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[TxRad]

*sigh*

Great way to start the day off...

to make it all better....

Maybe he wants you to move up to the bra and panties drawer.....

 

[TxRad]

*sigh*

Great way to start the day off...

to make it all better....

Maybe he wants you to move up to the bra and panties drawer.....

 

[TxRad]

Since I seemed to have double posted.... i think I'll have another cup of coffee....


So i'll just wave at anoymouse and the trolls.........

(Now where did I put that one finger salute Icon)

 

[Selena_Kitt]

*sigh*

Great way to start the day off...

Feh!!!! I can never get enough socks!!

I'd say he can shove socks up his butt... but that would be cruel to the socks!

 

[Guest]

 

[rachlou]

*sigh*

Great way to start the day off...

 

[geronimo_appleby]

well, i'm doing okay for a change:

breathtaking
09/05/06 by Anonymous in USA
absolutely amazing in every respect.....masterful doesn't do it justice.....and Chapter 5? all three....

 

[CrimsonMaiden]

It seems the contest troll decided to drop in and leave a venomous pc on my newest story, The Cliff (which is not a contest story). Bye troll comment! Should've stuck to comments about the story and not delved into personal attacks!

 

[rgraham666]

It seems the contest troll decided to drop in and leave a venomous pc on my newest story, The Cliff (which is not a contest story). Bye troll comment! Should've stuck to comments about the story and not delved into personal attacks!

Good for you, Crim.

 

[Aurora Black]

This was so great that I just had to post it here as well as in "Nicest Feedback."

On Bitter Harvest:

A page turner
10/19/06 By: Anonymous in USA

You have the gift of making the reader eager to find out what happens next. I imagine this is what they call "pacing." It's a great skill and surely enhances your chances of becoming a published author.

Your sex scenes were steamy and full of passion and feeling without being too explicit, which might be a distraction in this kind of story. All in all, a fine read, and a genuine contender in the contest. Congratulations.

Sometimes Anon is really nice. Thank you so much.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

This PC was posted today in Trick or Tryst:Thing Under The Bed

Fantastic!
10/19/06 By: Anonymous in USA
That was fantastic! You're a very talented writer. Keep 'em...uhhh..cummin! teehee

I'm all smiles

 

[Skip1934a]

This was so great that I just had to post it here as well as in "Nicest Feedback."

On Bitter Harvest:



Sometimes Anon is really nice. Thank you so much.

Hi, 'Rora. Nice to see you posting again. Is 20 November still the release date for your ebook?

Anon even said something to encourage me when commenting on the final chapters of my story. Go back a few days on this thread and read it. You'll need some peanut butter crackers in your mouth to keep from laughing, though.

 

[rgraham666]

Snicker.

About the submission: Fatima
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

Great writing, but lame background story. I felt like I was reading the terrors of a highschooler rather than an adult woman & man. You have such a wonderful writing style, though. I really enjoyed reading it, as long as I skipped the high school drama.

 

[Aurora Black]

This story is well written and has a strong human touch. It shows a warmth expressed by Skip toward Sandy. The story might be continued if "Skip" so wished. Perhaps having Sandy become a very relgious person (she's already a loving person); perhaps even becoming a nun. As a nun, she could helping other souls in need of guidance.

Nicely done
RAG

But but but... it's Loving Wives!

Yes, Nov. 20th is the date. It's a done deal.

 

[Skip1934a]

But but but... it's Loving Wives!

Yes, Nov. 20th is the date. It's a done deal.

LOL, yeah, it's Loving Wives. Did I screw up the category with my story?

 

[Skip1934a]

This Is A Very Good Story!
10/20/06 By: Anonymous in USA
Although I didn't expect anything special when I started reading your story. I must say that I was both surprised and pleased at the way you developed and ended it.

The facts are that the comments you have received is a statament,at least in my mind, of your strength in developing a couple of very human characters.

Keep writing!

John

Anonymous in USA, John - thank you for your encouraging comments. I did have in mind developing believable characters. I think I did that for Skip. Sandy? The jury is still out on her. If I ever add to the story I will probably develop her a bit more.

 

[FallingToFly]

This Is A Very Good Story!
10/20/06 By: Anonymous in USA
Although I didn't expect anything special when I started reading your story. I must say that I was both surprised and pleased at the way you developed and ended it.

The facts are that the comments you have received is a statament,at least in my mind, of your strength in developing a couple of very human characters.

Keep writing!

John

Anonymous in USA, John - thank you for your encouraging comments. I did have in mind developing believable characters. I think I did that for Skip. Sandy? The jury is still out on her. If I ever add to the story I will probably develop her a bit more.

Coolness.

 

[janiexx]

Comments like this would once have made me very upset...

what husband,she treat him like she just new him
10/21/06 By: Anonymous in usa
a closet whore,writer trying to make her look like hubby at wrong.all these feeling for every man showed up.she a tramp and hubby can do better.she feel this and she feel that,fuck what she feel.let stupid bitch fuck somebody else life up,she never be happy whoever she fucking.

But this just made me laugh...

And what's more it's going to get worse! Can't wait to see the comments for Chapter 8!

janiexx

 

[Aurora Black]

On Bitter Harvest:

Horrific story!
10/20/06 By: Anonymous in USA

You had me spellbound reading this. Good luck with it!

Thank you.

 

[Boxlicker101]

Comments like this would once have made me very upset...

Quote:
what husband,she treat him like she just new him
10/21/06 By: Anonymous in usa
a closet whore,writer trying to make her look like hubby at wrong.all these feeling for every man showed up.she a tramp and hubby can do better.she feel this and she feel that,fuck what she feel.let stupid bitch fuck somebody else life up,she never be happy whoever she fucking.


But this just made me laugh...

And what's more it's going to get worse! Can't wait to see the comments for Chapter 8!

janiexx

Comments like that have always made me laugh. I read them and say "Here is this guy, illiterate, at least in English, and he is telling me how to write.

 

[Darkniciad]

Comments like this would once have made me very upset...

Quote:
what husband,she treat him like she just new him
10/21/06 By: Anonymous in usa
a closet whore,writer trying to make her look like hubby at wrong.all these feeling for every man showed up.she a tramp and hubby can do better.she feel this and she feel that,fuck what she feel.let stupid bitch fuck somebody else life up,she never be happy whoever she fucking.

But this just made me laugh...

And what's more it's going to get worse! Can't wait to see the comments for Chapter 8!

janiexx

Just like I said in the other thread, having a knuckle-dragger who can't manage anything resembling simple sentence structure say they don't like your story (I think that's what Anonymous Og here is grunting, isn't it?) is more of a compliment than criticism *chuckle*

 

[Guest]

*****

 

[Aurora Black]

On Bitter Harvest:

huh?
10/22/06 By: Anonymous in USA

What is the big fuss about this story? You could have written this from formula and probably did. Lame.

Thank you so much for the profound wisdom. You can go back to jacking off in your mommy's basement now. Buh-bye!

 

[AchtungNight]

Aurora- Obviously someone has their head in their ass. That story was too good to have come from formula. It goes right along with Stephen King's Christine, Christine Morgan's Black Roses, Wes Craven's Red Eye, Joseph Conrad's Heart of Darkness, and L Ron Hubbard's Fear for being among my favorite horror stories of all time.