nice Anon strikes again!

Truly a great story
11/02/06 By: Anonymous in us

i thought it was one of the best stories i have ever read. i was literally hanging on every word. you should try to get it made into a movie i know alot of people would love it. keep up the good work.

...
11/01/06 By: Anonymous in UK

I have tears streaming down my face...

It is rare that I cry when I read stories...

This was exceptional.


This message contains feedback for: Aurora Black
About the submission: Bitter Harvest
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

Awesome, riveting story. Great job and congrats!
A.H.

Thank you all.

 

[Aurora Black]

This message contains feedback for: Aurora Black
About the submission: The Last Dance Ch. 02
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

A well-written story. How about continuing it? - A restpectful reader

Seriously? I thought that series was pure shit. I did write it in high school, after all.

I'll consider rewriting the previous chapters and continuing the series if I have a free moment from the writing/publishing madness.

 

[Boxlicker101]

Here is a feedback I just received on "Cindy Lou Meets the Vampire".

Disgusting.
11/02/06 By: Anonymous in USA
degradation express - Boo!

Well, Anon, you know, this paragraph was at the start of the story:


CAUTION: This story is about a man having sex with a woman, including performing oral sex, while she is in her period. If you think this is gross and disgusting and the idea bothers you, you probably shouldn’t read it.

 

[MissBri]

 

[Aurora Black]

Wow
11/06/06 By: Anonymous in US

My heart hurts and I cried my eyes out. Fantastic story.


Amazing
11/05/06 By: Anonymous in USA

I've never loved a story here so much that I'd leave a comment, but this one was absolutely amazing. It made me cry, smile, and think about the one I love more than anything in this world. This is a truly amazing and great story, and deserves appreciation and notice.

Thank you both very much.

 

[rachlou]

This message contains feedback for: rachlou
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

You could place a better picture in profile ... you might get more attention and higher scores on your writting.

Last time i checked, i wasn't on here looking for dates, so what the fuck has my appearance got to do with my writing??

Oh yeah, what happens if i'm dead ugly - would you vote me a 1?

Ps. see below - thats me and the gardener - you like?

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

no like
11/08/06 By: Anonymous
you no rite good. bery bad then no lik senta clas

No fucking wonder your PC is anonymous

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

This ain't my day
This on "Harry Dick: Halloween Caper"

11/08/06 By: Anonymous

Learn to spel an I don't mene the words that are supposed to be mispelled

My first reaction is LEARN TO FUCKING READ. I just ran that through two different spell checks again. Other than those words that are written in vinacular (do you know what that word means?) with in conversation, there are no misspellings.

I would suggest you take your own advice and use your spell check in your stupid posts from now on.

Henceforth, read someone elses stories and leave mine the hell alone. And thanks for the "1 Bomb", fuckwad!

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

This on Fanela's Revenge

How appropriate!!
11/08/06 By: Anonymous in USA
Why did Santa drop his pants in Times Square?
Because the Fat Man was looking for a Hoe' Hoe' Hoe'!!! [/i]

LMFAO

 

[ungenderless]

no like
11/08/06 By: Anonymous
you no rite good. bery bad then no lik senta clas

Yeah, I saw that one and was like "wtf? Are you, like, 4 years old? Or are you a grown adult with writing skills like that? And who the fuck is senta clas?"

Oh, and thank you, oh anonymous 1-bomber, for punshing me for one of your hallucinations. My story IS caterogirzed as Lesbian Sex you idiot. Lay off the crack.